Shapeless Paradigm

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peace.

OKay i'm bored..jsut wrote random stuff...these might be very 'wtf' type stuff unless u r reading it as what i was thinkin' when i was writing lol. i think it's deep but idk.

[00:15] It aint jst be a rhyyyyyyyyyme
Tastin' dat pure vines they soberin' with their whiiiiine (not 'wine'..but 'whine'..if u get this line...u'll get rest of the verse lol)
[00:22] this life's so fiiiiiinne
when you got that paradigm
figured out like the steward on his miind
[00:29]sicken to that stomach as he searchin' in that liiiiiine
full of teachers preachers killers
all up on ma grinnndd
[00:36] The faint light now be palein like the Palin
as she pealin pure dealings
from ma little creeled ceilings
[00:42]letters full of guilt
as they know they justgotta tilt
for them life be one silt
built under my sealed street
it's just the way i do
by doing what they boo
they who? who knows who be the whos
when the whos r just the fools
of ma miiiind
as i'm takin' the precious dimes
splittin' them into fractions of crimes
oh so devine!
it's so refiiiiiiiiiiined!
the irony wont stop
until they make it to the top
when they can't even drop
out of my paradigm's plot

Chorus: [2X]

walkin' thru the path
without a full road
but full of wrath soaked
with memories pure cold
golden with the bolt
and so solid like a colt
while they fadin' away
in my paradigmic moult

verse 2...eh out of ideas lol.

I like the beat...but those words don't fit them well...maybe just a matter of taste...but that beat rocks!!

thanks man.

lol there's a very unique flow to this..unless u hear a rapper spittin' these lines...there's no way one can rlly fit them lol. it's not a 'freestyle' type verse...coz i'm not a rapper and dont rlly know how to write freestyle type verses lol.

this shit is dope! keep it up asif! and try some westcoast/midwest type beats.. all i hear from you are these dirty south-esque stuff lol.

thanks a lot mode! yeah i think this type of beats r in my comfort zone haha. and u got that right...i hv this secret addiction towards dark dirty south stuff..hehe. but yeah ur point noted. i'll try to diversify my stuff.

AKProductions wrote:thanks man.

lol there's a very unique flow to this..unless u hear a rapper spittin' these lines...there's no way one can rlly fit them lol. it's not a 'freestyle' type verse...coz i'm not a rapper and dont rlly know how to write freestyle type verses lol.

yeah that's olso true I can't tell until you put them on the beat...but the beat rocks...i realy like it...really good for an extrabeat...

wo man.....love da lyrics... i haven heard da beat yet... could u again(like da last time lol) plz gimme a 4shared link? who knows i mite steal this 1 tooo

Wafi: thanks a lot again bro! i'm glad u liked it!

anything for u Saad bhai. lemme know if u want the final version of the beat too...but dont rely on me as i dont know if i can work on anything before summer. I'm in love with the flow more than the beat (the beat sounds sorta too upbeat for my very own taste hahaha)..really wish I could rap lol. But I'll try to see if I can find a local rapper who'll fit this type of flow.

BEAT UPDATED. Wud u please listen again?

I still got one more verse to figure out and then just sum mastering!!! ahhh i'm really feeling the emotions in this piece of music...are you?

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dope!!!!!!! liked it a lot ak thumbs up

thanks man

damn...I like it and i can't help it...now here's the deal...check out my last creation that has a delivery that is far way better then the last one,and if you think i got enough skills let me use your beat so we can make a collaboration...I wuold love to!!
here is the link http://www.4shared.com/audio/UYACEs6J/This_is.html
please check it out and if you think I'm good enough give the opportunity to do something together...

thanks again bro.

but uh..the thing is...u r free to use the beat..but I don't quite do collabs..only one i did in the year was with riddler and it was for a cause..so yeah. not tyring to show off or anything....but when i collab..i am usually really into it..and i dont hv time for that now. check out the only collab i did in the longest time:

http://deshirhymes.virtuaboard.com/spittin-on-mics-audio-section-f6/forsaken-haiti-by-ak-productions-ft-the-riddler-and-sha-t-t3406.htm?highlight=forsaken

but again u can ask me for that beat..and as soon as i'm done i can send
it to u. i can't quite 'collab' and direct the overall song if that's wat u wanna do.

