UNDERGROUND _ DEMONIC [DOWNLOAD NOW]

CHK this out ppl...a new track fo the new year and the new decade...tried a
different kinda flow out here and also bangla gangsta fo the 1st tym.....
lemme kno if it worked or not.....

DWNLD LINK
http://www.4shared.com/file/185430594/4e16053c/UNDERGROUND_DEMONIC.html

LYRIX

HOOKS x2

So called thugs tryina
Hold me down
Tryina push me in2 a corner
Watch me rebound
Standin in ur crowd
Watch me announce
I'ma take ova ur turf
And ur underground

VERSE1
luk at ma rhymz so twisted
ur brigga DEMON iz doin dis
poizonin tha mind wit toxins
of sex n drugs n violence
twistin dem words to verses
verses to gangsta chronic
dem bullets sprayin lyk shit
sic cunt tha namz demonic
ma briggaz just stay up on it
dis sounds so gangsta......don it.

kids everyday show up on tha block
tryina do the brigga gangsta talk
tryina catch tha bd gangsta swagger
talkin bout playin wit guns n dagger
briggaz runnin after tha hiphop flavour
bangladesh caught up in tha fever.

brigga d'u get/wat um really gettin atcha/
luv 2 look back n say dat i toldja/
little pussies keep up there back bitin/
enuff of the blame game/
enuff of the hidin/
u wanna say sumin 2 me/
say it on ma face/
u aint got the guts
u'z a disgrace

sholo liner kotha ekhon kahini sehsh
koto gutibaaj shala koto shoddo besh
footpath'e boshe tara 10/a
boyesh'e boro, tao bhoiyete kape
line aar shurer ei kothar khelai
bangla raper ei aajob melai
ei bhinno jogote
nemechi joy korte
manusher mon
to win the crowd
brigga hear me now
cholo hariye jai
in the UNderground

HOOKS x2

So called thugs tryina
Hold me down
Tryina push me in2 a corner
Watch me rebound
Standin in ur crowd
Watch me announce
I'ma take ova ur turf
And ur underground

VERSE 2

giv me the mik yo/
giv me th platform/
giv me the chnce nigga/
u'll kno whoz demon
rippin up the beat n yo/
tearin up the studio/
niggaz now ask on/
heida abar keda go/
Demonic ekhon chinbi to/
chalai pura ellaka yo
shat theke barosho/

puttin rhymes to them beats/
luk at the brigga stack creds/
jst a push on ur back/
and em cards fall down/
lyk domino effect/
he is a lyrical wreck/
its a visible fact/...
not only a physical attack/
is a critical effect/...
in this game called rap/
its all is fair check/
me standin in this booth
makin a flowrical impact/

shobdo ortho jeno ghurni jhorer beg/
eshechi,poth onek /
eishober jonno noi/
ekdin shobi chole jabe/ ache shei bhoi/
manushe koi/ eishob kore hobe na/
ami boli shobi hobe/
money lage chetona/
protidin ekhane ghote
notun notun ghotona
10/a te gennjam
maramarir thelai bache na
huda kame hedom abar patt loy ajaira
17 bochorer picchi pola
abar bhab loi gangsta
elakar boro gunda
haire picchi pola
eta naki tor area
tor alakai
tor bel nai
tor dam nai
dui poishar

HOOKSx2

So called thugs tryina
Hold me down
Tryina push me in2 a corner
Watch me rebound
Standin in ur crowd
Watch me announce
I'ma take ova ur turf
And ur underground

DWNLD LINK
http://www.4shared.com/file/185430594/4e16053c/UNDERGROUND_DEMONIC.html

hook was okay..bt lacked da pro touch..
i lyk dis a lot better than the otha one...accent needz a lil work...nd verses build up well at times..bt den da blank beatz werent wise...and deres dis thyng..lyk wen u switch from part 1 of verse 1 to part 2...it was awkward..cuz it din go wit da beat pattern......beatz are made as multiplez of 2 barz i ges...letz say each bar is a SECTION..so u see da 1st part..u hv 5 bars...which meanz the 5th section is incomplete, so itz an awkward end/start...u shud get wat um sayin..nd um being critical cuz u got potential...work on da small thyngs...i lyk da slower flow better...overally...on a better level than most of the trackz around these dayz...

Octa wrote:hook was okay..bt lacked da pro touch..
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see,um the preacher of all lol,i digg the hooks...thot it wud b sum "shuinna rak" typa track but lyrics poira bujhlam onno kichu lol..nvm anyway,khali jaiga rakha rap er jonno kothikor and work on the flow,as octa said !
ur new in the game but still got alota potenital (rho line).Bless!(Y)

myc 1 demonic...u got potential lyk o n pro said bt it's kinda linear...i mean same theme 2 ur every trak... try smthn different lyk maybe a club or story tellin type...best o luck man

@ Octa: didnt get most of the things u said.. ..but i'ma decode it.....and try 2 get wat u said..........

@pro: moja low, na!!!.......thnx fo the 'potential' compliment....

@ Riddler: yeh, iwz thinkin too ma tracks r turnin out 2 be of the same type.....i'ma try sumin different next time.....

nice sh8 demonic.....well hooks needs sum work...and yeah if u wrote a better rhyme then u can make a better flow

ok......thnmx newayz..

ne more feeds??

hey nyc shit brah
lyk it

thnx man..means a lot......

i'm waiting in traffic rite now but i'll comment and see how much u improved :p

Octa wrote:hook was okay..bt lacked da pro touch..
i lyk dis a lot better than the otha one...accent needz a lil work...nd verses build up well at times..bt den da blank beatz werent wise...and deres dis thyng..lyk wen u switch from part 1 of verse 1 to part 2...it was awkward..cuz it din go wit da beat pattern......beatz are made as multiplez of 2 barz i ges...letz say each bar is a SECTION..so u see da 1st part..u hv 5 bars...which meanz the 5th section is incomplete, so itz an awkward end/start...u shud get wat um sayin..nd um being critical cuz u got potential...work on da small thyngs...i lyk da slower flow better...overally...on a better level than most of the trackz around these dayz...

Man i shdn't hv read wat Octa said lol. he said pretty much all I was thinking...so for hooks...mix it better dude! hook got potentials need proper execution. overall the beat's bass is SOOO fucked up lol....the bass was exceeding the threshold rlly bad (and my headphone is rlly sensitive abt bass..so it sounded horrible). octa rlly said everything i wanted to tell lol. but keep it up dude! just work on ur accent and mixing (always turn the vocal dB higher and make sure it doesn't get layered up with the instrumental line). u got talent and by listening to this track i can tell that u put ur effort and did ur homeworkk. dont get happy though...now u gotta live upto our expectations hehe.

lol...thnx mate...and yeh now dat i ve reached sum sorta standards i'ma try harder......