The Spit Plot-Plastik [Comeback track]

Ayyo haters and lovers!! Thought Plastik buried himself after sum humiliation?? nah..utilized ma time improving ma skills and findin a way out how to kill da haters wid tight verse..Dis is a trak frm ma mixtape Plastik Surgery!

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Lyrics

Track: THE SPIT PLOT
Artist: PLASTIK
Mixtape: PLASTIK SURGERY
Beat: RockitPro
Mixed and Mastered by: PLASTIK

INTRO

HOOKS:

Got me Plastik! Firing up dis spot
Action's certified coz I m lyrically fought
Burning mics wid ma bars and making it hot
So heyya all haters dis is da spit plot (x2)

VERSE 1:

Ma sounds hypnotize ya like a magician's curse
Your chest get da bullets from each n evry verse
You all stay silent to understand ma lyrics
Then go n be thinking like I was part of the critics
One asks da other how this kid spits so fine
There's always a new story in my each nd every line
Some might lose their temper coz I spit da truth
You guys run behind me as if you are a sleuth
I am da warrior of dis verbal battle
All da other rappers are still in their cradle
I own dis place, da whole of dis battlefield
Losers use disses as their back keepin shield
I m gonna spit wid logic, ohh das tragic!
The listeners are now experiencing ma magic
Making you mesmerised wid ma spit plot
So heyya all haters take ma shots

HOOKS:

Got me Plastik! Firing up dis spot
Action's certified coz I m lyrically fought
Burning mics wid ma bars and making it hot
So heyya all haters dis is da spit plot (x2)

VERSE 2:

You all are damn faggots just like dead mouse
I kill da big just by reppin in ma house
Young in age but ma ability's really mature
I use hip hop as brain and ears cure
Need no blacksmith to make me da ladder of fame
I do it by ma self need no1 in dis game
Make it fresh, there's a lot wer it came from
Call it EDS or Ear Destroying Syndrome
Ma flow reaches all like viruses frm hackers
Im da quarterback and all are linebackers
You all are micro maniacs dont knw how to spit
Got no accent no flow u all are just shit
Diss is all u got now try to verse me
You got no balls dats all I can see
You dont even deserve to rhyme in a trash pot
Just learn from me coz dis is da spit plot

Got me Plastik! Firing up dis spot
Action's certified coz I m lyrically fought
Burning mics wid ma bars and making it hot
So heyya all haters dis is da spit plot (x2)

Outro


Hope u like it!! Stay tuned brodahz!! Plastik rejoins da game!

wel it's good to c that you took time to improve plastic...honestly i thought u'd never improve but yea i wz wrong... this is definitely better than your previous attempts...that said... there is obviously still a whole lot of room for improvement...try to spit louder in2 the mic s in with more energy... the level of energy needs to be on par with the lyrics...lyrics r good for now.... hooks weren't good at all.... and u put 2 many words in each bar and u tried to fast forward through the bars so u get to say all the words...u kno wad i mean? jz cut down a few words so u don have to force each line to finish b4 the beat drops....this is all just constructive criticism that u need to improvise on... but this track really shows a big leap from ur previous stuff...try 2 follow( =notice not copy) other improving artists here on dr....

TheRiddler wrote:wel it's good to c that you took time to improve plastic...honestly i thought u'd never improve but yea i wz wrong... this is definitely better than your previous attempts...that said... there is obviously still a whole lot of room for improvement...try to spit louder in2 the mic s in with more energy... the level of energy needs to be on par with the lyrics...lyrics r good for now.... hooks weren't good at all.... and u put 2 many words in each bar and u tried to fast forward through the bars so u get to say all the words...u kno wad i mean? jz cut down a few words so u don have to force each line to finish b4 the beat drops....this is all just constructive criticism that u need to improvise on... but this track really shows a big leap from ur previous stuff...try 2 follow( =notice not copy) other improving artists here on dr....

cudn't hv said it better. just take notes on what Riddler said or look back at them for ur next track. Good luck!!

improved !!!!!!

Yup!! few holes to be filled still...Salutes to brodah Riddler for da advice...This endeavor was just a sample.. wid dis track I wanted to prove dat der is a rapper named Plastik who exists..No matter what I be..I m gonna hold on to da term "IMPROVEMENT" and let go to it wen I reach my destination..Thnx brodah!!

nice improvement man!
but u gotta spit louder,i knw,u feel kinda embarassed wen u record,cos ur parents mite think dat ur crazy,as dey mite hear u frm outside,dats y u dont spit loudly,same thing happens wimme.

but anywayz,u improved a lot,just wrk on ur accent nd flow....