Silent Killer-Life [Demo]

Hey ssup Ppl this is my first track....
its called life and hope every 1 one will enjoy....
Many many thanks to all the bd hiphop rappers and all the members of BDBOYZ crew for helping me out...

http://www.4shared.com/file/60414450/c4782b9a/Silent_Killer-Life_Demo.html

Enjoy the demo track....
more coming soon!
peace

No FEEDSSSSS....
Cumon FEDDSSS PLSSSS

bro is da story of ur song true ???
gotta work on ur ENGLISH a lil....flow to majhe majhe iktu prob hochilo....n e way...its juss ur frst trak....

na not a real story
ney ways thanks

well......ur flow wasnt flowing tat well.....and it felt like u werent feeling the words urself....but nice work .....its jst the 1st time.......keep on practising

peace

good first try.... lyrics r very nice.......if you can expand on these ideas and rap about them....that would be nice

i agree wit Jibon.. but he must add complexities to em... n work on ur delivery..

thankx every one for da advice......
Currently workin on ma next track so i trying ma best to make it sum real shit....
Thankx again....
Peace