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In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R

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Mr.Bling
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1In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:12 pm

LIl BanNEr

LIl BanNEr
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

HeY Yoo sUp hoMiE... aFter The bIggest concert of hipHOp jatii 2010 we r agaIn bacK wth aN old tracK oF LInkiN ParK tatZ Iz

...................................In THE EnD..................................
We hVE coverEd Thiz tracK.... i HPe InshallaH yOU all Gonna LOVE It.



LinK:
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LYRIc:
one thing i dont know Y
It doesn’t even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind, I designed this rhyme
To explain in due time
All I know
time is a valuable thing
Watch it fly by as the pendulum swings
Watch it count down to the end of the day
The clock ticks life away
so unreal
Didn’t look out below
Watch the time go right out the window
Trying to hold on but didn’t even know
Wasted it all just to
Watch you go
I kept everything inside and even though I tried, it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time when I tried so hard

cHORUs

AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR UTBO TUMADER MAJA 
AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR KUJA NIBO AMAR OBOSTA
VERSe 2

One thing, I don’t know whyIt doesn’t even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind, I designed this rhyme
To remind myself how
I tried so hard
In spite of the way you were mocking me
Acting like I was part of your property
Remembering all the times you fought with me
I’m surprised it got so (far)
Things aren’t the way they were before
You wouldn’t even recognize me anymore
Not that you knew me back then
But it all comes back to me
In the end
You kept everything inside and even though I tried, it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time when I tried so hard

CHORUS
AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR UTBO TUMADER MAJA 
AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR KUJA NIBO AMAR OBOSTA


I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
For all this
There’s only one thing you should know
I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
For all this
There’s only one thing you should know
CHORUS 2..................................................................
PeacE........

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2In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:16 pm

LIl BanNEr

LIl BanNEr
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

feedZ plz ............ Hpe YOu all LikE IT 

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3In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:01 pm

WolFizzLA

WolFizzLA
King Of Rhymes
King Of Rhymes

rap verses were aite, considering the fact that it was a cover n the verses were quite easy ya could've done a better job, but don't get me wrong it was kinda good, but what's with the chorus? ai denar sasa ami abar utbo tumader maja- i didn' quite get the meaning, did u guys try to say- ei diner sheshe ami abar uthbo tomader majhey?

4In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:04 pm

LIl BanNEr

LIl BanNEr
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

ei diner sheshe ami abar uthbo tomader majhey....yea Smile ...i tried ma besT n i tried so hrd n gone so far ..tat waz hard fo me, tatz  y i had added a new chorus...
n thankx fo listeniN Smile

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5In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:55 am

LIl BanNEr

LIl BanNEr
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

need more cmnT 

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6In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:13 am

Mr.Bling

Mr.Bling
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

gud

7In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:02 pm

LIl BanNEr

LIl BanNEr
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

thankX Smile

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8In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:13 pm

mc shanz

mc shanz
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

verses = okay

chorus = when it started i was like In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Affraid In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Affraid then In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Lol dude verses were good but chorus ta bhoot bhoot lagse..(to me don't knw bout others) do 1 thing if possible do it again n dnt make the chorus like this do it simple as LP (comparing to this Razz ) am tellin u ppl gonna like it....

Besta luck man (Y)

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9In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:16 pm

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

100% agree wid u shanz bro . banner bro dont take it negetively the chorus really weird ...... make it again bro and make it simple .

10In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:23 pm

LIl BanNEr

LIl BanNEr
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

hmm sURE Smile

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11In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:00 pm

DwaynE NakiB WadE

DwaynE NakiB WadE
Destined 2 Rap
Destined 2 Rap

moRe FeedZ neeDed WherE IZ PRO, aK & RiddLEr.................. waiTiN Fo thr cmnTz 


peacE

12In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:02 pm

TheRiddler

TheRiddler
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

verses were ok but cud have been better executed <<< clarity needed not in ur voice bu t i think the environment u record in needs to be quieter...

verses were still good...

chorus is what messed it up....

good attempt ..keep it up... i don wanna go in2 technical stuff coz this is a cover... peace

13In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Empty Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:55 am

DwaynE NakiB WadE

DwaynE NakiB WadE
Destined 2 Rap
Destined 2 Rap

THANkx Fo UR cmNt RiddlEr BrO Smile samNa inshallaH arO joss KorbO 

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