Down for me (RnB) sang for the 1st time.

Hey ppl wad up ? I was really bored and i decided to make a track so i recorded this track,okay but something is different this time i didn't rap i sang this..I always wanted that am gonna sing and rap too but never sang...This is the FIRST TIME that am singing so try to avoid the flaws neway i really want to improve in singing too so please throw some advice thank you !

THE HOOK IS WITH THE BEAT !

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LYRIC _

Hook-

I wanna know will u be down for me,
this is something that we just can’t fight
and it just feels so right,
tonight.
I wanna know will u be down for me,
this is something that we just can’t hide,
not this time.


Verse

Lady
can'tchu feel the love i got for you?
Lady
I know you love me,Don'tchu?

ask your girlfriends,ask your mommy
an the right guy for you baby
yeah done mistakes,
please forgive me

Never gonna let tears come out
never again gonna letchu feel so down
i last chance please forgive me
I'll be down for you



Please leave your feed

no feeds ?

checked it. it will be better if u stick to rap

Stick to rap man ^^ hook is fire ^^

thx for your feed guys !

Can i get some more comments please ? :S :S

trk er ek matro beat tai tama...and ya hook iz damnnnn......man u need a lot of workss. nice try....

hey brotha lemme tell ya...no offense buh ya ain't fit for R n B...stick to rap...I was disappointed when I heard this one I expected more...

Wafi wrote:hey brotha lemme tell ya...no offense buh ya ain't fit for R n B...stick to rap...I was disappointed when I heard this one I expected more...

sry man but no excuse this is the 1st ever time i sang in ma whole life,n i just tried it this why i didn't even released it from any groups i just posted here to get honest feeds...Thanks for your feed man i better stick to rap

bro....tomr verse er tune ta ... u get me right ? ur voice n tuning didn't match this rnb thing....trust me man, ur a really dope rapper, stick to that

peace !

If you got interest on singing,don't give up seeing all the negative reviews.Sing at times when you are bored,etc. that would be more than enough of a practice.The hook of the song is okay.Good Luck.

Bro this track aint that good . STICK to RAP or else practice singin ..

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:bro....tomr verse er tune ta ... u get me right ? ur voice n tuning didn't match this rnb thing....trust me man, ur a really dope rapper, stick to that

peace !

thnx bruv...

[P][R][O] wrote:If you got interest on singing,don't give up seeing all the negative reviews.Sing at times when you are bored,etc. that would be more than enough of a practice.The hook of the song is okay.Good Luck.

yeah i'll not do any rnb now I'll practice maybe after year i'll drop another hhaaha

Castic M!k wrote:Bro this track aint that good . STICK to RAP or else practice singin ..

thx fo ya feed mik..

yeah I agree with pro...ya got the voice but ya lack in coordination to use...ya know that singing it's all bout ears??ya just gotta practice...best of luck!!

thnx man...n yeah yesterday riddler bruv also said that ma voice suits RnB but just need to practice ......

gud but aroo vhaloo hoitoo............












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thnx fo droppin ya feed bro but sang for the 1st time in life...Inshallah i'll do more better next time.

dud practice korar dorkar...overall gud...............










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@shey-kill - thnx for your feed......

mayne juh b'cz ur noh gud in sumfin don mean u gotta giv up......ur oreddy a gud rappa so u can practise 2 improve in yo rnb den u'll b an allrounda...so don giv up keep on practisin.........

faez mahdi wrote:mayne juh b'cz ur noh gud in sumfin don mean u gotta giv up......ur oreddy a gud rappa so u can practise 2 improve in yo rnb den u'll b an allrounda...so don giv up keep on practisin.........

thnx bruv n yeah who said am givin up ? no no no i'll be back with RnB after more practicing

mc shanz wrote:

faez mahdi wrote:mayne juh b'cz ur noh gud in sumfin don mean u gotta giv up......ur oreddy a gud rappa so u can practise 2 improve in yo rnb den u'll b an allrounda...so don giv up keep on practisin.........

thnx bruv n yeah who said am givin up ? no no no i'll be back with RnB after more practicing

yeah dawg dazz day way 2 go......