Tomar oppekhay-Sha-1

track name:Tomar oppekhay
instrumental: Rockit pro
mixed by $pitfire

its Sha-1's 1 of experimental track..only a demo..he will do da full length track on my own Composed beat

http://www.4shared.com/file/215011360/b541f0a5/Tomar_oppekhay.html

Constructive criticism appreciated frm Singing to mixin

Shopno gulo ajo ache,
sudhu nei ami,
smrity gulo ajo ache,
Sudhu nei tumi,
Shopno gulo firiye dao,
Smrity gulo muche dao,



Din kete jaay,
tomar oppekkhaay...
dristy mele roii,
tomar oppekkhay..
*!*!
Tobuo ajo ami,
tomar oppekhay,
Shornali bikele,
takiye roi ami akash pane,
Mridu hawa boye geche,
nistobdho aj ai prithibite,
amar....


**rapping verse**
Tomay koto bhalo bashi taki tumi jano?
amar moner bhitore sudhui tumi acho,

Nirbak shobdo diye likhi ai chithy,
Nirshongo rat guloy sudhui tomay cheyechi,

Garo adhare dheke geche aj amar ai prithiby,
tobuo bhulini tomar shei shitol chahoni,


shei shob kotha gulo ki shob e mitthe?
tobe bolo aj kano amar mon bhenge dile?

pother dike cheye roi ajo tomar ashay,
osohay hoye ami tomar mitthe bhalobashay,

buk fata kanna ami hasi mukhe par kori,
chokher panite dekhi shob smrity gulo mone,


Din kete jaay,
tomar oppekkhaay...
dristy mele roii,
tomar oppekkhay..
*!*!
Tobuo ajo ami,
tomar oppekhay,
Shornali bikele,
takiye roi ami akash pane,
Mridu hawa boye geche,
nistobdho aj ai prithibite,
amar....


Din kete jaay,
tomar oppekkhaay...
dristy mele roii,

(2X)

so that was the track u was talkin bout? i felt the lyrics... donno bout the beat, as it's juss a demo i hope spitti's original beat will do proper justice 2 the track, i digged the rap verse, lyrics were matured enuf, singin was ok, but i hope the real version will be a blast since this 1 left something 2 be desired for...