'Deadline Mystery' 09 [D.I.E squad]

hey ya buddiez diz iz D.I.E squad launched new trak..'Deadline Mystery" hope u all lyk diz trak,plz downoad
nd leave feedbackz.

track link:http://www.4shared.com/file/151987466/1f91395c/Deadline_Mystery.html

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wat the f* is this man......its pure and unadulterated shit........u gotta improve a lot mate.....ur flow and ur pronunciation....errything.......didnt get nutin u said....

Ummm... i didnt get the flow, the lyrics, the hooks, the xpressions....  precisely, i didnt get nything.... 

i jst said it fo u to improve .....but if u gon fink it as a personal attack, i cant change ur opinion mate.......u got an attitude problem, fix it...or u wont be able to survive here.....stop defendin ur wack tracks and fix ur mistakes fast...cuz ppl here r not dat forgivin.....good luck fo next tym.....

sorry dude i didnt mean to act rude.. ya thnxz
i was dipressed for sumother reason..

dont take it in hard

plz remove this thing from DR will ya?
I bet that'd take more work than the amount of work that was put into this thing u did which i dont wanna call a track or hiphop track.

i usually write constructive comments..but this thing is below the level to deserve criticisms.....because it'll take me forever to identify everything that was wrong abt it.

AKProductions wrote:i usually write constructive comments..but this thing is below the level to deserve criticisms.....because it'll take me forever to identify everything that was wrong abt it.

i agree wid ak... u need some kinda level for ppl to judge u... din understand anythn abt dis track...u din even post ur lyrics... try to make trax in a way dat nobody needs to c da lyrics to understand da track....
itz also my advise dat u make sumbody listen to da trak b4 release... a sibling or fren... anybody who wzn on da trak n get deir feedbak 1st... re record 3-4 tyms if necessary.... itz all worth da effort wen encouragin positive comments show up... gud luk guyz

Ppl out dere u guyz says this iz not a trak or "Hiphop trak"
so hiphop trak kake bole aktu bujhaiya den.....
if it iz not hiphop nither rap so wat iz it
???Classical???
xcept riddler no 1 hv no idea about difference between rap and hiphop\???
cumon dude ai lyrics bhujona ..taile ki [stoic bliss] AC1D-er lyrix bujho?
it even slower den dat!!!

HOPE BD WILL SOON GET DA DIFRENCE.!!

[static] a.k.a Devill Adv wrote:
xcept riddler no 1 hv no idea about difference between rap and hiphop\???
cumon dude ai lyrics bhujona ..taile ki [stoic bliss] AC1D-er lyrix bujho?
it even slower den dat!!!

HOPE BD WILL SOON GET DA DIFRENCE.!!

U mean to say i hav no idea bout hip hop either??. Very well thn, umma ask my 7 years old nephew to give u sm lessns on hip hop. Cuz he did a trak that erry1 appretiated. So do think bfo u say "NO 1 of YOU hav no idea bout the differnce betwn rap n hip hop".

cumon dude ... seriously.. its maynot b hiphop
den rap-0 jodi nah hoy den ki aita??
CLASSICAL??
u cant say its not hiphop/rap
if its a bad traz ..we dont mind. but i disagree dat its not a hiphop /rap song

i dont think it even classifies as music.....its jst noise to a beat..........

Did i mention nywhere whether its a rap crap hiphop classical or wateva. Y try to act too smart yo. Ur askin me sm shit that i didnt write about at all. So u mind removing me frm that "No 1" category of urs.?

i aint in any arguements .. cumon guys chill!!
nothin to fite for??...
just asking sumthing u guys areh actin so weird..
calmdown..