............AiYo..G.s.R...Wth..A..loVE..traCk...............

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..........rNb..Wth..fasT..pacE..raPPIN
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,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Rnb...n..1sT..verSe..bY..Lil..BanNEr............
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blah need 2 improve...

Did..YA...hear..It

ANY..MORE..COMMENTZ

okay i had to stop listening to it when i started hearing that 'fast rapping' shit. seriously..what the hell do u want us to tell when u make tracks like this?! no one's gonna babyfeed u....come to a decent stage and then expect us to give u technical comments.

oh by the way, ur fast paced rap sounds like sumone increased their tempo slightly. but either way..it sounds horrible.

no flow...2 tel u da turth bro.....

i agree wid AK.... and stop trynna rap FAST....therez no need to rap fast...nobody ever said dat rap needs to be fast.... it jz needs to b pleasant to listen 2.... so jz focus on da overall quality of da track nex tym.....lyrically, delivery, flow, depth.. etc...beautiful beat tho...whoz beat is it?

beats frm rockitpro i guess :S...newayz 2nd verse was wayy better den da 1st verse.....u guyss need to improve moreee...dis trak wasnt gud

ok..mAn......sorrY....FO..FASt..RAPPInh

haire....lyk i sed it once, this track was kinda bad.. flow wasn't gud, hooks okay, background teke...2nd verse chole...eita abr korle..hoito bhalo hote pare ...

but remem this homies..doin a gud rnb track aint that easy...seeing what they produced, then agian this being one of their most earliest trax..not bad really..