F@ZZE @K@ REL0@D<----- VS---->Killa Smilez

rules: (jacked from young kash)

20 bars each (the number of lines)

must be broken into lines
for example:

this will not be taken

"these punk ass nikkaz wont see me retire, cuz i burn'em like CD writers, compare me to a dragon cuz i breath these fires, and i'm so past u i see you in diapers,"

no biting (you can't steal someone's rhymes")

no comebacks (whoever is last, can't diss the first person cuz of wah they said or how he typed it out)

IF ANY RULES ARE BROKEN, THEN YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED

vote's will be taking as brackets

Flow:
Punches:
Wordplay:
Mulites:
Vocabulary:
Overall:

NO DICKRIDING VOTES!

can't vote for yourself

and u have to explain why u chose that person.

i'll put up a poll but, the votes will be counted on the bracket system

first to 5 wins

til then, let the best man win

hey...killa....i wanna du diz "NO RULES" style....like dat skib &
scratch battle.....plz agree wth me on tht 1....& we'll both b
benefitted.....& yo evry1 ma shit will b given on atleast a day
after....ie whether its 2mo night....or da day aftr..so dont expect
things now...& killa i want u 2 agree wth me on da "no rules"
thingy....

u are so complicated to deal wit!

so what does no rules mean! U going 2 b biting other motherfuckaz shit! Explain! it doesn't matter 2 me

Woah! KS is up for anything!!

yeah, tru dat, explain wah u mean, no rules

dude, i aint never seen a bitch that technical, and hell ive met my share of bitches. rules are simple, use friggin lines, dont take someones rhymes, and no comebacks, meaning stop masterbating on the same fucking pictures. Move on to new punches. Thats that. And no dickriding votes i would have to assume is.. dont vote for the person just cuz u noe him or hes ur friend. Analyze the verse, it's not there to decorate the page.

oh.....kay

i'ma take that as the "no rules"

so wens teh battle is this gonan take liek anotha 3 pages be4 the battle strts like last tiem lol

nemz wrote:so wens teh battle is this gonan take liek anotha 3 pages be4 the battle strts like last tiem lol

yeah fazze c'mon dude, dont overstretch this thread

lol man this shitz mad funny

yeah! stop wasting time

i guess he's pressin your patience til u post yo verse first.
like he did to me

i dont get wah's da difference from being first or last
except havin the last imperation.

but if ya lyrics is bananas, then u shouldn't worry bout it.

hey, i beat you, and i went first. lolz

Tickk.. tockk...
Get on the grind like clockwork
Move that behind like clockwork
Keep it coming on time like clockwork

hey, i beat you, and i went first. lolz

Cheahh, lmao. Clock's styll tickkin

guyz listen ma internet went out on thursday & it came 10 min ago....luk im sry if i wasted yall time......but it wasnt ma fault...i was mad unlucky ...now i no y all r thinkin tht "wow diz kid cant rap so now hez jus wastin time by sayin lie-thingz like no internet & stuff".....ohh well i finished ma stuff on friday mornin....but had 2 wait coz of no connections....went 2 ma frends place ...thr was no connection either.....so i was so unlucky but i dont care if yall dont bliv me....& killa shut da fuck up man.....i nvr bited ne1z lyrics or did dickriding.....u betta watch ur mouth......i only wanted 2 say tht i dont da "broken in2 lines thingy"....tht irritates me...but since u didnt wanted it ...i gez itz "all rules thn".....wateva....don giv a fuck.....neway herez ma shit

Ur ‘smile’
aint close 2 ‘killa’ so evry1 noz u
as a dead “PSYCHIA-TRIST”****(1)


coz ur “art-is”
only givin ‘ppl a smile’ but u aint
half da rap “AR-TIST”


U shit on spit coz
u rap like tht “STIOKBLISSES
‘PUSSY ACID’”****(2)


So I jus murdered ur lines by pouring thm on “PRUSSIC ACID”*** (3)


Totally rotten
house, youse ‘on trailer’& hav a
“STUFF CHIMNEY”


Like “A book shelf wth no bookz”, ur brain is “HALF EMPTY”


Like “A ‘DAHLIA’ fitted in a
‘pencil-thin’ VASE”, U’ll nvr “BE-LONG--HERE”(be
on gear)****(4)


I sed I would
battle ne1 but nvr wanted u coz u spit lyk da “WEIRD-AAL-YIAH” [weird al yan(koveich)]****(5)


Luk I was “born wth RAP”, thy say im “WAX-ED” wth “HIP-HOP”****(6)


Callin u “A NEOPHYTE on da land of experts”,
coz ur shit got “DROPPED”****(7)


