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My First Production: Reverie [Demo]

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IDIOT
Sharjil
wUb
Demonic
F.L.O.
TheRiddler
AKProductions
tanzz.oma
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1My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:50 am

tanzz.oma

tanzz.oma
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

Yeah, well, check it out.

Download:
Click Here.

2My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:14 am

AKProductions


Divine Poster
Divine Poster

not bad at all for ur first beat..keep it up dude! i can give u technical comments but i get real harsh when i'm technical lol. but regardless it's good..jst keep doing it and u'll get better iA.

https://www.youtube.com/akproductions01

3My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:24 am

tanzz.oma

tanzz.oma
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

Get harsh, no problem. As long as, it's helpful.

4My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:48 am

TheRiddler

TheRiddler
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

ok now i donno much abt makin beats bt my honest opinion wud b... im surprised at how gud dat sounded considerin dat itz ur 1st beat... i lyk dis kinda rnb-ish stuff... sum bass notes wudve been nice on da loops and maybe sum smooth kicks wid da bass... keep up da gud work man...

5My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:48 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

u need sum constant kicks...good melodies tho

6My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:46 pm

tanzz.oma

tanzz.oma
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

I did use a constant kick, but, it was "light". You'll feel it on the sub-woofer. And, thanx for the reply guy(s). FL is awesome. I'll put my max effort on my future one(s), that's when I'll need the feedback the most.

7My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:01 am

AKProductions


Divine Poster
Divine Poster

main problem: beat sounds linear. no vertical depth. so work on effects. panning/freq placement. dont overdo it.

claps were overused. try to make a solid drumline..which was my major prob for a LOONG time until flo started commented "no drumline" in every single of my beat lol. no layerings/mixing is there. arrangement and progressions r weak too. u cud try to drop the beat too. check out this beat of mine and see how many times i sorta changed stuff of and things like that...

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8239271

https://www.youtube.com/akproductions01

8My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:57 pm

tanzz.oma

tanzz.oma
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

That's what I'm talking about. Thanx.
I'll look into this again when I make the next one.

9My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:03 am

AKProductions


Divine Poster
Divine Poster

yep np man! gl on ur next beat. jst mssg me if u need any help/suggestions. i don't claim to be all that good or anything (unfortunately most ppl in this site thinks i'm a fake wannabe producer...which i prolly am but i never show off for that) but i can lend u couple of suggestions here and there.

https://www.youtube.com/akproductions01

10My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:37 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

dont take advice from AK the boy sux! LOL

11My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:39 am

Demonic

Demonic
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

AK sux so bad.....nah man...who m i kiddin...dat guy is awesum....jst chked out his beats.....but dat doznt stop him frm bein a complete "blowjob"....lol.....dat doznt make sense...but sum kid on DR called me dat.......

12My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:46 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

stole it from russel peters da cunt

13My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:49 am

Demonic

Demonic
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

who u callin a cunt ? My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Icon_evil

14My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:50 am

AKProductions


Divine Poster
Divine Poster

whereever i see FLO commenting...Demonic is right behind...tomgo bhetor bepar ta ki? we can help u guys and buy u a bigger closet so dont worry abt coming out of it yet....lol.

https://www.youtube.com/akproductions01

15My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:07 am

TheRiddler

TheRiddler
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

lol fuck man ak stole ma words

16My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:20 pm

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

wherevers AK thers Riddler....i dont even wana kno wtf u 2 hairy bastards are getting up2 cos thats gona scar my life forever..

17My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:49 pm

Demonic

Demonic
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

AKProductions wrote:whereever i see FLO commenting...Demonic is right behind...tomgo bhetor bepar ta ki? we can help u guys and buy u a bigger closet so dont worry abt coming out of it yet....lol.

tha fuck!!! My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Icon_eek

18My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:31 pm

wUb

wUb
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

LMFAO! peeing on hairy people is the SHIT! =D

19My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:30 am

Sharjil

Sharjil
DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

AK thinks hes the shit,
he pisses me so off by acting like a god of knowledge.

http://wordsworth.4shared.com

20My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:06 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

man ur 14 get outa here..

21My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:36 am

TheRiddler

TheRiddler
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

lol flo cmon giv da guy a break lol

22My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:59 am

AKProductions


Divine Poster
Divine Poster

it's amazing/creepy/wierd or whichever word is applicable for how i started to hv haters without having neither made any good/hit tracks nor as friday wud say "Old MC Sam" style stuff lol. Sharjil..fyi....i AM the god of knowledge so pleas keep hatin' on me. Smile

https://www.youtube.com/akproductions01

23My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:49 am

TheRiddler

TheRiddler
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

den how come ur G for God ain capitalised lol

24My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:53 am

IDIOT

IDIOT
Newbie Rhymer
Newbie Rhymer

AKProductions wrote:it's amazing/creepy/wierd or whichever word is applicable for how i started to hv haters without having neither made any good/hit tracks nor as friday wud say "Old MC Sam" style stuff lol. Sharjil...if u didn't know..i AM the god of knowledge.


How dare you talk bowt sam,u aint even near his level..nor even mine.

Yo AK your rap is shit i rap pee,i am a wacker emcee\Cuz even your shit smells better than me Cool

25My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Empty Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:55 am

AKProductions


Divine Poster
Divine Poster

IDIOT wrote:
AKProductions wrote:it's amazing/creepy/wierd or whichever word is applicable for how i started to hv haters without having neither made any good/hit tracks nor as friday wud say "Old MC Sam" style stuff lol. Sharjil...if u didn't know..i AM the god of knowledge.


How dare you talk bowt sam,u aint even near his level..nor even mine.

Yo AK your rap is shit i rap pee,i am a wacker emcee\Cuz even your shit smells better than me Cool

aww so much love and hate for me. keep it up guys! i feel really touched. Very Happy

https://www.youtube.com/akproductions01

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