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Jeexo aka Motka Mama · 1 *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:15 am

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ppl plz download dis and leave us sum feedz... jz got da beat last n came up wid dis... thnkx...

[[[ PARASITES ]]]

[[[ JEEXO | THE RIDDLER ]]]

[[[ DOWNLOAD ]]]
http://www.4shared.com/file/141960639/1f9082a0/Jeexo_and_The_Riddler_-_PARASITES.html

[[[ LYRICS ]]]

[[[ INTRO ]]] [[[ JEEXO ]]]

HEY RIDDLER, Ha, Jeexo, MOTKA, ROLLERS...HAHA....

[[[ CHORUS ]]] [[[ JEEXO ]]] X2

GIVE ME A BREAK BITCH
I'M GETTIN TIRED NOW
U BITCHES KEEP ON RAPPIN
KEEPIN ME OUT OF BOUND
SO WHEN I RAP WHEN I TALK
U BITCHES GO AWAY
COZ EVERYTIME U DROP A TRACK
THEM BRIGGAS LAUGH AWAY

[[[ 1ST VERSE ]]] [[[ JEEXO ]]]

aiya gese motka, bhaiya rah shore jah
ctg kapai aisi, dhaka k charum nah

dekh, amare pochais nah, arekbar bhaiba dekh
matha bhai gorom ken, tor gal frend disse chekh

oi betar matha gese, nijere bhabe k
koi bar baal er gaan hunaiya amare tui kandabi

togor moto pola pain aise abar jaibo gah
bashai boiya, chod khelaiya naam kamaite parbi na

boro boro kotha koisos, kaajer shomoi koi chili
ghorer theika bair hoiya dekh lungi poira kharaisi

dekh choto belai class er bhitor boiya likhsi kobita
boro hoiya rapper hoisi, amar moto parbi nah

so ai chelera ai meye rah, studio teh jai
rapper khata haat e loiya, mama'r bari jai

mami ghore boiya ase, motka mama nai
motka mama club er bhitor maiya goh nachai

[[[ CHORUS ]]] X 2

[[[ 2ND VERSE ]]] [[[ THE RIDDLER ]]]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

ima little bit of riddles little bit of rhymes little bit of partyin with everythn
i'm hit them wid da words hit them wid da rhymes hit them wid a lot and nigga doin ma thang
i'ma lot about the hoes lot about the guns lot about the rhythm n a never let go
thinkin of somethin to hit over da head wida muthafuckin word bomb here we go...

muthafuckin bottom feeders hangin by da leg
i've been rhymin from bak wen u were livin in n egg
muthafuckin big mouths better shut ur holez man
or u can waid for wen i make u eat ur wordz man
no matter where we go (wa?) haterz debate n
no matter how we flow haterz be hate in
i'm always reachin heights fuck u mofuckin dykes
got no tym for parasites the world is waitin

i never dig or feel rhymes dat r all synthetic
i've said it many times (wa?) u jz plain pathetic
so i reconstruct ma rhymes n deconstruct ur swag
waidin for da day wen u self destruct ur ass

[[[ CHORUS ]]] X 2

MC NS · 2 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:05 am

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whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat????? *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Icon_pale

skibkhan · 3 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:19 am

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good track.. chorus cud've been better.. motka is funny Smile

MC NS · 4 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:19 am

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you did better than me... congrats *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Icon_biggrin

this is my full version : http://www.4shared.com/file/141976727/f8fa82bd/Hey_Gurl_MC_NS.html

F.L.O. · 5 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:20 am

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Riddler was aite..motka was good...hook was okay..track was okay..outy

AKProductions · 6 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:29 am

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if the chorus is more 'dramatic' i'd appreciate it...it sounds like a southern crank type genre. so, u need that crunky emotions to this beat..with a lot of 'swag' attitude. Kuzz cud've been a great third verse....just my thoughts.

AKProductions · 7 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:30 am

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i wont comment on mixing/flows..since u guys r pro enough to figure those out..in fact it's a good track technically...but lacking the necessary icing of the cake.