See in diz “WEB” (site) I hav da “8 THIN LEGS” (spider)****(8


& u luk really
tiny & “TRAPPED” like a “GR8 INSECT”****(9)


I crush “SEMI-EMCEES”, I kill “MANY-EMCEES”,
wil make ur ass “SEMI-DETACHED”****(10)


Kidnapped ur bitch but couldn’t lift her coz “SHE-FAT” & coz u spit “CHEAP-RAP”


Nigga U’s like “a beggar in da streets”, whrz ur location, “DIRTY-GLOBE-HP”??***(11)


Nigga WTF?! U “homeless”, Ur wack freestyles shows tht u can nvr be a “DIRTY-DOPE-MC”


Luk at ur pic, wel who can blame u, atleast itz btr thn
ur real “FACE”****(12)


Ur face is like ‘baboon’, & if thtz da “CASE”
thn I say u quit battling wth “FAZZE”



FINISHER!!!!


Fuck it im done, I
sed wht I had 2 say, I murdered da
‘SMILE’ & I made u “HOLLOW IN
OUR CLUB”****(13)


I jus wasted ma
time, next time I’ll let “MA HOMEBOYS
‘ENL’ OR ‘DVS’” 2 “SWALLOW U UP”




I’M
GONE!!!!!!!!!!!

not bad... not bad.... real kool use of wordplays ... let's see wat Killa Smilez got 2 say...

Notez----




****(1)-----psychiatrist
is a person who cures mental illness...so normally som mental patients nvr smile...therefore
if his smile is killer thn he must take da job of a
psychiatrist & make dose patients smile other thn takin da
profession of a rapper.............




****(2)-----acid is
a member of SB...thought yall no it but still wrote it...wht da heck...lol


****(3)-----
prussic acid is a very poisonous acid


****(4)------dahlia
is a very big flower so itz usual tht it wont fit on a pencil thin
vase.....
diz line meant tht like tht dahlia wont fit thr diz wack rapper wont fit
on diz website or on da rap game.....


****(5)------AALIYAH
is a singer I gez shez dead.....& da othr 1 is weird al yankovick....da
“all songs remix” guy....lol


****(6)------waxed
means ‘glued’....


****(7)------neophyte
means novice


****(------web
one times means a ‘spider web’ & another time a “website”...spider is an
animal wth 8 thin legz....lol...though yall no dat.....but....hahahha....neway
a spider controls itz web & like tht I control diz website....


****(9)------killa
has jus been trapped on ma web....on da spiders web if nethin gets stuck da
spider usually takes thm 4 lunch......


****(10)----detached means 2 “REMOVE STH FRM
STH”....will make his body half-ly removed


****(11)----he
wrote “DIRTY GLOB HP” on his profile on locations....


****(12)---he gave
a monsters face on his ‘avatar’








****(13)---finally
‘hollow’ means empty & invisible....meanin I dissed him so much tht he has
now become invisible on da web....ie no1 noz abt him ne mor.....he has gone
lost....lol

*************lets c
wht u can bring killa........

dont no y da "notes" & da "raps" thingy came out like diz....jus copy pasted it & diz was da result....neway if yall hav ne prob understandin thn plz let me no.......

DJ R@F wrote:not bad... not bad.... real kool use of wordplays ... let's see wat Killa Smilez got 2 say...

agreed.good job fazze

fazze notN wrote:dont no y da "notes" & da "raps" thingy came out like diz....jus copy pasted it & diz was da result....neway if yall hav ne prob understandin thn plz let me no.......

yeah, dis happens here at times.. still trynna fix da prob.. but so far so gud, i understood ur notes & raps properly...

u wanna beef //da ar15 make it hard 2 sleep//
fazze can pump iron all day// u still punie&weak

im da shit 4 a decade// u da shit for a week//
my b bark loud// when u speak its a squeak//

u betta b easy// if u wanna rest in peace//
when da 45s drawn// we dont cease//

I say Im From Hp//thats Detroit Michigan//
dem killas have a whole//family missing man//

i was out hustling// before u can stand//
K.S. had hoes //when u was in dat box of sand//

dis nigga fazze cant rap// how could u possibly win//
give me a list of top rapperz// i bet fazze NotN//(fazze not in)

K.S. I smile for da fans// take da smilez away//
Killa slang rounds at dis man// quit playing//

If u dont undrstand something ask and i will explain it 2 u

Keep it coming!

nice, nice, over all it was ok, a lil harder on the punchlines would of done it...

Fazze why u gotta make this all complicated, could of done it in verses or bars, i mean how the fuk u flow to that?
reminds me of some Matin Luther King Jr speeches. anyways feeling some of the punches, overall it was ok

in time in time lol