Straight Up Your Streets - Lyrical Assassins

Lyrical Assassins back again.. yea the whole crew, together after like eternity hope we get positive feed-backs for this track & this was " JROCK's " project and yea introducing GOLAM << our newest crew member.

check ME out on teh HOOKS
JROCK on the 1st verse then RGB and then finally GOLAM.

**note on teh outro: it was from our previous tracks (lagis nah amgo loge & phapor loisnah ) which was performed by JROCK & GOLAM ( DUO. )

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Hot Track...Nice bro!

Naasik aka PLaStiK wrote:Hot Track...Nice bro!

thanks man

uhhhh...the chorus was weird. idk..other ppl might like it...and u def. tried to make it unique so props on that.
it's an okay track (okay flow, old-as-shit lyrics, . nothing special)
i liked the second verse though.

2nd verse (Y)

thanks sd
and
you too ak

strange hookz but ok nice.. liked the 2nd verse

..this is very dissapointing.. thankyou AK for starting this. WTF? is so strange about teh hooks i mean .. ihad this one part and i tried my best to stand out.. and yes i didn't mix this track.. and i use a condenser mic ( yea i'm a proud owner ) heck jrock couldn't bring out teh clarity.. you know the problems with condensers: too much.. too excess base .

any ways AK do yourself and other fellow rappers a favour!? try to feel the track, therez a lotta pain behind each track.. if you do that bro.. iguess ppl will hate you less!

look son...do u want my honest comments or not? if u post ur tracks with the expectation that everyone will be praising the heck out of u...then u shd've written a disclaimer or alteast told me not to comment.

oh also..i dont come here to be loved by ppl..seriously...if u want to hate me..go ahead..i can rlly care less abt that...if u make good tracks..i'll praise it..if u can't..i'll criticize it...if u put enough work on a track..it'll come out good..apparently not enough effort was put the right way. get out of ur comfort zone and learn to accept negative comments if u wanna be a good musician in general. i'd love to argue with u ONLY if u can counter-argue the technical comments that i already made (none of my comments r ignorant and out of nowhere..so srsly stop complaining and learn to accept criticisms)

ah!
am feeling this LA
good stuff,I SEE ALOTTA IMPROVEMENTS!
post the lyrics and the verses were good enough to flow with the beat,but mah nigga PiNG,I think the hook went offbeat at some important places!OVERALL : ITS A DOPE TRACK,THE BEST LA TRACK YET.KEEP IT GOING GUYS!

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AKProductions wrote:look son...do u want my honest comments or not? if u post ur tracks with the expectation that everyone will be praising the heck out of u...then u shd've written a disclaimer or alteast told me not to comment.

oh also..i dont come here to be loved by ppl..seriously...if u want to hate me..go ahead..i can rlly care less abt that...if u make good tracks..i'll praise it..if u can't..i'll criticize it...if u put enough work on a track..it'll come out good..apparently not enough effort was put the right way. get out of ur comfort zone and learn to accept negative comments if u wanna be a good musician in general. i'd love to argue with u ONLY if u can counter-argue the technical comments that i already made (none of my comments r ignorant and out of nowhere..so srsly stop complaining and learn to accept criticisms)

..i usually don't like people who sings sa-re-ga-ma on a hip-hop beat ( not actually a hip-hop but he claims it to be, stupid bitch! ) and LIKE YOU DIDN'T KNOW U R NOO EXCEPTION YOU HOE!

and please i know my limits u don't/won't be needing in reminding me and ( not that umm proud ) i admit i lack skills.. soo shut up hoe ( who u calling son ? ) If it were SKIB or F.L.O or JASPER or OCTA or WHOEVER whoz better than me, who knowz how it feelz like to spitt, whoz done it before, WHO HAS MADE THEIR PLACE TO CRITICIZE PPL <<< then i would have shut my faakin mouth coz i knw they r for REOL and i shud for the GOOD.. ayt? stop acting like you one.. ayt? u ain't even on my level!

