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PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey

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Fr!daY
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1PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:55 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

link- http://www.4shared.com/file/79656723/5b05d8b3/fBz_featuring_Bmonkey_-_PRIME_SUPREMACY.html


PRIME SUPREMACY [lyrics]
(B'monkey)
Sitting in the canteen, hitting en flirting!
Guess what guys? its just our 6-teens.
we meet on the 3rd floor, section D er shamne,
Polapain chaiya roy, era ailo kemne?
Chechamechi kori amra, kori onek shor,
amader deikhe shob ulta dike mare dour.
AK 47 dekhe bachhara bhoy pay.
ami kache giye boli babu eita amar toy.
Eto khone jene gechho that i've got the flow,
ami karomukhe shuni nai, kokhono je NO.
This is not the last time tora amake shunbi,
till the next time tora din guli gunbi.
now, collar amader shobshomoy thake upore,
shunina amra bapuraam shapure.

[chorus] (fBz)
Burning the mic,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
crossing the lines,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
we're alway rite
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
mesmerize
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY

(fBz)
We ride like the low riders kintu very high,
Amar pankha nai tobu I can fly!
9mm aaj amader lage nah...
amader dekhle keu ashe pashe thake nah.
Pashho takar note ekhon amar pocket e je bhorti,
life e amader ekhon shudhu matro furti.
Ganjam kora amader holo intension,
ki korbo bhai we have made reputation.
Bangladeshe born ami bengali rap star.
Think i was fast? wait till i get faster!
Amar kotha barta shuno bhai, ekdom gangsta.
U mess wimme, u be callin for disaster.
Eita bhai amader brand new latest track.
we know it well, u just cant hit back.

[chorus] (fBz)
Burning the mic,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
crossing the lines,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
we're alway rite
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
mesmerize
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY

(B'monkey)
Boesh amar ek-chhoy, kao ke kori nah bhoy,
rampuri shotgun, shobshomoi shathe roy.
when we walk down the isle, we just mesmerize,
we look at u, as if yo' rolling the dice.
they call us the devils, cuz we reached the levels,
no1 dares to cross it, cuz we look so evil.
Class is defined now puely irresistible,
girls come up to us, 'u guys r so adorable'!
Shisha tani regency, khete jai emanuells,
karo hate malboro, ar karo jack danniels.
Bonduk point koro tumi, guli amar shathe,
Nightmare hoye ashbo kono bhoyonok raate.
amra bangladesher shei kukhhato collaz up.
shob rokom crew er, ekdom baap!

(fBz)
Pokete ekta 9mm niya ghurafera kori ei elaka diya.
we be riding down enimy lines, guns in our pocket.
bullets laying arounds, witing fo' u to suck it.
Amar achhe respect, we're known to kick ass,
we be doing some dope, drinking out of our glass.
Flag lagano garite amar eto beshi part, green army lancer shamne duta body guard! yeah!

[chorus] (fBz)
Burning the mic,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
crossing the lines,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
we're alway rite
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
mesmerize
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
Burning the mic,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
crossing the lines,
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
we're alway rite
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY
mesmerize
WE'RE PRIME SUPREMACY

2PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:34 am

rocksta

rocksta
Newbie Rhymer
Newbie Rhymer

Well as fA as I Heard...i Found ..Dat u'r toungue get slipped fo while@FBZ ..iN oda Hand Both of Ya did a Gud jOB.. So Keep on !

3PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 8:26 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

wrong format to export it out as...always mp3 ur songs..

4PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 8:29 am

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

not a well organized track...n shuni nah ajke baburam shapure hmm...not a wise line 2 use b monkey...especially in ur caliber..

5PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 9:20 am

istim-em

istim-em
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

erm... it sounded more like ay chelera ay meyere mamar bari jai type rhyming
just telling what i felt while listening to it

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6PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 1:15 pm

JDKarma

JDKarma
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

hmm where to start! good job pretty good job! but guys improve ur lyrics! dats not tight at all! but clear voice even though kono kono jaigai offbeat hoice! just keep practicing ! like ur mixing u r a good mixer! but dude dats not ur real flow! anyways! Fbz sounded better than monkey boy!

@ intim: LOL hahaha

but after all good stuff! keep it up

7PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:23 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

thanks guys...
appreciated yo' honest feedback...

8PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:26 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

JDKarma wrote:hmm where to start! good job pretty good job! but guys improve ur lyrics! dats not tight at all! but clear voice even though kono kono jaigai offbeat hoice! just keep practicing ! like ur mixing u r a good mixer! but dude dats not ur real flow! anyways! Fbz sounded better than monkey boy!

@ intim: LOL hahaha

but after all good stuff! keep it up

it is man...
i went fo each verse at one go!
no bar to bar mixing...

9PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 3:21 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

F.L.O. wrote:wrong format to export it out as...always mp3 ur songs..

a'ite...
but, how does it matter??
scratch

10PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:59 pm

F.L.O.

F.L.O.
Battle Moderator
Battle Moderator

you judge the track in whole dont u... Rolling Eyes ..if u export it as mp3..then i dont gota download this shit i cna just lissen 2 it Rolling Eyes ...only lissn 2 the first few seconds 2 judge it u kno...

11PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:24 pm

Bangey

Bangey
Moderator
Moderator

No offense, this track sounds quite fake.
In the sense, its not your accent. Especially during the chorus, why are you guys trying to put on fake ass accents? And if you DO put on an accent, make sure its authentic. This sounds like your really trying to put on a fake accents.
I'm trying to be constructive.
And the flow is a bit slow if you know what i am saying. Its slightly frustrating because it takes a while for each of you to get your sentences out. On the whole it wasn't bad, had a few nice rhymes but it can improve.
Keep up the work and keep trying! Very Happy

Peace

12PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:57 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

okaaeeii man...

13PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:06 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

one question tho...
what exactly u mean by the fake accent??
as far as I know..
u supposed to be doing that..
I mean..
Imma agree... i dont 'generally' talk like no black man...
I'm sure skib doesnt talk like he raps...
he puts up an accent...
en that wat makes his shit so good...
neways..
i guess u know what ur taking bout..
i mean..
U GOT THE KNOWLEDGE...
u R a moderator..
-1-

14PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:14 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

F.L.O. wrote:you judge the track in whole dont u... Rolling Eyes ..if u export it as mp3..then i dont gota download this shit i cna just lissen 2 it Rolling Eyes ...only lissn 2 the first few seconds 2 judge it u kno...

i see...
it was the first time fo' me, i guess it'll be mp3 from now on...

15PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 9:52 am

Fr!daY


DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

Ok this ttrack is their bangey...last day i went to their shelther and i saw em doing it...



Dis shit can be dope....i mean i saw em spiting on da beat live ! All they need is a mixin g magic,,,u know da mixing thing is da shit were gud track get fucked up !

16PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:21 pm

Sharjil

Sharjil
DR Marketing Team
DR Marketing Team

no better den ride out buh still Razz
fBz did a good job....he doesnt hav "accent"...buh it wasnt dat bad tho
b'monkey ???...got no comments Neutral
fbz was better....
ALL U GUYS NEED IS MXING,same goes fo UB..


peace

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17PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:51 pm

nylos_mentalmc

nylos_mentalmc
DeshiRhymes Battle Champion
DeshiRhymes Battle Champion

Sharjil wrote:no better den ride out buh still Razz
fBz did a good job....he doesnt hav "accent"...buh it wasnt dat bad tho
b'monkey ???...got no comments Neutral
fbz was better....
ALL U GUYS NEED IS MXING,same goes fo UB..


peace

stop spamming urself kid Razz

fbz yal kno think bout dis man... i told u yesterday...

verses n lyrikal valur tite... hooks cudve bin btr bt still keep it ufff =D

18PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:25 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

=D I dig u G!

19PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:28 pm

Bangey

Bangey
Moderator
Moderator

fBz wrote:one question tho...
what exactly u mean by the fake accent??
as far as I know..
u supposed to be doing that..
I mean..
Imma agree... i dont 'generally' talk like no black man...
I'm sure skib doesnt talk like he raps...
he puts up an accent...
en that wat makes his shit so good...
neways..
i guess u know what ur taking bout..
i mean..
U GOT THE KNOWLEDGE...
u R a moderator..
-1-

First and foremost, i didn't exactly say you shouldn't rap with a different accent.
I said that your accents on the track, sounds quite fake. In the sense, it should be more authentic. Secondly, i am not sure if Skib puts on an accent when he raps, that may very well be his accent; And even if he does, it sounds very realistic and as if its his own, so its fine. Whereas in this track, its quite obvious you both are trying to force an accent. Get it? It really doesn't sound natural enough.

