State of Emergency

droppin another beat lol. this time..i'm making this beat for a rapper friend of mine who needs raw beats as he's finalizing his contracts w/ this local promoter and stuff..anyway...lemme know wat u think..I usu post my beats here when they r at raw stages so that i can use yo constructive comments...

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8390861

mmmmm donno how to say.....since its raw i guess it sund b lik tat.....but a couple of the instrument doesnt sunds 1 wit the beat....lik the flute lik thingy at around 1:32-ish...sunds a bit lik it wasnt meant to play here but since didnt get a job anywhere else it stuck around....hope u get wat i mean...well it jst needs to b completed and mastered properlly.....otherwise the beat's quite good i liked the regular b.g. instrument variation thingy... thumbs up to the thing

aah preciate it bro. yeah dont worry abt mixing/master..i jst wanna get feedback abt the arrangement/structure of this song...everything else will most likely change..when that i dont know lol

post a sinpet once u finish...will look forward to the complete version!!

haha aite bro. although it doesn't look like i am gonna finish this beat or any beats anytime b4 christmas break..which isn't until like december 20th haha.but i'll defintely pm u a link when i'm done

yo sup guys..check this ish out again! (same link)

i worked on it for almost an hour today..just trying to get better sounds out and add brass...damn i felt rlly helpless at times w/ too many damn 'heavy' leads going on lol. i dont like the chorus sound..i dont know wat i wanna do it..it's pissing me off.

anyway, wat do u think of the beat now?

give me ur honest input. i jst wanna make it sound good.

the track sounds awesome.....pretty professional....but at certain points the leads sound too heavy and irritating....but overall a tite beat....only prob is at the end wen the music ends and only the beat plays....that transition is a bit too sudden.....

haha thanks man....i did that intentionally..im no where done w/ this beat..since i'm making this beat for a particular rapper and we r negotiating tempo of the beat, wat kind of emotions/melodies the beat shd possess and etc. so that wont be there..and arrangement will change too.

appreciate ur feedback.

well donn mind but....now it sunds a bit monotonic......might b jst me.....and u didnt mix the thing seriously yet again.....make rough mix and show it off 1st up

@AK.....ha ha AK mama shobai re jhari dao ekhon nije jhari khaiteso....lol....moja pailam......

thanks korrupt mate. appreciate ur comment.
demonic no one is giving any 'jhari' nearly the way i give to others lol. i dont give 'jhari' to anyone who loves music for its sake and puts real effort into it...and unfortunately very few ppl fall into this category in DR.
but a big reason i give 'jhari' is so that other ppl 'jhari' be back..unfortunately most ppl dont even comment any where other than their threads...

dont take it to heart...i personally admire u man...cuz if anybody helped me on DR...it wz u ....cuz u gav me the ryt advice at the ryt time....and if i eva manage 2 improve....it wud be fo u man.......

lol appreciate ur honest feed bro. well u see...that's exactly y i'm so harsh lol. like, chances r i'll never see u in my life (or most other ppl i'm commenting at)..which is a good thing coz i can be totally blatant that way lol. trust me, i never comment like this to my friends songs on facebook or sumthin lol. now if i was ur good friend...i'd hv made those wishy washy comments..which as u said wudn't rlly help nobody.

yo Korrupt: i'm almost done with this beat haha. I'm so lazy. I just need to mix and put some effects on it..but other than that..it's done! i made this beat fora particular rapper (a friend of mine who's working on his mixtape). when he spits on it and all..i might release it here...

synths working fine..keys need a bita more presence...the drastic change of drum patterns i never support...perhaps just keep the clap and take the snare out cos it sounds 2 soft..other den dat working out...

btw i want this beat...thers alot going on my type of beat...so AK mix it down for me..

okay. get on fb chat or something and we'll talk abt the other beat u want.

Demonic wrote:dont take it to heart...i personally admire u man...cuz if anybody helped me on DR...it wz u ....cuz u gav me the ryt advice at the ryt time....and if i eva manage 2 improve....it wud be fo u man.......

aww so sweet! lmao.

reason i'm writing on this thread..i'm finishing this beat off too. i've decided to start wrapping all these good productions instead of having them demo for years.

i was navigating your soundclick page to find this one.The Beat's awesome!

wow, first version tai(demo tai koto chorom

bro, send me this the full version !!

plz, i got sumthing tuned for this

n same conditions for the beat i sent u message regarding