XPLiCT

Yo Ere1 dis is the moment ya all hav been waitin fo...to see me on the MIC....here it is :
http://www.4shared.com/file/77933618/ffcff4d5/X-PLiCT.html

Please be kind enough to comment on ma work nd feel free to say wat u think ....cuz I need 2 improve
NJOY !!!

nice shyt .. u can improve bro

u gotta basic sense of flow but still u need to work on it..
at times u were fast.. but work on ur DELIVERY.. u gotta have clarity in ur vocals..
alrite fo a first track.
didnt like the 2nd verrse though
VOcals need be louder wen ur mixing the track..
best of luck for ur next track

um..u can improve....spiting fast rap aint getting much of a credit
buh if u rap fast and ppl understand wat are u telling...the real creedit cums here

kna wat mean..

~1

Ayet...Pronounciation...Clear Delivery...Work on it bro..1

Thanks guys....some times I choke on the mic....dats where the prb arises.....thanks alot.

Good shit man. You got flow.

Thanks bro....I really worked hard on it

Nice flow...sala amar first track flow to durer kotha.oita track i chilo na.Gud job..work on ur pronounciation..

Thanks man...realy appreciated

hey alif....yeh chekd it..comments:

flow was good...basic flow achey....ofcourse imrpove korte parba but frst trak hishebe good flow

delivery/pronunciation HORRIBLE...raag koro na bro...im juss helpin here...dint get A SINGLE SHIT..not evn A LINE...emotions o iktu dite hobe...lyk kon tone e rap korcho....so fast rap kore labh hocchey na....
no offence juss helped a fellow brother out

nice....ok as a beginner. GOOD LUCK BROTHA....

@ Lil Chigga thanks bro.....ur comment would only make be betta...thanks bro.
@Rated I thanks bro....appreciated.

not too bad for a first try. keep practicin and you'll get better

Thanks man...

GOOD JOB MAN (Y)

Thanks....bro ...appreciated