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fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA

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AL1F
Bangey
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1fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:36 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

ei man...
listen...
um making it 10 bars...
um fucken out o' my house since morning..
but i had to post this shit today..lol..
as i told u i wud..
just not enuf tym...
so 10 bars..
here goes Arrow

2fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:39 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

Little kids CONGREGATING/
Spitting out "lyrics" that're just NAUSEATING// [1]
LIL BILL*, Imma make a hole in yo’ skull, with me lyrical DRILL/
I THRILL, but unlike u, I do not STEAL,// [2]
No/ I aint [P][R][O]**/ I aint no HOE,/
Who don’t get no customer, so goes fo’ a GIGOLO***/ /[3]
Imma paint U-YO/, from ya head to TOE,/
With yo’own/ blood, drippin all over the ‘FLO-OR/ /[4]
Imma make ya words look all BOZO****/, uHOMO/
If I be a pterodactyl*****, then u be like some DODO******// [5]
GO GO!/ not u! its ur mom mistaking ma nuts fo a DILDO*******/
BITCH, u live in the STREETS, balance ur BEATS, so just go-on en blow-on some HOBO********// [6]
I can't believe all the SMACK TALKING/
I bet the only crime any of you got caught with is JAY WALKING*********// [7]
But that's not your fault, you just can't read SIGNS/
Like the one saying "STFU" on yo’ screen in big black letters and LINES// [8]
U go around rikshaws yo, while I burn wid my SKYLINES**********/
Haha…imma hit u with me bumper, “TUNERS on NNA’s head!”-that’ll be tomorrow’s HEADLINES// [9]
I aint no gangsta, I don roll wid no NINES***********,/
Yet Im a danger to u, fuck, I won this shit, fuck neone who DECLINES!//





------------------------------------------------------------------------------

*some dumb character from a kid’s show
**a rapper at deshirhymes who got caughht biting
***male whore
****fool
*****some big bird dinosaur
******dumb little extinct bird
*******a sex toy for women
********homeless guy who wanders around
*********a stupid crime for crossing the street without a sign [getting caught for that is just stupid]
**********NISSAN SKYLINE
***********9mm gun



Last edited by fBz on Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:05 am; edited 1 time in total

3fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:42 pm

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

OMG NNA IS HERE


DIS IS HORROR N MORE WORK FOR ME...NNA MAN ONLY 1 BATTLE A WEEK FOR U OKAY..NOT MORE DEN 1 BATTLE A WEEEK..DIS NIGGA BE BATTLIN ERE1

4fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:49 pm

Bangey

Bangey
Moderator
Moderator

Who is NnA? And fbz, are you even sure he's accepted the challenge? And why only 1 battle a week?

5fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:56 pm

AL1F

AL1F
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

Nna WHO is IT.........F.L.o why u are sounding like...........IS it SHE or HE. scratch

6fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:04 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

dude Nna is a nightmare lol...on dat facebook group dat kid had ly 10 battles a day...n da only thing u cud see on ur wall was...VOTE FOR MY BATTLE...



NIGHTMAREE





NIGHTMAREE!!!!

7fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:06 am

AL1F

AL1F
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

HE naki SHE. Cooooolloooool ........cant wait.

8fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:12 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

he..

9fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:34 am

>=a1mZ=<

>=a1mZ=<
DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

hehe...hu is dis nNa?

http://www.djaimz.tk

10fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:55 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

Bangey wrote:Who is NnA? And fbz, are you even sure he's accepted the challenge? And why only 1 battle a week?

lol..
i asked em on fb!..
haha
yeh..
some1 told me before! lol! lmfsao..
hah
he battles a lot!
i gess thats y once a week..
i wonder when he'll log in...

11fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:57 am

Bangey

Bangey
Moderator
Moderator

You didn't have to rush to post your verse man. You could have spent more time working on it. I mean if this guy battles that much he's bound to be quite good.

12fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:13 am

AL1F

AL1F
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

Its would...... be a hard .........one for ya.... to snatch.

13fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:03 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

yeh..
i gess..
but fuck..
im just waitng..
i thot it'd be over by now..lol..
i just got baq home..
en he din even show..
shit!...lol..
fuck it..
let em do his magic..
lets see wheather them battlin actually helps or not!
lol

14fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:16 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

Bangey wrote:You didn't have to rush to post your verse man. You could have spent more time working on it. I mean if this guy battles that much he's bound to be quite good.

lmao..
i din noe i wud come baq home today..
en i told em i wud post my shit by today..
if i din..
he'd think i pussied...lol
but yo..
what harm?..
let's just wait shall we?

15fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:18 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

lol NNA is lyk da first of da month erer1s waitin on dat dude..hehe =P....

16fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:19 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

BUT FBZ 1 thing u shud do is take PRO out of ur text hehe i gess its olddd =P...

17fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:30 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

lmao...
i gess this'll be the last time i do it the...
but yo, um sure PRO wont take no hard feelings... i mean, he noe the history, lol, en if he did stop all that, en is OK to admit what he did, he'll b cool with it...
but haha, i wont do it no more..
last tym!

18fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:59 pm

[P][R][O]

[P][R][O]
Moderator
Moderator

no hard feelings yw:P
bt ppl...BEWARE OF NnA..LOL!!!
bt he's doin a gud job tht's practisin !!

http://pro27.4shared.com

19fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:50 pm

En3NaY

En3NaY
DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

ahh..sorry ppl_ been quite bz latley .. heres ma verse..and i hav fever- not much thou

rap_NnA


AYO FBZ IMA STOP SHOWS IN MTV N ZEE
I HIRE UR BITCH MRE DEN U TRAVELL IN TAXI//


u love the cock, ur extremely fukin gay
im risin in this rap business its soon 2 b my big pay day//


u dont wana fuk with me coz u kno ima star, 
ur jus tha lil bitch who evry1 wants 2 run ova with their car//


i dont giv a fuk about commitin crimes, 
ud shit urself if a cop saw u chekin out other guys behinds,//
 
a tree, went at it hard, strait in no vass coz ur a sick fukin retard, fukin tub of lard,
i saw u pik up 20 guys in 2 hours on Hollywood boulevard,//


You almost made me laugh, you’re so pathetic, 
you probally suck more dick than a hooker on credit//


like the men that pay big bucks and regret it, 
the time you gave me head and got cum shot synthetic,//


homie ur rhymes make no sense, 
u sound like a bitch version of 50 cent//


put oil on yo henges you’re finished, 
my 6 lines make you deminished!!//


purely hated coz of ur lame rhymes, 
2moro ill giv u a look at the face of my nines//


fuk u nigga who u think u are? 
tryin 2 battle evry1 while ur wearin ur new bra,//


u want me 2 bust sum, ill show u how its dun, fukin bum, ur mum has an ass as round as a plum, 
she swallows numerous loads of nigga cum, washes it down with //


a bottle of rum, shes an ugly fuk and shes dum
I FUKD UR SISTER ALSO N MADE HER NUMB//


yo sista named Emily, ur a sick fukin hippy, u fuked a monkey, drank its pee, drilled a hole in a tree,
 went at it hard, strait in no vass coz ur a sick fukin retard, fukin tub//


im suprised i rote that much but i guess its coz i hate u thats it, 
i can fuk u up netime i decide 2 spit,//


u cant freestyle 4 shit, 
and i think thas about it, its like that bitch!//
p3ace! 1
V

20fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:11 pm

Bangey

Bangey
Moderator
Moderator

Ohh man. Thats quite a decent verse NnA. Although some of NnA's verse didn't make sense, i think his verse was much more entertaining. And definately had harder punches. Yo fbz, you gonna have to hit much harder than that. And mentioning the PRO thing again makes it unoriginal. You lost points on that.

Imma go with NnA!
Peace, no offence or anything fbz, sorry man.

21fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:18 pm

AL1F

AL1F
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

Flow : NnA
Creativity : NnA ( Fbz urs one was much complex)
Punches : NnA (homie ur rhymes make no sense, u sound like a bitch version of 50 cent liked it )
Wordplay : Fbz
Multies : Even today I dont understand wat it is ( so multies I'm gonna leave it behind)

Overall : NnA gets ma vote.......good job....n Fbz.....I think ur winning streak ....will come to an end here.
PEACE.

22fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:19 pm

AL1F

AL1F
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

Can somebody make me understand wats multies are ...after the voting. scratch

23fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:25 pm

En3NaY

En3NaY
DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

F.L.O. wrote:OMG NNA IS HERE


DIS IS HORROR N MORE WORK FOR ME...NNA MAN ONLY 1 BATTLE A WEEK FOR U OKAY..NOT MORE DEN 1 BATTLE A WEEEK..DIS NIGGA BE BATTLIN ERE1

ryt- i'ma be outta hea afta this battle .. not to worry

24fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:27 pm

Bangey

Bangey
Moderator
Moderator

Hey Alif, as for your question i don't think anyone explains a multi better than DJ RAF himself, read below.

DJ R@F's explanation
Ok.. I need to point out something.. I bet if I asked everyone what a multi was, 45% of the people would get it wrong and 45% just straight up wouldn't know.. and those numbers aren't good since it's a major voting category. A multi is multiple syllable rhyming within the same line. For instance:
The best-ya-not so I'll leave ya rest-to-rot/He rhymes 'Old Fashioned' like Wendy's rest-au-rant//
There is a multi in the first line with best-ya-not and rest-to-rot, but there is not multi in the second line. In an example here:
You're dead so I'm a leave you rest to rot/ Face it in this game, the best-ya-not//
There is no multi, because the rhyming isn't on the same line.. make sense?

And hey NnA? what you mean man? Don't be like that!

25fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Empty Re: fBZ>>>--<<vs>>--<<<NnA Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:42 pm

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DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

so itz Fbz 0-2 Nna...
one more needed...

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