College audio synthesis project

This is another college assignment which could have been a whole lot better but that's what happens when you procrastinate. Anyways I made the instrumental.

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http://www.4shared.com/file/210196522/f6da745/Digital_Audio_and_Synthesis.html


Lyrics:

I only slow my flow so you'll understand my words
I aint tryna spit Im just tryna be heard
So either way u look at it Im stacking up these verbs
Intention without action is passion just for this world
They say thats hot we'll see what's hot when it crashes and it burns
Every generation like ashes without a yearn
Turn to dust when will we learn murder lust thats where we turn
On this round-a-bout of life
Motor way mind state
no patience just for the light
Red blood shed fights
Too yellow to do what's right
Green with envy for the cash thats flashed on first sight
Head over heels up above love
Bum rushed depression unjust obsession
these lump sum oppressors
like tesco express
my money pumps the pressure to the chests of these young boys
no bullet proof vest just addressing the gun noise
They create this division
blame it on religion
try to strip the world of it
sex and the city's the new trinity and all the girls love it
my minds in the middle of an ocean going deeper
u cant H20 this knowledge in college or from a teacher
thats passed his decadence, not of his relevance
locked in a box operating for dead presidents
these degrees don't decree what you'll be in this life
it is He that's decreed what I'll eat where I'll sleep
who I'll feed what I'll need how many seeds
that i breed when i complete half this deen
the rest is up to u and me
feel free to stack your deeds

i feel like u showed it to me rite? the beat at least?
ur lyrics r great mA..but ur spittin' was convoluted when u were spittin' faster...mixing needs to be improved. the kick came with that open hihat sound incorporated right?...i'd suggest to work on the kick and make it more 'stereotypical' iguess..cause the openhi hat based kick was sorta creating a fake illusion for me lol.

i like wat u were trying to do withthe beat though. just a clearer spittin' and crispier mixing wud make it real good.