AKProductions wrote:thanks again bro.

but uh..the thing is...u r free to use the beat..but I don't quite do collabs..only one i did in the year was with riddler and it was for a cause..so yeah. not tyring to show off or anything....but when i collab..i am usually really into it..and i dont hv time for that now. check out the only collab i did in the longest time:

http://deshirhymes.virtuaboard.com/spittin-on-mics-audio-section-f6/forsaken-haiti-by-ak-productions-ft-the-riddler-and-sha-t-t3406.htm?highlight=forsaken

but again u can ask me for that beat..and as soon as i'm done i can send
it to u. i can't quite 'collab' and direct the overall song if that's wat u wanna do.

I just need that beat...that's what I meant for collab...but whatever i need that beat..could you make room for vocals??and when you're done I wuold love to use it...I thought you were some kind of beat maker...I didn't thought you put beat for free just fo' passion...Do you want the credit for the song??I mean I have to put you're name on the finished song like (pruduced by Ak production)???

well haha yeah as u can tell..i dont really care abt publicity/fame/money or watever. i jst make beats for fun...and so i give away my beats for free if someone asks 'em and i think they wont totally ruin it lol.

dont worry abt 'shoutout' in the track either...but yeah sure jst write produced by whom...i'll jst put a tag at the beginning of the beat and make room for vocals.

and jst to let u know..my beats r free...as long as they're for non-commerical use...which will be the case for u i believe.

if someone actually wants exclusive rights..then he needs to pay me..exclusive rights..as in that beat will be ONLY for him (some local rappers r also going to use the beat for making songs)

I don't care if other people will use the very same beat as long as I can use it I don't want any exclusive since my songs from the very first made in Italy to the very recent that I'm working on in bangla are all made with downloaded beat with some ecception of course...I just wanted to know if that beat was for free that's all...thanks homie...if you don't mind I'll put something in bangla on it and I defenetely think that you deserve the credit!!!
peace!!!

sounds good. i've no idea when/if i will finish this lol. but if i do..it'll be on ur way.

AKProductions wrote:sounds good. i've no idea when/if i will finish this lol. but if i do..it'll be on ur way.

well actually if you don't have enough time just make room for vocals and at least make two verses...it'll be ok...I think in bangla i can do much better so your beat won't be wasted...

I liked this very much. Its well done, quality has vastly improved. Some nice panning(or is it a tremolo plugin?) work there. But as usual, I've got comments to make.

- Could do without the vocal snippets. Unless you meant that just temporarily to fill it up.
- More separation work on the sounds during the chorus could be done. Some of the other synth melodies could be more prominent. To give an example, what i take is the Chorus - has strings, synths, hats, all elements of the higher frequencies, and they all fall right in the middle, all fighting for the same space.
- As for me, I would make the drums punchier, but not necessary. Drums to me are the core of the beat, and it should be strong.

What i didnt check was whether there was any clipping to the beat. Alot of folks who i speak to and tell them that certain elements arent strong enough, they compensate by setting the levels higher, thus introducing clips in a lot of places.

Very well done asif. Synthy work, something which im not good at

thanks a lot fiq bro! it makes me so happy when people can notice those small things that you highlighted since as a beatmaker/musician those small elements are really what always catches my attention/makes something sound unique etc. anyway, yeah it was just some sinusoidal panning using LFO. Vocal snippets are temporary..just wanted to get myself into the hype haha.

point noted and totally understood about the frequency distribution and punchy drumline. I think I hv a vague notion of what 'clipping' is..but i dont really know exactly to comment on that haha. again, thanks a lot for your comment!

its the small things that add up and make a mountain of a molehill.
subtle nuances if not checked may mess your beat up.

clipping occurs when your piece of audio is above the 0db mark. That introduces distortion, signal clips.

gosh why do i keep replying to DR right before im about to crash.
sighs. off to bed now. salams.

haha alrite man. yeah that's wat i was thinking of clipping...related to distortion..but didn't know wat it was.

take it easy.

AKProductions wrote:well haha yeah as u can tell..i dont really care abt publicity/fame/money or watever. i jst make beats for fun...and so i give away my beats for free if someone asks 'em and i think they wont totally ruin it lol.

dont worry abt 'shoutout' in the track either...but yeah sure jst write produced by whom...i'll jst put a tag at the beginning of the beat and make room for vocals.

Ok thanks...I'm bout to start working on a song as soon I have enough time...You tak it easy and take the time you need...I don't think that I'm in a hurry to make a song nor I have the time so...give to me when you're ok...