[[[ SINISTER ]]] DIE TRYNA BE ALIVE [[[ SINISTER ]]]

WADDUP ERRY1...NEW TRACK OUT BY [[[ SINISTER ]]] With [[[ OCTA | RAIZ-R ]]] in it, titled " DIE TRYNA BE ALIVE - [[[ SINISTER ]]] "...itz a track dazz been done to express the feelings in the truest form..hope u all like it..

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HOOKS : [[[ OCTA ]]]
VERSE 1 : [[[ OCTA ]]]
VERSE 2 : [[[ RAIZ-R ]]]
VERSE 3 : [[[ OCTA ]]]

Mixed by : Octa
Mastered by : I dont know What masterin is..so fuck it =P

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Lyrics :

[[[ INTRO ]]]

yeah, sinister in dis bitch mate
livin dis madafuckin bitch life
u kno, dis bitch ain one u wanna fuck
bt one dat fucks u up
um standin, um thynkin bout ma life
i'm tryna stand ma ground, and um tryna survive

[[[ HOOK ]]]

um starin at ma life
as it passes byyy
um tryna hold onnnn
um tryna surviiveee

and dis demons keep singin in ma ears lyk a lullaby
one life one goal one shot one role..gotta die tryna be alive

[[[ VERSE 1 ]]]

life's about a loss of lotta blood, a lot of power and might and lot of flesh
a lot a possiblitlites, a quest to da ansa to lotta quest-tions,
artificialness, meshes tigther dan fisher nets
gotta get thru it first shot so better try yo best
i done it man...i done dis shitt
I holla man
i'm gonna run dis bitch
so follow me if u wanna make ya wallet change from blue collar man
to sumn lyk..shining white, with shining ice..
bt ain on tym to dream now..dont go to sleep, so dont turn the lights off

[[[ HOOK ]]]

[[[ VERSE 2 ]]]

LYRICS COMING SOON

[[[ HOOK ]]]

[[[ BRIDGE 1 ]]]

[[[ HOOK ]]]

[[[ VERSE 3 ]]]

um sittin nd watchin it passing by
surrounded by the questions that be askin why
i exist..not die?
watz wrong watz right?
watz not worth risking, whats worth a try?
i wonder why..i'm not a guy..hu'd fake it jst to pave his way?
i wnder y a hero cant save dis day?..nd bein a villain is da safest way?
to make his place..solid..embodied deep into fuckin rocks..
bt on limestone, so it wen rains,it drips away as friggin chalks
i remain longer dan crocs...saving up da energy each n errydrop
run thru da whole dictionary, there two words I missed..DEFEAT and STOP

[[[ BRIDGE 2 ]]]

DEFEAT AND STOP X 4

[[[ HOOK ]]]

[[[ OUTRO ]]]

[[[ SINISTER ]]]

Thanks for the Support and Feeds everyone. =D

Thanks to Korupt for being my ASSISTANT EAR =P

mmmmm wat shud i say......not bad not bad.......its jst...really gr8 hehehehe my ears gooooood

Edit :- THNK U MR. I FORGOT WHICH EAR IT WAS FOR THE HONOR :@

Note:- if any1 says this sucks.....in ur nxt dream imma rip ur balls off

thnx korupt fo da help aswell..
and yh i forgot to mention..
credit fo beat production goes to Exile Beats..

aweum hookz... mixin wz da best...razrs verse turned out best imo...octas 1st verse wz gr8 bt da last verse...i donno ..tongue twisters jz don seem to work wid such deep themes...takes away da focus imo... bt daz not to say dis wz nt a gud trak...itz really gud speciallyda hookz...

thnx saadh bhai....yhh i realize bout da 3rd verse..itz lyk..with a mike with such sensitivy, itz hard to protray emotions when goin fast...i suck at emotions aanyway lol..bt yh i shudda chosen a slower verse...still no regretz...thanx fo da feed =D

verse 1 was a killer!
i luvd the bridge and Aleef laila,u shud open school to teach autotune cuz ur amazing at it xP....very addictive song...just increase the dB of ur vocals and upload it back,chorom hobe :O

thnx pro =D nd no i dun teach no one shitt =P um selfish (a) haha nd umm..uploadin it agen wud be too much work man =( sorry bout dat

the mixin is weird and nyc....sumin different....Octa is gud..no doubt bout it...but ma fav Sinister wz always Raiz-R..dat dude has a kick ass flow....

