...:::>[fBz]<--------v/s-------->[Bangey]<:::...

rules: 10 bars
u go first!

actually, i challenged u, so imma go first!

bengey?! wait, aint that a pain relieving oinment?/
dawg, ur named urself all wrong, en now u'll get dis-apointment!//[1]
u should've baught one o' that, cuz now u will be in pain!/
all i'll leave behind are cells, with no plasma membrane!//[2]
i aint no gangsta, no drug dealer, no i dont sell cocane,/
yet um dangerous, en once um done, nothing of u will remain!//[3]
its like hitting u with a truck, no, i'd say with a train!/
u'll be running like a fugitive, ur ass burning in flame!//[4]
U cant beat me, im a supa emcee,/
im literally-lyrically/ better then you'll ever be!//[5]
I can taste my win and can see your defeat/
i eat-meat/ like you for breakfast and to me, breakfast is a treat//[6]
bengey you hoe/, ur on my nuts, bitch y don u let-go/ [hoe- whore]
in this battle between me en u, u'll win fo' sure!/ "heck-NO"!//[7] [sure to be pronounces like "sho"]
u blabber all the time, u talk bout' flow!?/
now show/ watchu got in paper, stop watching dem damn porno!//[8]
a'ite man, imma stop, u gotta work with grameen!/ [he told me that online, minutes before my post]
go do ur work, never again bitch, or i'll hit u rite outta the screen!//[9] [monitor screen]
just stay put en post ur shyte, dont just run AWAY!/
killing u was fun,/ but fuck um done/ we shall battle AGAIN!//[10]

words in [] are just to xplain the real text and is not to be read during the original text!

Better than I expected bee...

No offence, etc.

F-B-Z As far as i can see your a wannabe-me,
Something you'l never be, coz the apple's fallen too far from the tree*
Yea thats right, im your dad,
It kinda makes me sad; that i produced a fucker,
What makes things worse is your a cocksuker,
Now look here son, your an embarassment to me,
An embarassment to your mum who i fucked for free
And now you claim-to-be a nigga who got fame-for-free
Well your 15 minutes is over bitch, don't blame-it on-me
I'll blow you up while you blow on me,
My lyrics dope, yours sleazy..Lemme see...
....F for Fuck...B for Boys...Z for Zeal*
Seal you up and eat you like chinese meal
Fucking Boys Zealously, thats your deal
Sorta like MJ* but without the hits,
With the saggy tits and with the shits,
I thought change for good* was really true,
But a bitch is a bitch just like you,
And just like a leopard you don't change your spots,
And you've been pwned boy wether you like it or not

*The apple has fallen far from the tree is usually a term used to suggest that someones son or daughter is nothing like the parent, usually much worse in intellect, behaviour, etc.
Zeal-Passion
MJ-Michael Jackson
Change for Good-Charity Program helping people help the poor

I went a little over but certain sentences couldve been joined.

a'ite, vote ladies en gentlemen!

fBz gets my vote.

it was just too damn funny en offensive.

en Bengey.. this line
"I'll blow you up while you blow on me,"
does that mean you want fBz blowin' on your cock?
i thought about this shit.. nothin' else makes sense.. this is the ONLY shit that comes to mind... en it's weird..
haha

en fBz... it's Bengay.. the ointment.

Thats cool if thats your opinion. And its Bangey btw. as in Bangladesh..Bang...ey..got it?
I would prefer it if you used the voting system for the competition though. As in Flow, Multies, Personels, etc.
Peace

nope.
won't use it.
cuz it's unanimous from me.
fBz wins it

Bangey, welcome ta DR! listen, bout' the voting system, its not a necessary, that u vot according to RAF's tourney rules. for ordinary battles, its okay if u vote just by mentioning the name and explaining why. i'd say it was one hell of a battle, but i'd go with fBz
your lines where good, but needs more "maturity", na' mean?

Bengey bruh, welcome!
i am going for fBz! he had the flow and his stuff made sense! Bengey was okay, had a few lines, but most o' his shit was all random! y wud u be his dad? a'ite never mind! better luck next tym bruh!

Thats 3 zip then FBZ, nice one.

Ya aims u r rite....dis is no tournament ! we gona vote da one who entertain us here....we dont wana judge on multies & all dose blah blah !


FBZ wtf maan,were do u get those sik graphics fmm...u doin great in designing ur avator ! awesome job !


And bangey,welcome to DR !


Both were good,and bangey u doin great in ur first battle.

my vote goes to FBZ,i find his one entertainin me.

And bangey ur lines r great,u doin great.

Personal: Bangey

creativity: FRB

Flow : Bot

Multies: I hate dis,i dont judge my multies.

Overall: FRB,interesting !! Bangey u r great too.It was confusing to judge u both

FRB??...haha, u always do that friday! get names wrong..lol!
its fBz!
haha...
en yeh..
wat bout ur battle wid aimz??
how come u aint replying?

Bangey wrote:Thats 3 zip then FBZ, nice one.

i gess i was wrong, i won..

Fr!daY wrote:FBZ wtf maan,were do u get those sik graphics fmm...u doin great in designing ur avator ! awesome job !

i make em

ps. no photoshop used!

Dude i will drop my verses against aim...im too busy,runin out of rhymes !! ok

I needa refresh my head...so if u wana c my battle pls wait.or else just declaring Aimzs as da winner.

Bro im just refresing my mind..ill drop within next 2 days.

a'ite, i'll wait..
haha, its just that amz cant wait!

I JUST LUV FBZ'S EDITED AVY'S !!!!
THIS GUY SHUD B GIVEN AN AWARD FO THT!!

u think? haha, i appreciate!

hmm... fridayz ryt.
nyc graphix ....
i lyk it...

den how diju make it btw?

haha...
nah itz nutthin lyk dat..
um cool wid it..
friday...take az much tym u want..
hehe..
itz ol fyn..

>=a1mZ=< wrote:hmm... fridayz ryt.
nyc graphix ....
i lyk it...

den how diju make it btw?

wat shud i say??...
um talented!
lmao!

its just pain en picasa magic!

Aimz i had posted my rhmes last day...check it