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Lyrix By Stray.


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Disclaimer: I'm not to be held responsible if this song give(s) you a bad buzz.

Tanzz.oma? Tauhid bhaia [auto_freak]'s friend, right? Think I know you.

Anyway, I like the lyrics. Read a few of Stray's in the other section of the forum. I gotta say, he's good.

Guess you know me from wheelsbd; I go there now and then.

tanzz... nyc 1... don take any of wad i'm sayin now as
discouragement... u did good... obviously strays lyrics were awesum...
bt his lyrics were not TAILORED for this specific beat...the lyrics was
generally writing u kno wad i mean? so wen u placed the lyrics on a
specific beat u shudve put sum changes here and there to match the
lyrics to the beat..maybe skip or add a few words... the first 2 lines
have sum pronounciation problems.... other than that it's fine..
pronounciation problems u can improve by not trying to CORRECTLY
pronounce the WHOLE word... u never have to pronounce the WHOLE word jz
do it in a way dat sounds nyc n s long s ppl get it its fine.... ur
flow wz very nyc ....obvious improvement... used strays lyrics
nicely...also from nex time try 2 add extra layers to ur vocals...ryt now u jz
use one layer...(no "yos" or yeas or heys or woooos etc... u kno dat
kinda thing).... n also add adlibs emphasis words...e.g.add extra focus
to da last few words of a sentence by double recordin it....

There's
definitely potential no doubt abt dat... u got a good voice...keep up
da good work.... itz better 2 write ur own lyrics coz like i said
somebody elses lyrics is never gonna b tailored for u or the beat u
choose n editin somebody elses lyrics duzn do justice to them either u
kno wad i mean?

keep up da good work...hope 2 c more from u...

I used Stray's lyrix 'cause it just seemed less of a hassle and it was an almost fit. Thing is, I still have a long long long way to go. But, there's this thing I believe, "It's the way you say; not, what you say." So, I'm trying to improve my spitting first.

I'll def. write my own lyrix from next on. Will work on mixing too.

And, now that I have you on msn; I'll bug you for help. =P

no problem... and yes... "It's the way you say; not, what you say." that's EXACTLY wad i ment