FIREWORKS (Feat. Drake, Alicia Keys)

My own version of Fireworks, on Drake and Alicia Keys' track from 'Thank Me Later'.

Feedback.
http://www.4shared.com/audio/Xe7CkOS9/Fireworks.html

lyrics

I got this feeling in my chest and I can't really explain it
Grew apart from everyone that I've been acquainted
Friends, we got closer, enemies eliminated
I was in a dark place, I can finally say I made it
Yeah, life's trials & tribulations a never ending cycle I'm stuck in contemplation
Done with hesitating, time to bring my best foot forward climb the ladder to greatness
I got it, I got it man, but I'll prolly stay underrated
Underestimated, and perhaps even a little hated
Because for now until forever ima keep doin me
I just hope the glitz and the glam never get to ruin me
Everybody I'm cool with, I'm hoping you stay cool with me
I'm still real, I hope you see all that's true in me
I'm not there yet, I'll wait it out, leave it up to the higher works
The day I make it man, you'll be settin off fireworks

same problem as the other track.. very incoherent flow... it's almost like you're reading the lyrics from a newspaper or something lol.. work on flow!

Will do bro. Thanks.