ei nice battlin AL1F! lets see how the results pop out to look like!
fair game!
fair game!
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51 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:20 am
B' monkey
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52 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:31 am
AL1F
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Yeah man I really started working hard after I lost ma first battle.Yo nice to u , u already digged one vote homes. 
53 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:32 am
AL1F
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B-monkey 1 - AL1F 0
54 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:36 am
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yo alif,
afte dat boy,
i am dissapionted....
IMPROVE
afte dat boy,
i am dissapionted....
IMPROVE
55 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:44 am
AL1F
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Hey homes didn't I improved a little bit. 
56 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:08 am
Sharjil
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no offence,
ma vota goes to B'MONKEY
ma vota goes to B'MONKEY
57 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:43 am
Mr. MR
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alif, that was some serious improvement..
but the vote goes to b monkey here as well....
one other area of improvement you could look to make is in the kinds of disses and punchlines you drop...in the complexity of your rhyme structure...rhyming bee and pee is very elementary...try using multiple-syllable rhymes
(i.e. stings like a bee...swings like ali...things that i see...inside of me, etc.)
but hey, improvement is improvement, so much props to you bro.
but the vote goes to b monkey here as well....
one other area of improvement you could look to make is in the kinds of disses and punchlines you drop...in the complexity of your rhyme structure...rhyming bee and pee is very elementary...try using multiple-syllable rhymes
(i.e. stings like a bee...swings like ali...things that i see...inside of me, etc.)
but hey, improvement is improvement, so much props to you bro.
58 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:48 am
B' monkey
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3-0 KO..
looks like i got this one bruh!
good battle
looks like i got this one bruh!
good battle
59 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:48 am
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Thankx guys . Bt I'm not gonna battle until I seriously improved man. B-monkey thanks for giving me a chance bro,atleast I improved little bit.
Hey Mr.MR thankx bro for ur advise, nd glad dat u voted .
Hey Mr.MR thankx bro for ur advise, nd glad dat u voted .
60 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 5:10 am
B' monkey
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no problemo dawg...
61 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:09 pm
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omg iz it d B MONKEY dawg... nyc rhymin..
muh vote goez 2 ya fo sure
muh vote goez 2 ya fo sure
62 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:29 pm
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haha...enuff wid all ov u guyz beefin on alif..
muh vote goez 2 fbz but yea alif... gotta work on dat vocab thingy..hehe
but u sound gud specially wen u r up wid sumthin in bangla..
nwyz
peace..
muh vote goez 2 fbz but yea alif... gotta work on dat vocab thingy..hehe
but u sound gud specially wen u r up wid sumthin in bangla..
nwyz
peace..
63 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 7:09 pm
B' monkey
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ei man..
thanx for that..
but fBz and I already won this!!
thanx for that..
but fBz and I already won this!!
64 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 7:15 pm
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Thankx a1mz .
65 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 12, 2008 7:22 pm
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ohh..seemz lyk um kinda late ..eheh
yea..itz been kinda a month or so since i've not been goin onlyn.. so dayumm missd sum hot stuff..
nwyz.. peepz... peace nd njoy
yea..itz been kinda a month or so since i've not been goin onlyn.. so dayumm missd sum hot stuff..
nwyz.. peepz... peace nd njoy
66 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:42 pm
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Hey guys I will be off for some days . Nd Tukz gud luck for ur tourn. nd after I return we will have a battle. OK.
67 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:31 am
tukZ
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yehh sure
68 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:08 am
F.L.O.
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ur bitch rat
i hav a gat
wit a hat
lookin lyk a mat
wats up wit dat
beat dat suckaz =P
i hav a gat
wit a hat
lookin lyk a mat
wats up wit dat
beat dat suckaz =P
69 Re: Battle in HELL wit AL1F Tue Jul 22, 2008 11:49 pm
AL1F
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Hahaha nice nice ....let me try
I'll bury u in sand
Can't get ur gat ?
Cuz its stuck in ur underpant.
I'm just new in hood
Don't have da mood 2 make ya fool
Hahaha just for fun ...no offence.
And Tukz apu I'm back let battle OK...??
I'll bury u in sand
Can't get ur gat ?
Cuz its stuck in ur underpant.
I'm just new in hood
Don't have da mood 2 make ya fool
Hahaha just for fun ...no offence.
And Tukz apu I'm back let battle OK...??
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