Birthday Sex(cover) - MC NS

hey bro's im back with a cover... i was so bored so i made this track.. just havin fun... i love rnb tracks but i cant sing thats why i use autotune usually... feedbacks DR
http://www.4shared.com/audio/8RaQWqgh/Birthday_Sex_-_MC_NS.html (Previous Version)

http://www.4shared.com/audio/SZQ5bXzl/Birthday_Sex_Cover_-_MC_NS.html
(LINK UPDATED I changed the autotune settings)

Verse 1
It's yo birthday, so I know you want to ride out
Even if we only go to my house
Sip mo-eezy as we sit upon my couch
Feels good, but I know you want to cry out
You say u want passion, I think you found it
Get ready for action, don't be astounded
We switching positions, you feel surrounded
Tell me where you want your gift, girl

Chorus
Girl you know I-I-I, Girl you know I-I-I
I been feenin
Wake up in the late night
been dreamin about your loving, girl
Girl you know I-I-I, Girl you know I-I-I
Don't need candles and cake
Just need your body to make...
Birthday sex...Birthday sex oohoohoohooh
(it's the best day of the year girl)
Birthday sex...Birthday sex oohoohoohooh
(g-spot g-spot let me hit that g-spot g-spot girl)

Verse 2
See you sexy in them jeans got me on 10
1-2-3... Think I got you pinned
Don't tap out, fight until the end
Ring that bell, and we gon start over again
We grindin with passion, 'cause it's your birthday
Been at it for hours, I know you thirsty
You kiss me so sweetly, taste just like Hershey's
Just tell me how you want you gift, girl

Chorus
Girl you know I-I-I, Girl you know I-I-I
I been feenin,
Wake up in the late night
Been dreamin bout your loving, girl
Girl you know I-I-I, Girl you know I-I-I
Don't need candles and cake
Just need your body to make
Birthday sex...Birthday sex oohoohoohooh
(it's the best day of the year girl)
Birthday sex...Birthday sex oohoohoohooh
(g-spot g-spot let me hit that g-spot g-spot girl)

Verse 3
First, I'm gonna take a dive into the water deep
until I know I pleased that body (body)
Or girl without a broom I might just sweep you off yo feet
And make you wanna tell somebody (body) how I do
Or maybe we can float on top my waterbed (bed)
You close your eyes as I improv between your legs
We work our way from kitchens, stoves and tables
Girl, you know I'm more than able to please yeah
You say you wanted flowers on the bed (on the bed)
But you got me in hours on the bed

Chorus
Girl you know I-I-I, Girl you know I-I-I
I been feenin,
Wake up in the late night
Been dreamin bout your loving, girl
Girl you know I-I-I, Girl you know I-I-I
Don't need candles and cake
Just need your body to make...
Birthday sex...Birthday sex oohoohoohooh
(it's the best day of the year girl)
Birthday sex...Birthday sex oohoohoohooh

as I told you erlier...you use autotune pretty well...I like this one!!

Wafi wrote:as I told you erlier...you use autotune pretty well...I like this one!!

areh dost bangali bangla te kotha bolo eto english bhalo lage na
thnksssss bro

lol ar tumi to onek italian maro ar amare kow??lol

yupp..nyc use of autotune!

dope man !!
good use of autotune, almost lyk that used in the original man !

Wafi wrote:lol ar tumi to onek italian maro ar amare kow??lol

are dhurrr amare bolle to hoy

rash666 wrote:yupp..nyc use of autotune!

thnks man ..

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:dope man !!
good use of autotune, almost lyk that used in the original man !

hey man thnksssssss means a lot

Nah man !!! it wasnt like ur other traks..... the Auto tune was fluctuating too much ..... running out of tune like every now n thn.... n got a lot of distortion..... the issue is just about the auto tune... didnt go fo u this tym man..... its mainly because u cudnt sustain on one single note for too long... for which the auto tune flanged alot.... other thn that ur effort was good.... n other stuffs were good... just the auto tune jumbled it up... i kno it wnt b a problm for u cuz u can make it better.... best wishes....

Sha-"T" wrote:Nah man !!! it wasnt like ur other traks..... the Auto tune was fluctuating too much ..... running out of tune like every now n thn.... n got a lot of distortion..... the issue is just about the auto tune... didnt go fo u this tym man..... its mainly because u cudnt sustain on one single note for too long... for which the auto tune flanged alot.... other thn that ur effort was good.... n other stuffs were good... just the auto tune jumbled it up... i kno it wnt b a problm for u cuz u can make it better.... best wishes....

thnksss a lot 4 the comment i know tht theres something wrong in the track but i didnt catch where.. was just havin fun man coz i like this song nothing serious man

PS i finished this track today at 8 am.. in 15min XD XD it was the first time that i read the lyrics

wafi hai sentito la seconda versione???

Hmmm nice use of auto tune...tho i dunno how to use it and it was dope....

MC NS wrote:wafi hai sentito la seconda versione???

si questa ineffetti e parecchia piu' pulita e liscia

Wafi wrote:

MC NS wrote:wafi hai sentito la seconda versione???

si questa ineffetti e parecchia piu' pulita e liscia

e Vediiiiiiiiiiii XD XD XD

SaD1k wrote:Hmmm nice use of auto tune...tho i dunno how to use it and it was dope....

thnkssss man

this is good..but dont do covers bro waste of time!

gsifz wrote:this is good..but dont do covers bro waste of time!

bro im doing covers coz i need to improve my pronunciation... im to bad in english

che che che agula kirokom naam song er ? polapain noshto hoye gese

:LOL

good work NS (Y) but you got better tracks comparing to this i guess

mc shanz wrote:che che che agula kirokom naam song er ? polapain noshto hoye gese

:LOL

good work NS (Y) but you got better tracks comparing to this i guess

yeah man i got better stuff..

mc shanz wrote:che che che agula kirokom naam song er ? polapain noshto hoye gese

:LOL

good work NS (Y) but you got better tracks comparing to this i guess

agreed man... ur real good, dis wasnt dat fortunate...:\

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:

mc shanz wrote:che che che agula kirokom naam song er ? polapain noshto hoye gese

:LOL

good work NS (Y) but you got better tracks comparing to this i guess

agreed man... ur real good, dis wasnt dat fortunate...:\

areh bro 15minute e konu bhalo track bair kora jai?? XD ill improve next one will be better 100%