okay... delivery needed agression
lyrics? to be honest...a few lines here and there was pretty tight..bt overall...
not whack..bt not how all dese ppl are jumpin bout it...
no psych. dude, but these ppl hear a "lyrical beat" and the get fooled thinking the whole track is a lyrical track...
bt whevva works for your audience..as much as i might hate soulja boyy..some ppl love em..so if u gettin love for whevva u doin..its cool...
pronounciation needs major work...
i see great potential in ur lyrical "thoughts"..bt execution gotta be perfectt... i'll give u a drake example..
i dont never play, like i got a sprained ankle => okayy pretty weak
like a sprained ankle, boy i ain nuthyn to be played with => pretty good
so same concept but u see how da impact changes? wish u all da best...
dont be demotivated, i'd rather spend my time sayin things that help some1 improve instead of copy pastin wowowow.
lyrics? to be honest...a few lines here and there was pretty tight..bt overall...
not whack..bt not how all dese ppl are jumpin bout it...
no psych. dude, but these ppl hear a "lyrical beat" and the get fooled thinking the whole track is a lyrical track...
bt whevva works for your audience..as much as i might hate soulja boyy..some ppl love em..so if u gettin love for whevva u doin..its cool...
pronounciation needs major work...
i see great potential in ur lyrical "thoughts"..bt execution gotta be perfectt... i'll give u a drake example..
i dont never play, like i got a sprained ankle => okayy pretty weak
like a sprained ankle, boy i ain nuthyn to be played with => pretty good
so same concept but u see how da impact changes? wish u all da best...
dont be demotivated, i'd rather spend my time sayin things that help some1 improve instead of copy pastin wowowow.