SO PLEASE I M SPEAKING ON BEHALF OF MY CREW that YOU STOP COMMENTING ON ANY OF OUR TRACKS?

LEMME CLEAR THIS ONCE MORE: WE DON'T "NEED" YOUR FEEDZ!!

oh and come on u uglier than a spider. how can i hate you? i m just disgusted u fool! ( i pity on you ) - L.M.F.A.O

ohkei now go fuck yurself and oh who m I talking to? u ain't even a rapper! R U??? u r just one asshole.. ohkei enuff u ain't good at anything except pissing anyone off ( nah u proud of dat r u ? ) and if u r just a listener den plz just listen don't advice ppl ayt? and drop feedz not critics! ayt now piss (peace) off!! istupid insect!!

im with AK stop complaining and learn to accept criticisms it will help on your flow

Hahahhahahaha. So…i totally expected u to go on a rant like
this. I don’t hate u but hate on me as much as you want I don’t care. I claim
something to be hiphop beat?! Wtf are you talking abt?! Ppl like u simply makes
me laugh. I’m glad you still remember the first song I did haha.


People know who I am
and what I’m capable of so please I don’t “NEED” you to define myself lol.


I’d suggest you to go and read my comment again. I actually
said “props to u for trying something new for chorus”…Clearly that’s not a
negative comment. I never said you are whack….I never say that to anyone. I
never said your rapping was bad or had horrible flow or anything at all..i don’t
even know which part u rapped..but I know whoever did verse 2 was a lot better
than any other verses. I said what parts you can improve. And clearly, you have some major ego issues. I’m
a producer and I work with rappers/singers...so I definitely wouldn’t compare
myself with a rapper...and now particularly not with you at all.


You clearly didn’t respond with something constructive and
technical, but rather went on a circular rant while just cussing me. But don’t worry, I wont ever comment on ur
songs after seeing ur attitude.


RGB: are you part of
his rap group thing? Please let me know bro before I critique a song of urs
again in msn or fb…(if it has Lil Ping in it…do let me know). Btw, I’m starting to make beats again lol. I
might end up finishing that beat (u know the one with the random whistle lol...)..so
let me know if u still want it.

not feelin dis...clarity required on every part of the track...cudn understand most of the verses....cept for verse 2.... chorus jz ain ma cup ov coffee...<<chorus wen off beat.... i've heard betta from LA...

ping u gota learn how 2 absorb negative and positve comments homie..

negative comments = work

positive comments = work harder

remember that..

AK is right and so is Riddler and Flo.. The Hook was wierd and went like offbeat. just the second verse was upto the level. didnt feel the other verses much.
Lil Ping- i dont kno wat happend to u for which you insulted AK like that. i dont see amy reason for that. He didnt say anything wrong.I always appretiate AK's feeds . because i've seen all his others feeds are completely honest.you shud'nt hav acted so rude.

F.L.O. wrote:ping u gota learn how 2 absorb negative and positve comments homie..

negative comments = work

positive comments = work harder

remember that..

sum good advice rite hea

Cold Yon appreciate that homie. dont worry abt it. i never take it personally. i hv quite a lot of experience with people ranting/insulting me (even in sum forums in which i'm a freakn' moderator! lol)....sometimes people can't accept the negative feeds....i can talk personally that i also sumtimes feel bad inside when sumone says negative stuff abt my track or something lol..but point of view/attitude is very important here. i def. agree with what FLO said...unfortunately most young artists gotta be a lot to learn.

No problem brou. i just hope he does'nt get mad at me now. :p 

AKProductions wrote:Hahahhahahaha. So…i totally expected u to go on a rant like
this. I don’t hate u but hate on me as much as you want I don’t care. I claim
something to be hiphop beat?! Wtf are you talking abt?! Ppl like u simply makes
me laugh. I’m glad you still remember the first song I did haha.


People know who I am
and what I’m capable of so please I don’t “NEED” you to define myself lol.


