Shobai Chene...

AL1F · 1 Shobai Chene... Tue Jan 06, 2009 12:26 am

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Yo watt 'sup guys..?...
Ma Second Track....Mixin Done By Me...First Time Ever ! Smile

(Thanks 2 Chigga Fo His Help)
Download It & Pls Leave Ur Honest Comments... Smile

Hope Ya Guys Will Like It....
NJOY !! What a Face

http://www.4shared.com/file/79073090/bff00608/Shobai_Chene.html

lil ping · 2 Re: Shobai Chene... Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:31 am

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nice flows.. lyrix ta ektu improve korte hobe.. voice effect ta bhalo laglona.. yh, tmr kotha bojha jachchena!!..

could have been betterr, 1.

skibkhan · 3 Re: Shobai Chene... Tue Jan 06, 2009 2:43 am

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u were off beat thru out the track.. u shud work on it.. listen to ur favourite artist or someone whose style u follow.. practise im sure u can improve quickly Smile

AL1F · 4 Re: Shobai Chene... Tue Jan 06, 2009 2:55 am

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Thanks guys......Well this track was recorded be4 ma last track.......so I thought it would be great to release it....but ya..
I kno I improved Smile

...thanks to u guys..
More comments...plz

mATZ · 5 Re: Shobai Chene... Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:51 am

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yO bRo
volume waz loud
nids more clarity
n da main tin iz u r OFF beat
mATZ siGNIN oUT ............................

Tha Young Prodigy · 6 Re: Shobai Chene... Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:46 pm

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I agree wit SkibKhan.
Good effort though bro.

AL1F · 7 Re: Shobai Chene... Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:56 am

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thanks guys...appreciated fo honest comments Smile

rocksta · 8 Re: Shobai Chene... Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:37 am

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Well as Skibby said.. u were off beat thru outta Track.. .. n yeh u need 2 improve u'r Lirycs.. u shud work on it ..Newayz Keep on! ..
Rocksta'z Hea.. Over'n'out!

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