In Love With A Ghost - Lil'Z

This is my new track, nd also my first fake ass track meanin this never actually happened to me , its called in love with a ghost. its bout a guy expressin both his luv nd hate for his girl who passed away shortly after cheating on him. lol check it out if u wana

http://www.4shared.com/file/124658012/59ec83d2/In_love_with_a_ghost_-_LilZ_.html

lol artists rap from other people's perspective all the time dude... that doesn't make it a 'fake ass track' lol. anyway i liked the concept but thought it cuda been executed a little better. you have potential.. just keep at it!

Good stuff b, I digg it.

keep up tha gud work bro...this is sum nice thng going on .........

thank u ppl, im still an learnin though

yeah! a nice track.u gotta similar flow like slick...........

who's slick ?? im sry but im new here

lol..................nice track anyway

thanx man