Octa · 8 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:04 am

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hook was okay, i agree with ak on this, a more agressive delivery wuld hv been xcellent, bt still goes. bout the jeexo verse, i lyk hw u stand out from otha bangla rapperz by integrating a more "english" flow with bangla wrdz (y) bt i gta say, da "black zang adlipz"...lyk da part where it goes " ctg kapaisi " , i hope u get wat i mean, dat decreases ur authentic style man...minus dat..itz fly.. (y)
riddler was good too...man i dunno if u heard slim thug =\ his voice is lyk carbon-copy of urz man =\ lol, overall it was a pretty good track =D

Jeexo aka Motka Mama · 9 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:10 am

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Thanks skib bhai .. I knw he's funny (H) lol
Flo- thanx man (H)
Ak- i get watchu mean, cud've used tha crunky thing datchu mentioned on the harmo's (emphasis words)
Octa- thanx muh man, to be honest i gt zang's songs playing on muh ipod all the tym, kinda came in lol, big fan of the guy man ... and so far thanx for the honest feeds ppl *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Icon_smile

AKProductions · 10 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:49 am

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M@$D · 11 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 6:50 pm

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nice track..........jeexo waz good ur improving in BAngla shit day by day datz good ....nd Riddler waz awsm flow valo lagse mama.......overall good track.........

Mode Silver · 12 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 6:58 pm

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motka: u gotta try more complex rhyming schemes. and i agree with octa bout the zang thing.

riddler: didn feel the fast rhyming with the whole "little bit of/hit em with the" trick.. doesnt work on me lol. lyrics were okay.. still got a lot of room for improvement.

wid all that said... i gotta drop a track soon!!

TheRiddler · 13 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:09 pm

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thnkx everybody for ur feedz... Appreciate it...ak octa mode skib flo....We'll try our best InshAllah!!!

gsifz · 14 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:53 am

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haha nce trackk .. i like!
i always enjoy jeexo
and i felt riddler's flow!
and bro u do sound like slim a lot :/

TheRiddler · 15 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Wed Oct 21, 2009 10:13 am

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thnkx 4 da support guyz... i'ma bit confused... jz so i kno... "soundin like slim thug"... is dat a bad thing or good? *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Icon_eek

ARZEE · 16 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Wed Oct 21, 2009 11:20 am

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good track homies..that mama bari part was funny lol
both of u had good flow..lyrics were aite..and yea the hook could've been better.
keep up the good work guys!

fBz · 17 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Wed Oct 21, 2009 11:59 am

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Jeex O is fun to listen to =D
i'm digging this one... I liked the way the song began.

Rishad Aziz · 18 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Wed Oct 21, 2009 5:07 pm

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Mode Silver wrote:motka: u gotta try more complex rhyming schemes. and i agree with octa bout the zang thing.

riddler: didn feel the fast rhyming with the whole "little bit of/hit em with the" trick.. doesnt work on me lol. lyrics were okay.. still got a lot of room for improvement.

true, a lot of room for improvement, specially in lyrics *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Icon_neutral

Octa · 19 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:18 pm

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@riddler: not really a bad thyng bro =P i jst mean da vocal texture... =D i ges asiff meanz da same...^o)

AKProductions · 20 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:22 am

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octa..u r referring to gsifz when ur saying "asif" ryte? haha
coz i get confused since i go by that name too lol.

Octa · 21 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:38 am

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hahaha asif [ da producer =P ]..i was jst commentin on da otha thread of mine n i was gna refer to u as asif..den i remembered i mentioned da otha asif [ da rapper =P ] as "asif" lyk 2 postz back lol...u asifs gt us confused =\

AKProductions · 22 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:47 am

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lmao. i remember talking to the 'producer' of sinister group in facebook..is that u? srry i am horrible w/ names and all lol.

gsifz · 23 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:14 pm

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shutup asif and aleef .. ami kisu bujhtesi na :/
and riddler bro its a good thing =p

Octa · 24 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:10 pm

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lol asif [ da producer ]...derz been a lotta ppl hu claimed to be our producer =P i dunno which one u tokd to lol...letz nt piss em off with our chit chat here btw =P

Humayun Chowdhury · 25 Re: *** JEEXO | THE RIDDLER - [[[ PARASITE ]]] Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:04 am

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Rishad Aziz wrote:

Mode Silver wrote:motka: u gotta try more complex rhyming schemes. and i agree with octa bout the zang thing.

riddler: didn feel the fast rhyming with the whole "little bit of/hit em with the" trick.. doesnt work on me lol. lyrics were okay.. still got a lot of room for improvement.

true, a lot of room for improvement, specially in lyrics

totally agreed

Riddler jani kothay bolsili we (Fly-0-Logy) dont knw how write lyrics....khankir pola........... tai na???

dumbass hater..dumb vave hate korte thak...R amader track shunle j keu buzbe amra lyrics lekte pari ki na pari.....

ekon 2mar crew member(jexco) re lyrics leka shikao

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