Trak - Demo version... juss 500 KB size (1:12 min)dwnld !

ay yo all...the Quality sux relee bad.. cuz i lost ma recordin soft and so used da Windowz recorder LOL :p... i'm workin on a song... diz iz a Verse frm it and da beat... wen u listen to it lower da Woofer...cuzz ektu prob aseh lol.... and ya focus on da lyrics & flo .... not the quality...... i'll try 2 get da Complete version soon ... facin lot of technical prob .... aight pple heres da Link :

http://www.4shared.com/file/80958080/609de59f/Demo_Version.html

Download and leave ur Feeds. :D

wen u listen 2 it i recommend using Headphones

trak release howar agey ber kore dili keno :S dhurr beta....

flow - excellent
lyrics- good but umm i gess a lil banglish wud help
delivery- a lil work on dat...sumtyms its hard to understand

overal a tight verse sound quality is MAD WACK

i thot Impossible 2 understand lol.... and aint a release....demo for feedbaks....kintoo keoiii toh dekhi feed bak deh na:s
anyway thanx Cuzzz....if i get bak on da mic...i'll Colab wid u ... 'O'lvl er chapeh kisu korteh partesina.....

lol bel less :p

dhon ta amar kha tarpor takar logeh kotha koh lol :D

areh bal err ageh acta post korsilam koi gelo?!:S:S

ami bolsilam... jeh i emneteo banglish parina....its not ma thing...truu itz gud for publicity for i don rap for dat....i rap for the sake of rappin.... ja mor... ami takar shateh kotha koiteh gelam

do wat u do dihaz..dont try n do wat ere1 els does...u cant do banglish try but dont over try then ull sound messd up like u kno da cats from abroad tryin 2 hard...peace

lol jah halar poot takat loge kotha ko...haha...

tor thread e tui bhoira felsos post diye hahaha r keu post kore na..lol


TAKA KOTHAY BOLEEEEEEEEEEY

appreciate it FLO.... i like banglish....but pari na lol .... try korbo .... i need 2 get its flo and RAW accent...taileh parbo.... and ha Chigga....achkal TAKA ONEEEEEEEKK KOTHA KOITASEH!!!!! LOL

and ya the only thing dat count iz 'do wat u do and keep improvin it'

N dihaz 2 many Fucks...2 many Fucks = waste of bars...count all the fucks in ur verse iam sure ull see u wasted a bar or 2..that couldve bin a hard hittin line..

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lol yeah lol! too much fucks:P:P voice need to be more clear(well it might be cuz of the recording! post ur lyrics! anyways good job! liked ur flow !

ya too many fucks....its Xplicit... its a junky shit ... i write almost evryday 2 improve .... dizz iz 1 of da dailies so its junky :P thanx Flo appreciate it
and Karma thanx man
By the way... Here goes da lyrics:

Briggaz stepp up learn frm da HIP to da H_O_P
I walk wid ma goons.. daaamn.. juss like a true O_G
Walkin iz da KING, puffin up frm da tight up weed
Yo brigga battle me... make u Moufuckin bleed

I'll Be walkin in da fuckin streets doin ma Thinga
Mess wid me on ur face empty ma chamba

Yo fuck you know the shots go and its all black
shaded by the cap daaamn i'm high on moufuckin crack!

Itz all ma streetz who da fuck u dealin wid brigga
step back drop down on ur face pull ma fuckin trigga

Its all abt the Clickz all happenin in quickz
Yo bitch i'm da bomb can u hear da fuckin tik tiks?

Fuck u all haters world 2 me primitive
38 balls? still u aint got enough 2 be Negative

Imma Be da 1, Make u RUN, its juss FUN
yall wid these moufuckin trickz man i'm DONE!
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You need the quality, big time!
I didn't understand any of it, and the bit was so distorted and unclear.

i gotta install da soft.... i know abt da quality....Windows recorder dieh korsi :p da complete version will be masterd...crystal clear wid effects and gliches....
http://www.4shared.com/file/45656509/c34dead6/MA_HOOD.html
this is a song i did 2 yrs ago....chk its quality....at dat tym i had da soft.... akhon PC format korsi...so ya facing technical prob..i sang da Third verse

work on ur rhymes, u can flow n ride the beat, but ur rhymes suck

Rhymes sUK! sad.. anyway thanx a lot man for da feedbakk... i'll remember wat u said

Get Cool Edit Pro, then your quality issues should be solved

ahh ayo thanx man... and ya i went too harsh on u once...well got a bit unstable....understand dude.. i left smoking and its been a month i dint touch it... ektu unstable hoii jai...lol .. and hope i neva touch it again