ENENAY's BACK | | Enenay v/s Sh1ft Haq

Enenay's verse :

bitch, look at'cha first and don act clever
i can tell from yo' picture that you's an eager beaver
your teacher prolly said u can be nothen either
i know betches like u stay a virgin forever
'tell u 24/7 "be smart, don be a retard"
you try ta spit but mothefuckeh yo mouth's shut
u donno me yet, i'ma grab u and stab u
then smack u, slap u, hijack u, en kidnap u
run all over u, my word rite here be all true
u can never come close to the weakest shit i do
so here ima throw this rhyme atcha at 5 in the mornin
be a competitor bitch, and don be borin


Sh1ft Haq's verse :

Hey i aint wat u think i am
Ima punch ur face and make traffic jam
Look at ur self jerk before sayin any one else
I don give a fuckin damn to ya...nothin else
And look atcha..u look like a thief
maan u aint stealing no more..I got things up ma sleeve
Think before u leap
or else ima make u foreva sleep
I got brotha hood
lyin down like ma evry day food
And hey NnA..N fo NerD....N fo NoNseNce...And-A fo Achoda rapper
U seem to b a desert Sniper...
Jeah....

as shift is new um describing the categories as well in brackets so that he understands smth...

1. Multis (rhyming multiple syllables, such as ‘pop that gat’ and ‘lock that strap’)-
Props to Nna for his skills...he killed u in this line.. ''u donno me yet, i'ma grab u and stab u then smack u, slap u, hijack u, en kidnap u"...

2. Punchlines (jokes and creative lines, wordplay)-Nna again topped shift here with his simple but creative punches.No wordplays visible though i see a new form of NNA lmfao

3. Vocabulary (use of more advanced words and non-cliched phrases)-Nna again here .....shift's verse was wat idk :s

4. Personals (topics or phrases that personally attack the opponent)-Shift tried to hit nna with his skills but Nna was tuf to him...

5. Structure (a consistent style of writing or flow, so that the lyrics are not chaotic)-NNA !!!

so u can gess hu it would b for...nna gets my vote,unbiased...keep on trying sh1ft

Thankz PRO...now i know some trickss..n no1s best wen hes new rite...

lol will sum1 fuken vote??

well sh1ft's verse was pretty weak. so ma vote goes to nna. o n no1 votes hea no mo. no 1.

ahhhhhhhh!!

just 1 more vote and i win yet another battle here =D

Shift gota practice....lolz hes still an amatuer....ma vote goes 2 NNA
Shift dont be dis-hearted but kip shovin...practice makes perfect

i win =)