Sleep - Stray (Produced by F.L.O.)

After a lot of convincing and encouragement, I've laid some vocals down on a beat by our man. Pardon me for the sound quality, you might here a lot of pops and shit. I'm still a novice at recording, so drop your comments and suggestions, it'd be very much appreciated. Thanks.


http://www.4shared.com/file/129826875/96e34bdc/Sleep_-_Stray.html

man dnt mind ......... u r an awsome lyricist bt u got stairs to climb wen it cums to audio .... beat ws really sumthng as usual expected frm FLO  

^^
wat he said..

daym flo was ryt bout u. da lyrics i meen.
yer mind thinks outside da box, dass a good sign nikka

practice makes perfect!

i liked the beat

Thank you all for your honest feedback, it's very much appreciated.

this is ma nigga ri here
naveed its sounding proper styll,
bitch, y da fawk u aint tellin me u recording, u live not too far from me
u can jus use my studio. u already knoe it,

Lmao. My bad, I'll come by some time bro. =)