Killa Smilez<----- VS---->The Phantom

rules:

20 bars each (the number of lines)

must be broken into lines
for example:

this will not be taken

"these punk ass nikkaz wont see me retire, cuz i burn'em like CD writers, compare me to a dragon cuz i breath these fires, and i'm so past u i see you in diapers,"

no biting (you can't steal someone's rhymes")

no comebacks (whoever is last, can't diss the first person cuz of wah they said or how he typed it out)

IF ANY RULES ARE BROKEN, THEN YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED

vote's will be taking as brackets

Flow:
Punches:
Wordplay:
Mulites:
Vocabulary:
Overall:

NO DICKRIDING VOTES!

can't vote for yourself

and u have to explain why u chose that person.

i'll put up a poll but, the votes will be counted on the bracket system

first to 5 wins

til then, let the best man win

oh and um do u guyz want a poll aswell?

nvm got it...yea put polls..and give me 10 mins to write my shit...

oh by the way, how do u get to this thread from the Main Page?

look for the deshi battle forum on tha home page

ok check it

To me the mics-so-great i will have ure wack ass mi-grate right-next to the grave
by-the-way do u "see" the "point", got ure eyes-so-laid(isolate) with knives, u stand with nobody(no-body), now ure so brave//

imma magician, ill stick "money" thrru ure "eyes" till i Va-por You
now the only time u can "See" me is on "Pay"-Per-"View"//

Later-you....grab a, umbrella cuz the handle is a "parabella", see i "hook" u up nicely
u's a lil bitch, think like bitch no...brain melfunctions (Male Functions) rightly//

i've destrioyed so many kats like i was Bush.. u next like Israeli
u may throw punches and not knock out Jet, or Bruce..I've already done it precisely(Pre-Sliced-Lee)//

See u aint on ma level u down below like a beaver bitch
ill have ure body separating like Lilo is a "leaver" on Stitch//

Words i say leaves ure mouth shut like "im dumb" to Ex-e-cute (ask-a-mute)
but ill still spit nasty shit somthing like Next-to-puke//

ill put a hole in yo heart cuz my gun is the only key to Dead-Mans-Chest
my ears are "sharp" i hear the wack things u saying, aint talkin about Captain Jack
im talkin about Bat-Mans-Mask//

Too many thinkin on what i say replace the thought, i boast fighters
now the brain is caught on fire with salted skull, u still coudnt be a "Ghost-Rider (Ghost-Writer)//

Most lighters have "gass",
the-last of u will be heard once i remind u of the "match" u goin against the "Fire"//

im above yo level, uneven match, this is "Re-dic-ulus"
Already killed Fazze without battelin "Read This...You-Next"//

My heat is enough to lite the Twilight-Zone
Seen ure weak punches, soo why waste time and Fight-Foam//

As my flow rushes thru ure guts like the nile
i got pile of slugs, now i wanna see Killa-Smile//

Leaving u defeated..and rest of ure life in Denial
Seen u dial 911 so i had no option but to leave u worst condition then critical, had yo ass on X-File//

Next-Isle....See me Stack-Rifles
Rounds lift u up, dont look down, My-Fault (Might Fall)//

Like all symbols of Michael Jordan, ill hang u with shoes that u see tide on to street Light-Poles
As the Night-Falls, i eat, im Phantom despite-Souls//

Eat your Eye-Balls..While ure in-sight (inside) i might as well Synchrosize u hoe
Been throwin dice, playin C-Low//

While u "Rowing" MPH, soft shit like Pillows
I'll blow thru ure flows cuz I've done Kilos (Kill-Hoes)//

Hit u with a matelic door Liar..
cuz yo poor ass tryin to "Open" a phathatic meta-phor//

im sickk..i fuk then set a whore on Fire..
u'll be "Shocked" when u notice, u got a taser in yo brain
and when i "Step-up" u kno why u see "static" ladder for


done..i think thats 20 bars..
and thats the simplest i can do..
if u guys dont understand something just let me kno

r-e-s-p-e-c-t homie...nice shit u got rippd...luvd d wordplays..

cant be bad....cant be bad.....except da fact tht whn da hell did u beat me....maybe in ur fantasies.....but overalll damn phantom itz very gud...letz c wht killa produces....

lol i just put that cuz, u didnt accept my challenge
but thanks for the props guys

any votes?

how can ther be votes lol...killa smilez didnt go yet..

yea cuz he takin too long..lol

nice stuff phantom never thought u cud deliver HOT shit like dat



but dis line



"i've destrioyed so many kats like i was Bush.. u next like Israeli"



isnt Bush allied wit Isreal

damn, 20 bars??...real long.. lol.. keep it up.. waitin 4 da other verse

lol im not up to date then, thought Bush was goin after Israel next

bush goin after IRAN next...

but iran can fuck em ova

this is a text battle

not a political battle

lolz

wow i just sed one country, well it was to be a simily.

lool well werz tha otha verse so we can get votin

lol anytime soon now Killa Smilz.

killa wtf...whr r u man.....r u forfeitin or sth...com on man....giv ur shit quick so tht we can vote......

my bad i been out of town taking care of business but im back in full effect

ohhh.....kay.....so whrs da shit.....

i know dis nigga hungary// and he wanna eat//
but going against me// is like walking wit no feet

x da man(x-men)// he feeling blue like da beast
all dat slick talking// phantom u can keep//

u just not sweet// matta fact u just weak
schools in session //time for me 2 teach

go find a piano roam// ya fingers across da keys
like old folks say// u feeling frogish then leap

da boy K.S. a put u in// intensive care for weeks
i thought u knew// i kills wit da speech

no homo but u can //suck a dick betta than a leech
u want mo war well //bitch it gets deep

i'll knock out //each one of ya teeth// wit da piece
u 'll fold like sheets//mold like food sitting 4 weeks

i bet ya cloths be cheap// got a mask on ya face like sum type of freak
got a face that only ya mother can love

save da crying for da doves// u push so i shove
throwing viscous blows// like ali wit da gloves

afta dis// u gone need fazze 2 give u a hug
or lye down in a tub full of blood

spitting and coughing up ya guts
u planters peanutman// WE know u got nuts

but like a freakbitch// u know u just got fuck
yeah ya lyrics was tough// but just not enough

a official ryhmer for what// posting comments what da fuck
get smack like a hockey puck// i let loose goose goose u betta duck

becus eliminating my foe is a must// u puppy dog ass mut
run a train on ya slut// wit da whole D.R. what//

u know she take back shots// but did u know she take it n da butt
girl on girl wit boy action and// she catch & shallow nut//

we can collide like ya car hitting my truck
but one thing for sho i will fuck u up

im lyrically insane u lyrically not// u'll get tied up like knots
ur flow be cold// well i think not// da shit u spitting couldnt get u 2 da top

they should ve gave u da red light & told u to stop
ur going against a untame beast// that a kill u when he shit drop

YO SHIT SUCK LIKE A LOLLI POP// U BOUT 2 GET MOLLY WOP
FIND ANOTHA HOBBIE CUS DISS RAPPING U PROBABLY MOCK

U CALL YA SELF DA PHANTOM// WELL PLAY YA SONG
CUS DIS IS IT AND// IM WHAT IM SAYING YA FLOW WASN'T SHIT