Welcome to my playground...a track fo haters

a track frm Get Low & FLy mixtape...Dumbass haters in DR shunne dekk

http://www.4shared.com/file/185233605/2e797c49/Welcome_to_my_playground.html

...lyrics...

was away frm ma home....and the lyrics is alredy attached in da track...if u guyz use lyrics plugin then u can see da lyrics frm ur windows media player...ANYWAYZ

Intro
haha haters/
tomra jaykhane juddo korteso sheyta amader kase khelar maat/
amaderna amader polapian er khelar maat /

yeah Wolfizzla,AXZA and Double H

Welcome to my play ground !!

( Hooks) (Wolfizzla)

from the bottom to the top haters dont wanna stop/
stil ma flow's gonna glow everytime our shit drops/
Fuck them haters I'm taking them down/
eyyo waddap G?? ur in ma playground

1st verse(Wolfizzla)

ya call it battlefield when i call it my playground
y'all phonyass soldiers i guess u wanna play now
better stay down when i unlesh the grey-hound
who's the prey now? shut the fuck up n pray now
i stole ur toy gun kid imma blow ur brains out
the way i'm spittin flame y'all be wishin for rain now
i made u look wack like a gay clown in clay gown
that blizzard i produced imma make ur voice fade out
i'm creatin' masterpieces like piccaso
you still waitin to get picked like a cheap ass hoe
Ain't true to the world your fam's true to you fag
How you gon' shit on me your clan's glued to your ass

your shits all cheesy now you payin' the price
Faggots digg 'em alright yeah like a bunch o' mice
and the truth be told bitch i be cold as ice
How the fuck you gon' roll now i stole your dice

( Hooks 2x) (Wolfizzla)

from the bottom to the top haters dont wanna stop/
stil ma flow's gonna glow everytime our shit drops/
Fuck them haters I'm taking them down/
eyyo waddap G?? ur in ma playground

(2nd verse) (AXza)
shala ami shy pola jy rashtah thyka uitha aysi/
bangla raper itihashye notun kahinir jonmow dishi/
ami shy Og jy baroshw unishe rajotow korye/
ami shy Double D jy andhoker er vitor thakye/
ami roktow dia lirics laykha rokter jhowr uthysi/
shorirete agun dia ami pura desh jalishi/
mukh dia agun chyra ami shamner jonry purysi/
kahinir mor ghurisy r manusher mon juraisy/
ami mukk dya jeta chari as hard as Concrete/
tor kotha boomerang hoye broke ur own teeth/
kisu korte parle kor but I got ma A team/
amray uri akash e karon our target is mainstream/
Shuru jokon korsi ekbar sesh dekey charmu/
Rod jhor bristy parle amare thekao mamu/
Axza amr naam amr chiro unnoto shir/
Durjoy Shongram e ami ek shorgami bir/

( Hooks 2x) (Wolfizzla)

from the bottom to the top haters dont wanna stop/
stil ma flow's gonna glow everytime our shit drops/
Fuck them haters I'm taking them down/
eyyo waddap G?? ur in ma playground

3rd Verse( Double H a.k.a $pitfire)


hater der k 2 ta kotha koyte aysi ami ajke/
mathay dhukay raak vuilla jays na abr kalke
togo ronnokhetro amr kase khelar maat/
ajiyra beef chaile shoja choila jaa gabtolir haat/
rap kora amr kase hoylo polpain er khela/
r togge kase rocket loya chander desh e jawa/
jeykhane tora juddo koros amra oykhane kheylla jay/
Double H er chele khelar kase tora haira jaas
5 bosor rap koirao ny 5ta track/
ami 1 bosor er mathay charlam full mixtape/
5 bosor rap koirao hego ny kono vaat/
5 bosor rap korle hoytam maainstream er baap/
class boya kobita leika ajke hoysos rapper/
ellayga tor lyrics eto faltu eydy hoyse baper/
koros shomalochona nige paros na kisu/
kotha batra buzija kois karon tui ehono shishu

(hooks 2x) (Wolfizzla)

from the bottom to the top haters dont wanna stop/
stil ma flow's gonna glow everytime our shit drops/
Fuck them haters I'm taking them down/
eyyo waddap G?? ur in ma playground

hook needz a lotta work...hueva did dat...
1st verse..i lyk da multiple rhyming scheme..however flow wasnt good...itz lyk spacin out wrds too much to be on beat...i ges its da same person who did da hook eh?
2nd verse...since i dont do bangla..i appreciate bangla..nd i lykd dis rapper...soundz gud enuff...altho i strongly thynk u shud stick to bangla...cuz english pronounciation was far from being on point bro
3rd rapper...i found em da weakest of the lot..still okay tho..bt too much "LAL MIAH"fyd if u kno wat um sayin..i lyk da gabtoli haath line tho...lyrics was okay...gud attempt....1st guy had da best lyricz of da lot...i did dload ur mixtape..i hope dats way better than this tho..