And don't be sarcastic man. I'm trying to help you out. What do you think i am doing here? You think i want to just put you down for the sake of it? Damn dude you gotta sort out your insecurities, not everyones out to get you and i especially am not.
Anyways in the end its up to you fBz. You can't expect yourself to be perfect yet, know what i mean? You will improve man, don't get frustrated when people put you down. In fact i think its better if someone comes out and says "Oh i didn't like this bit" or "You have some issues". Because you can use that sort of criticism constructively to improve your skills. Whereas if people just come here and heap praises, you'll think your amazing and won't improve as much!!

Peace

@ FR!DAY: You missed the point dude i never accused them of NOT rapping this track, lol.

20PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:08 am

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

Bangey wrote:
fBz wrote:one question tho...
what exactly u mean by the fake accent??
as far as I know..
u supposed to be doing that..
I mean..
Imma agree... i dont 'generally' talk like no black man...
I'm sure skib doesnt talk like he raps...
he puts up an accent...
en that wat makes his shit so good...
neways..
i guess u know what ur taking bout..
i mean..
U GOT THE KNOWLEDGE...
u R a moderator..
-1-

First and foremost, i didn't exactly say you shouldn't rap with a different accent.
I said that your accents on the track, sounds quite fake. In the sense, it should be more authentic. Secondly, i am not sure if Skib puts on an accent when he raps, that may very well be his accent; And even if he does, it sounds very realistic and as if its his own, so its fine. Whereas in this track, its quite obvious you both are trying to force an accent. Get it? It really doesn't sound natural enough.

And don't be sarcastic man. I'm trying to help you out. What do you think i am doing here? You think i want to just put you down for the sake of it? Damn dude you gotta sort out your insecurities, not everyones out to get you and i especially am not.
Anyways in the end its up to you fBz. You can't expect yourself to be perfect yet, know what i mean? You will improve man, don't get frustrated when people put you down. In fact i think its better if someone comes out and says "Oh i didn't like this bit" or "You have some issues". Because you can use that sort of criticism constructively to improve your skills. Whereas if people just come here and heap praises, you'll think your amazing and won't improve as much!!

Peace

@ FR!DAY: You missed the point dude i never accused them of NOT rapping this track, lol.

I guess ur rite...
I'll keep that stuff in mind..
appreciated ur feedback...
=)
-1-

21PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sun Jan 11, 2009 3:00 pm

JDKarma

JDKarma
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

ok just wanna make sure something! when u guys did those reverse n echo at the end of all the phrases! dats not REAL, it feels so fake! i tried to say exactly what Bangey said! anyways! real rappers also do those shit when they record but we dont have dat feeling but on this track we had dat feeling! i donno i am not a pro but as a simple listener i had dat feeling!

and i dont wanna diss u but lyrics tite? r u guys sure cuz there r a few lines dat really..... and sometimes some bars r too slow and some of them too fast! talking about timing! work on it! anyways! what i likes about it is dat voice is really clear! just work a bit on ur bangla pronunciation! after all really good effort keep it up!

off beat at many places!

hmm dats what i observed after listening to it 13 times! so its up to u to take it in consideration!

22PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:41 pm

fBz

fBz
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

=D
13 fuckin times!!
lol...

I'll work on the stuff u said...
we got this out way too fast...
din take our time...
I guess thats what we should've done..
taken our time, thought over it, en let it go only when its good enuf...

appreciated ur thoughts...
-1-

23PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:25 pm

JDKarma

JDKarma
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

it wasnt too fast! u guys did the right thing! cuz next time u gonna be more careful and gonna come up with a much more better quality! just keep it up and monkey boy is not dat bad either! he needs more work in timing.... his delivery is pretty good but off beat:S cuz of timing! so practice practice .....practice makes perfect even though nobody is perfect:P

24PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Tue Jan 20, 2009 1:08 pm

infmous

infmous
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Moderator

keep practisin

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25PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Empty Re: PRIME SUPREMACY- fBz feat. B'monkey Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:45 am

Humayun Chowdhury

Humayun Chowdhury
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

ur so yong,when u will lil bit older ur voice sound more sweeter,2 narro da fink down ...............always do real time recording otherwise ofbeat hoytey thakbe,use adboe audition,firstly understand da beat,den go wid it, u need 2 spit da rhyming word when da snare hits, choosing a track which dont has snare is not a wiser thing,though dis beat has claps insted of snare but bmonky dont go wid it, jabeta khivabe jodi claps er dencity eto beshy hoy? so select ur beat wisly.u also need 2 improve ur lyric too,practise korte thako,u will prospa

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