Verbal Murderer (Freestyle) - Arzee

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I made this track couple of months back but never released it.
So yea click the link below to download it and be sure to leave your feedback, thanks!

Verbal Murderer (Freestyle) - Arzee

Download link:
http://www.4shared.com/file/141317992/f79d3350/Verbal_Murderer__Freestyle_.html

Lyrics

I'm on my grind man 24-7
Spittin live from the city of cocaine
You feel me?
I'm the massive fam saviour son
Imma put my fingers in your eyes then make 'em bleed

The satans on the mic I'm burnin every track
Sinners suffocatin cuz the heat of my lyrical attack
Niggaz getting famous on the net by ridin on dicks
And we keepin it live in M-I we fuck the police

I kill mcs son! don't get me wrong
First i sketch em with pencil then kill wit punches in my songs
Funny how some niggas claimin all this and that
When I fuck their wives on my every single track

The streets want me back cuz I'm the best of the bests
Now I'm freezing on the block cuz of the ice on my neck (uhh)
I'm speedin to the top like in the cross rallies
And the industry is full of fakes they like silicon valleys

Been 4 years for my turn I be waiting
And these niggas like bed bugs they be patiently biting
Black Maserati coupe you can picture me rolling
Living the ghetto fab son you can picture me balling

I'm dope on the block you can ask about me
I'm like air to this game it can't live without me
Stuntin is a habit son I glow like candles
You fuck with Arzee and Imma leave you strangled

im feelin this, but if delivery was a lil better it wud've been dope as hell
you got some unintentional multies here lol :
I'm freezing on the block, I'm speedin to the top =p

yh greatt shitt...delivery cudda been bettr...bt yo? freestyle? =\ dat'd be great den

I thought the delivery was better than the lyrics. I dont prefer gangster stuff, so you can say that I am being biased, but I dint like the track much. The punches were there, the delivery was there but the lyrics was not good enough. "fuck the police" line sounds like a cliche man. Nice freestyle but work on your lyrics a bit more.

as a freestyle bro dis shits guuuuud...
i dunno wut 2 coment if dis wasnt

gsifz: thanks homeboi! lol yea it wasn't pre written and everything just came out like that =P

octa: thanks bro =D

e.niphty: thanks for the feedback man..lol yea i know..lyrics could've been a lot better..i was just freestyling randomly and said whatever popped into my head lol

t-rephic: thanks man =D

keep em comments coming =]

good 1 arzee... Really awsum since itzz freestyle.... Keep up da gud work homie...

lyrics need work bro, too much fronting lol. but i did lik some of the lines. stay up!

riddler: thanks man!

mode: thanks bro! and yea imma work on it lol

maaan..wat's up w/ ur pc and 4shared? lol..i cudn't just listen and had to download this song too (just like the previous one which had Kuzz in it lol).

but anyway good shit. although i expect more from u. u got concepts in ur track which is the most important thing..so u got the potentials..and delivery is an issssue...u sorta fade away (like after every word or something..) u shd try to switch up and try new flows and stuff...it sounds awkward the way..llike it's not exactly the flow..but like this 'rough' feeling in ur flow.

lol yea 4shared is fcuked..dont know why but a lot of people is facing the same problem. but yo thanks for the feedback man..really appreciate it!