BangstaZ - Shake that thing

Heya Trraptorr in here. This is the first track from our, BangstaZ's mixtape, which will be dropping soon hopefully. The track is by One Step & me and its named Shake that thang. Hear it and please give us feedback. We are new and we need your comments. Thanks man peace.

Heres the link :

http://www.sendspace.com/file/bsm4z7

lol it sounz lyk a retarted copy of da original song....i wudn put sumtin lyk dis on a mixtape..u gota be more original lyrikalli n flow wise...

i downloaded it only because you wanted some feed so here it goes... this track is pretty much disastrous. bad delivery, bad mixing and a very bad topic... its jus the same old bullcrap partying shit over and over again. keep ur shit original! it doesn take much effort to come up with good/original ideas. remember that and hopefully it'll help u n ur crew to change the lane. 1

its a party track for sho
ma advices wud be:
dont include mainstream artists like u did here.. come up wit ur own hook
work on ur delivery... practise a few times before u record.. n mode their lyrics will improve wit time... its one of their firsts tracks.. so props on dat coz my first track was a fucckin disaster lol
keep doin ur thang.. be motivated. u'll improve wit time
`1

ye ye definitely. keep doin ur thang bangstaz

Thanks guys i really see the point. It really does sounds like a stupid copy of the original one lol, personally the original one sounds alot better hmm. Well we will try to change it. Making a different lyrics and stuffs wasnt a problem, but we were scared that it would be hard to match it. We really had massive problem matching the flow with the beat. It was like a nightmare lol.
And thank you Skib bro you really give us hope ^.^ i hope we will do better. Bang Bang Bang lol sometimes its just too much fun man, working with friends making raps hehe i just love it.

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