Memories _M@D - Cytrocastic

I m back with another solo RnB track ...
2nd verse was freestyle .

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I like this... there's a difference between normal pop/singing and r&b ...u have to hit certain notes... i'll explain sum other tym...
anyway... really gud work here... i like the tune and everythning... as u progress to ur next tracks InshaaAllah try to bring in more complicated tunes... work with harmonies and stuff like that ... bt then again that's kind of far away for u ryt now... wad u did here is gud enuf for now... bt since u have a voice in tym u will need to get more creative...

TheRiddler wrote:I like this... there's a difference between normal pop/singing and r&b ...u have to hit certain notes... i'll explain sum other tym...
anyway... really gud work here... i like the tune and everythning... as u progress to ur next tracks InshaaAllah try to bring in more complicated tunes... work with harmonies and stuff like that ... bt then again that's kind of far away for u ryt now... wad u did here is gud enuf for now... bt since u have a voice in tym u will need to get more creative...

thanx bro & inshallah i will.....

ok I'll join octa as the hard mudafucking critic...rapped verse sucked...big time...ya gotta find a flow that suits the best on the beat...the hook is pretty tight...I liked it...I liked the tune and all...maybe the rapped verse sounded that way couse of the mixing couse I coudn't find any major flaws eccept pronunciation but since I suck too in english I ain't complaining bout that...second verse the sang one was dope!I liked the tune!!bro you're a starter and for that this is a great improvement!!keep it up and I'm glad that ya guys are improvin'!!

Wafi wrote:ok I'll join octa as the hard mudafucking critic...rapped verse sucked...big time...ya gotta find a flow that suits the best on the beat...the hook is pretty tight...I liked it...I liked the tune and all...maybe the verse sounded that way couse of the mixing couse I coudn't find any major flaws eccept pronunciation but since I suck too in english I ain't complaining bout that...bro you're a starter and for that this is a great improvement!!keep it up and I'm glad that ya guys are improvin'!!

thanx fo the feed bro ....

verse 1 - naahhh broo i guess u r better then this....Am rilly disappointed for this verse,commin on the 2nd,its rilly good n the tune is also good....

mc shanz wrote:verse 1 - naahhh broo i guess u r better then this....Am rilly disappointed for this verse,commin on the 2nd,its rilly good n the tune is also good....

hmm ... soory bro .. bt nyway thanx fo liking 2nd verse

i totally agree with wafi...u have to understand what kinda spittin is gonna fit da beat....2nd verse better den 1st...gettin a lot of improvement...shows ur dedication...bruuvo...well done...next tym put more thoughts into it

BanXploD wrote:i totally agree with wafi...u have to understand what kinda spittin is gonna fit da beat....2nd verse better den 1st...gettin a lot of improvement...shows ur dedication...bruuvo...well done...next tym put more thoughts into it

thanx bro .and ya i will ...

i'm diggin this to be honest... since i never heard you rap before... dat verse for a starter is pretty good... keep improving... bt yeah verse isnt clearr... ur jst mumbling words..i do dat tooo according to a lotta ppl and me...so i wudnt be ble to help u much with how to improve on dat... bt u gotta take it sloww

i'm diggin this to be honest... since i never heard you rap before... dat verse for a starter is pretty good... keep improving... bt yeah verse isnt clearr... ur jst mumbling words..i do dat tooo according to a lotta ppl and me...so i wudnt be ble to help u much with how to improve on dat... bt u gotta take it sloww

Octa wrote:i'm diggin this to be honest... since i never heard you rap before... dat verse for a starter is pretty good... keep improving... bt yeah verse isnt clearr... ur jst mumbling words..i do dat tooo according to a lotta ppl and me...so i wudnt be ble to help u much with how to improve on dat... bt u gotta take it sloww

thanx bro ....

Wow!!! i see improvement bro... i really liked it fo some reasonss.... the tune was good... u kno i aint complaining much cuz ur a starter n already showing improvements so u will get there by tym.... but neva take thingsd lightly, n it it bring u down again.... good work

dud luv this track very much...........verse 1 is good and 2nd verse is too good keep it up dud............ :D:D

Sha-"T" wrote:Wow!!! i see improvement bro... i really liked it fo some reasonss.... the tune was good... u kno i aint complaining much cuz ur a starter n already showing improvements so u will get there by tym.... but neva take thingsd lightly, n it it bring u down again.... good work

thanx a lot bro !!

Skull.b wrote:dud luv this track very much...........verse 1 is good and 2nd verse is too good keep it up dud............ :D:D

thankz man .. glad u liked it ..

m!@d,u got a really gud voice,nd dis track was really nice,but if u try,u can bring out sum bttr shits.

Mr.Bling wrote:m!@d,u got a really gud voice,nd dis track was really nice,but if u try,u can bring out sum bttr shits.

thanx ma man...

i personally lyk m@d afta hearing poison spit !!!! i lyk dis one jst need to improve da sound recording quality !!

kozzmoo wrote:i personally lyk m@d afta hearing poison spit !!!! i lyk dis one jst need to improve da sound recording quality !!

thanx a lot man !!!!

good song .. singing was k n nycly managed wid da fast rap

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:good song .. singing was k n nycly managed wid da fast rap

thanx!!!