Earnest Melody

This was something I cooked up at my boys place. It was totally spontaneous. We just picked out a beat done by his cousin and I gave an attempt on it.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.


There was a slight mistake at the end where the word "moon" is mentioned twice.

Never got to fix it, but it should be:

I wanna sing songs to you in the midnight blue
And then make love to you under that midnight moon



http://www.sendspace.com/file/580fvc

well honestly....da beat was cool...but overall trak SUKD....no offence bro....buh dats how i feel

cool track...but your flow needs a bit of touching up...it almost felt like you were spitting at a different tempo than the beat.

that said, your overall mic presence is really good, bro. like there's actual emotion behind the delivery. that's a +1 right there.

keep at it bro!

man that beat is really cool
starting was a bit shaky but at the end it was good
i feel the emo you put behind the song
but at times your voice and the beat wasnt going together, i say you dint ride the beat well
you should do things like this more, all those poetry of yours deserves to be converted into music tracks.

lykd da vocalz....kinda poetic...
buh brah gotta work on dat audio recordin...da beat waznt dat clear//
buh overall....bigg up ta ya/...i lykd da lyricz!!

yo u gt dat spoken word vibe man..nt bad..rili feelin da instrumental...da 1st couple of lines were ntn special..bt lykd sum of da lynz at da end..i dnt say dis 2 alot of guyz on here bt man u gt potential..keep it up

Thank you all for the feed.