I’d suggest you to go and read my comment again. I actually
said “props to u for trying something new for chorus”…Clearly that’s not a
negative comment. I never said you are whack….I never say that to anyone. I
never said your rapping was bad or had horrible flow or anything at all..i don’t
even know which part u rapped..but I know whoever did verse 2 was a lot better
than any other verses. I said what parts you can improve. And clearly, you have some major ego issues. I’m
a producer and I work with rappers/singers...so I definitely wouldn’t compare
myself with a rapper...and now particularly not with you at all.


You clearly didn’t respond with something constructive and
technical, but rather went on a circular rant while just cussing me. But don’t worry, I wont ever comment on ur
songs after seeing ur attitude.


RGB: are you part of
his rap group thing? Please let me know bro before I critique a song of urs
again in msn or fb…(if it has Lil Ping in it…do let me know). Btw, I’m starting to make beats again lol. I
might end up finishing that beat (u know the one with the random whistle lol...)..so
let me know if u still want it.

yea.. lol i went thru all this again, sorry i blew up. it was totally pointless. i wasn't thinking clearly yea umm very sorry for that. lol, hope we get over with this. i never loose my temper, so easily like this. I take back what ever i said. and yea this has nothing to do with bigg egoz n stuffz.. PEACE

Cold Yon wrote:No problem brou. i just hope he does'nt get mad at me now. :p

noo offense taken bro, i understand his intentions were good

F.L.O. wrote:ping u gota learn how 2 absorb negative and positve comments homie..

negative comments = work

positive comments = work harder

remember that..

thanks for your concern bro, yea i'll remember that!

Sharjil wrote:ah!
am feeling this LA
good stuff,I SEE ALOTTA IMPROVEMENTS!
post the lyrics and the verses were good enough to flow with the beat,but mah nigga PiNG,I think the hook went offbeat at some important places!OVERALL : ITS A DOPE TRACK,THE BEST LA TRACK YET.KEEP IT GOING GUYS!

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thanks B

AKProductions wrote:Hahahhahahaha. So…i totally expected u to go on a rant like
this. I don’t hate u but hate on me as much as you want I don’t care. I claim
something to be hiphop beat?! Wtf are you talking abt?! Ppl like u simply makes
me laugh. I’m glad you still remember the first song I did haha.


People know who I am
and what I’m capable of so please I don’t “NEED” you to define myself lol.


I’d suggest you to go and read my comment again. I actually
said “props to u for trying something new for chorus”…Clearly that’s not a
negative comment. I never said you are whack….I never say that to anyone. I
never said your rapping was bad or had horrible flow or anything at all..i don’t
even know which part u rapped..but I know whoever did verse 2 was a lot better
than any other verses. I said what parts you can improve. And clearly, you have some major ego issues. I’m
a producer and I work with rappers/singers...so I definitely wouldn’t compare
myself with a rapper...and now particularly not with you at all.


You clearly didn’t respond with something constructive and
technical, but rather went on a circular rant while just cussing me. But don’t worry, I wont ever comment on ur
songs after seeing ur attitude.


RGB: are you part of
his rap group thing? Please let me know bro before I critique a song of urs
again in msn or fb…(if it has Lil Ping in it…do let me know). Btw, I’m starting to make beats again lol. I
might end up finishing that beat (u know the one with the random whistle lol...)..so
let me know if u still want it.

yea i still want it man,um working on 3 tracks simultaneously so you know its kinda killing me
i be with you as soon as um done with those,
i would sure love to work with you
and PiNG. and AK man just quite it aiit ?
PiNG is going through a lot of shits all together : studies exams and music and family
so he didnt mean anything wateva he mentioned,I respect you alot as a musician and as a person so lets be happy again

TheRiddler wrote:not feelin dis...clarity required on every part of the track...cudn understand most of the verses....cept for verse 2.... chorus jz ain ma cup ov coffee...

thanks for the feedback man,we will get railed again just did the track being in too much pressure.