thnx octa fo ur feedback....... appreciated

YEAH....Wolfizzla did da hooks

and da 2nd rapper is Axza......yeah he do bangla good....and I also told him 2 stick on bangla

and im da 3rd rapper....I do bangla English both...I try different different style ery time...

thnx fo ur honest feedback
-1-

sorry bout the hooks, it shud've been better, thanks fo ur feed octa, gud 2 know u liked ma lyrics, axza killed it... pro'ly his best per4mance so far, double h's verse was interesting 2...

this track could have been worked on with better results.
theres alot of criticisms i could mention, but then again you folks might just take it negatively.
the quality of the vocals leaves much to be desired. And a "diss" sort of a track needs a beat that suits the subject matter, this beat didnt gel with what you folks were rhyming about in my humble opinion.

I dont know its a deja vu or what...

But whenever i listen da 1st verse,it feels like i heard it or saw it sumwhere.

Wolfizzla got da best verse in da tracks.

Fr!daY wrote:I dont know its a deja vu or what...

But whenever i listen da 1st verse,it feels like i heard it or saw it sumwhere.

Wolfizzla got da best verse in da tracks.

Thanks friday ... bout that deja vu thingy i hope u didn mean nethng like biting lyrics or stuff...

fiquetional wrote:this track could have been worked on with better results.
theres alot of criticisms i could mention, but then again you folks might just take it negatively.
the quality of the vocals leaves much to be desired. And a "diss" sort of a track needs a beat that suits the subject matter, this beat didnt gel with what you folks were rhyming about in my humble opinion.

LOL we dont take critisism negativley brah..
thnx fo ur two cents

Fr!daY wrote:I dont know its a deja vu or what...

But whenever i listen da 1st verse,it feels like i heard it or saw it sumwhere.

Wolfizzla got da best verse in da tracks.

its A REALLY DEJA VU FO U HAHAHA

hooks couldve been better.
i like the multies in the 1st verse..but wasnt well delivered.
2nd verse was okay..needs to work with his pronunciation
3rd verse was okay too.
the whole track would have been alot better if the mixing wasnt so disturbing :/
neway..stay up fellas (Y)

gsifz wrote:hooks couldve been better.
i like the multies in the 1st verse..but wasnt well delivered.
2nd verse was okay..needs to work with his pronunciation
3rd verse was okay too.
the whole track would have been alot better if the mixing wasnt so disturbing :/
neway..stay up fellas (Y)

mixin disturbing

thnx fo ur honest feed brah

WolFizzLA wrote:

Fr!daY wrote:I dont know its a deja vu or what...

But whenever i listen da 1st verse,it feels like i heard it or saw it sumwhere.

Wolfizzla got da best verse in da tracks.

Thanks friday ... bout that deja vu thingy i hope u didn mean nethng like biting lyrics or stuff...

Nope I dont sayd bowt biting lyrics.

Humayun Chowdhury wrote:

gsifz wrote:hooks couldve been better.
i like the multies in the 1st verse..but wasnt well delivered.
2nd verse was okay..needs to work with his pronunciation
3rd verse was okay too.
the whole track would have been alot better if the mixing wasnt so disturbing :/
neway..stay up fellas (Y)

mixin disturbing

thnx fo ur honest feed brah

yeah mixing was very disturbing man :/

LOL...ppl told me dis is da most cleanest mixdown in da mixtape(Vocal mixin)

I gess ur talkin abt da xtra stuffz(auto tuning intro- outro,adding dynamic EQ in da last part of 3rd verse,laughing effect etc etc) I added in da mix ??

thnx fo ur two cents

When it says 'A track for haters' I, honestly, expect a better few moments after hitting the play button. =|

Humayun Chowdhury wrote:LOL...ppl told me dis is da most cleanest mixdown in da mixtape(Vocal mixin)

I gess ur talkin abt da xtra stuffz(auto tuning intro- outro,adding dynamic EQ in da last part of 3rd verse,laughing effect etc etc) I added in da mix ??

thnx fo ur two cents

im jus saying it was disturbing..as in not pleasant to hear.

not a good track...other 1 was better.

@Grace....reason for attaching dat nursery rhymes in da intro is already explained minimum 5 times I gess...its all symbolic....

@FLO....thnx fo ur feedback

Dude, I liked capo, i.e. the nursery rhyme. That part was good. Trust me, I even thought if I had downloaded the wrong track since it sounded too damn good. But, oh believe me, as things progressed it just went down. No offense meant, please; you wanted honest feedback.

kheekhz

I actually thought you had something to prove as you suggested this song with so much energy in your reply.
It's a piece of crap to be honest. (no hate )

thanks fo droppin by kid... now take a deep breath, relax a lil son, it ain the end of the world... 1