it was awesome specially hookz... keep it up

thnx demonic n xeff =D I, too , do believe that raiz-r is the man =D

damn, good work guys. I like the theme that you guys portrayed. It's a change from all the club and street bangers you released. Keep it up. Btw, both of you had an awesome flow and I would have to agree with Riddler bout the last verse. When I heard it I concentrated on what you were saying but still it was hard to understand it. Since this track is more bout what you guys were saying, the last verse did not work out, but saying that the last verse had a killer flow.

thanx emon =D

sounds like sumone used an Equalizer on the chorus...? hehe.

hook is my favorite. verses still cud be a lot more 'clearer with more focus' u know. flow was sick the whole time..just the overall 'focus' felt like it was on the beat. lol..i got nothing to really say that's why i'm trying to be bitchy abt mixing :p

oh one thing...i wud hv at least liked ot hear one very 'aggressive' type Yung Jeezy type verse...but that's jst my music taste i guess.

lol a.k i hv no idea wat i did..fiddled around a lil yess =D and bout da FOCUS..if u mean da volume level n stuff....yhh i ges it cud be cause da sound SETS in ma ears bcuz of lissenin to it over agen..nd since i kno all da lyricz..it seems lyk da words are loud n clear u kno wat i mean?! and yh..agressive...? thanks fo ur suggestion man... =D nd btw..see how many times derz "[[[ ]]]" in this thread? dazz y itz OL MINE =P

diggin it & also feelin it. Both of u were good ..last verse was awsum octa ...& hook was also awsum...

looks like you spent a lot of time on this
its nice,smooth ass shit.
The mixing is mad weird but its dope specially the last bridge!
Raiz-r killed it here,did better then you,this songs going to my iPod.

the hook was awesome. raizr's verse was dope mixing was of the hooks. overall beshi joss mad props

the song format wasn't right... it dragged on for quite a while. i think there was no need for the hook to repeat after bridge 1 (which i liked btw).. octa could've easily jumped in there and it'd have made the song a lot more coherent in terms of format. the mixing had way too many things going on.. like those backing whisper shit with the telephone effect made the whole thing sound very chaotic. overall i found the mixing to be very muddy. lyrically could've been a lot better as well.. but it's nice to see you guys stepping out of your comfort zone of just party/brag joints. keep at it!

@sharjil: thanks man =D raiz-r's a beast and um a chicken when in comes to emotional trackz lol =P
@ping : thanks bro =D
@ mode : ohh ayt..thanks for ur opinion tho =D

Mode Silver wrote:the song format wasn't right... it dragged on for quite a while. i think there was no need for the hook to repeat after bridge 1 (which i liked btw).. octa could've easily jumped in there and it'd have made the song a lot more coherent in terms of format. the mixing had way too many things going on.. like those backing whisper shit with the telephone effect made the whole thing sound very chaotic. overall i found the mixing to be very muddy. lyrically could've been a lot better as well.. but it's nice to see you guys stepping out of your comfort zone of just party/brag joints. keep at it!

my mixing sounds muddy too. could ju' drop solutions ?

lil ping wrote:

Mode Silver wrote:the song format wasn't right... it dragged on for quite a while. i think there was no need for the hook to repeat after bridge 1 (which i liked btw).. octa could've easily jumped in there and it'd have made the song a lot more coherent in terms of format. the mixing had way too many things going on.. like those backing whisper shit with the telephone effect made the whole thing sound very chaotic. overall i found the mixing to be very muddy. lyrically could've been a lot better as well.. but it's nice to see you guys stepping out of your comfort zone of just party/brag joints. keep at it!

my mixing sounds muddy too. could ju' drop solutions ?

lol dude there's no straight up solution for mixing. you just have to fiddle around and train your ears. but one thing i can suggest is not to fill your song with layers. not unless you have a good grip of basic ideas of mixing.

yeh mode and ping..derz a thread for discussions of mixing tips..u both can visit dat..no offenz to no one... but lets stick to the topic

dope man ! I like the hook and octa's 1st verse...RAIZ-R was also tight ! But bro i didn't feel the last verse...all over a gr8 track

ATLAST!! anoda track which i can hear n say bd hip hop lives

fuck this octa kid..this nigga shud be executed ferr being this dope -__-
fuck you man..yeah octa you!! -__-