My 1st ever Reggaeton beat

got some tym out from rapping and tried to make a beat and it came out to be a reggaeton beat coz i hear reggaeton tracks too much any ways honest feedbacks pleaz and remember this is my first ever made beat and lemme know how can i improve


http://www.2shared.com/file/12456678/39c2633f/Reggaeton_1.html

guys can i get some comments pleaz i have posted it
a week ago

lol....wat was dat bro...if it's really ur first beat made, i wud say that it was nycly organised, n not that bad...but u really can't call it a beat, more lyk a soothing melody or sumthing lol ...
but nwyz, gud way to start producing, hoping to one day see some real shit from u, peace

thanx mayne atlast got a comment

can i have more feedbacks pleaz

it was a beat.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Young Glaze wrote:it was a beat.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wazzu mean ???

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i mean wht the hell was dat......?

Young Glaze wrote:i mean wht the hell was dat......?

lol dat was posted few weeks ago now i had stepped up u will find 2 of my own beats in our upcoming album stay tuned

hmmm....goood to hear dat...keppp going...