WHATS WRONG WIMME-DUKE NV(DoC)

HERE cums duke NV wid anotha solo afta a short period of tym......wid a lil change... ENJOY CHITTZ STYL.......DOC crew.....

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To be really honest, I thought the concept was really good, but the execution 'executed' it. Nv did try to put a little 'Eminem' kinda delivery but it did not work for me. The mixing was not good enough cuz I had a hard time understanding what was being told (until I got the lyrics). The lyrics was plain amateur. It was constructed in such a way that it was clear for me to see that the real motive was to only rhyme the last word. There was a tremendous lacking of multies, inrhymes blah blah blah. I know Nv did a track after a long time but he has to step up on the platform with tracks that are well executed. The only thing I liked was the concept and nothing else appealed to me. This is what I thought and what I had to say. Improve, Nv (you have a lot of potentials).

thnx alot for being honest bruh. means alot. well ya the lyric was sucky,... :$ gotta admit. and well , din try to be eminem . its just dat my flow and voice. .. anyways thnx for being honest. n il try to improve.


-___- im too lazy to improve. to lazy tooo write lyrics.

only thing that went well in this track was the chorus...everything else was pretty mediocre.since u got concepts in it. i totally agree w/ all E. Niphty said....i felt ur style..but u didn't put the work on it. so i didn't feel it.

whoever made the beat mssed up the piano keys real bad lol....he totally played wrong keys..anyway...i'm not blaming u..but just sayin' lmao.

WAAAHHAHA.. BUCHI BUCHI TOH. :p now 50% blame goes to da beat composer.. phewww

and next track.. ya. wait for , il sure make u guys jealous .. lol

digged da hooks =D

interesting track, n it was certainly a unique concept

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u have a little dick? =O
i cant believe u rap bout dis stuff =p

waahahhahahaha... now u believe lmao

wow liked it... nice track! good luck man!