Motivation - Original Track - CHECK IT! [Download Here]

Rate, hate, whatever. I appreciate feedbacks.



http://www.zshare.net/audio/508964697ec0bba5/

i dont lyk zshare bruv...2 many pop ups...can u please upload it wit 4shared..

Zshare has no pop-ups at all whatsoever, what are you talking about?

hahah....bro

depends on wat browser u use


mozilla has no pop-ups and same goes for safari


buh IE shows pop-ups

buh zshare sucks compared to 4shared

buh who cares


zshare is the shit most americans use

Yeh, I live in the U.S , haha.
I'm just used to ZShare more, plus it's a better host to upload stuff in my opinion.

man pop ups eat ma computer up...lol...iam in england so mayb da england network got pop ups hu knoz..lifes a bitch...lol..iam high...upload da trak on 4shared n get feed bak..cha ching...

soothin track

thas what i call asmoothflow, thumb up!

Thanks guys =]

im gonna give my opinions from a technical point of view, using my crappy headphones, so pardon me if its way off.


Points that I've noted
-The vocals need to be a littleeee more upfront, its slightly muddy.
-Pianos need to be eqed to give more warmth, its high end is a little too sharp for my liking.
-Flow's nice, but could be more on point (always room to improve right?)
-A singing hook could prolly bring up the song instead of a spoken rap chorus.

Definitely on the right track. Good effort bro.

^ Thanks FiQ, much appreciated bro.

I didn't make the beat, a friend of mines did. Yeh, my vocals definately need to be better, I am definately trying to learn how to mix. True true, I could've used a singing hook by gettin' one of my friends on this track, the rap hook kind of made the song not worth listening to. As by how Flow goes, I'm still practicing on that.

But thanks FiQ.

this is the 1st track of urs tat i listened(donno if u hav any other..sry bout tat)........and i'll say....keep up the good show Young.....u can go a long way.....cause this heres one awesome shit fo' sure

not bad but too lovey dovey for me

yo prodigy put it up on 4shared..

nic track there.. liked it

Im'a put it on 4shared tommorow.