New G, Dark type beat with a soulful touchmaybe

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8154782

just another random one..no effort put in it though. just made while
procrastinating..so def. not my best one. sounds as u can hear are
really really stock sound..i didn't tweak anything/tried to use good
sounds..basically i was bored and tried to make sure akproductions isn't dead lol.

ppl who been contacting me asking if i can make beats for them (well not tryn'a showoff or anything lol..it's actually 4 ppl who asked..so yeah lol)..i dont rlly hv time to devote and work under deadlines to make tracks and such. but once in awhile..such as in this case i made a demo track.

plz send me ur ideas and help me choose which part shd be the chorus. i hv tons of other sounds going on...but i muted them since i tried not to get carried away by individual melodies that i often do lol.

i like the tune, but the whole thing sounds a little empty to me =/

finally sum real rapper commented!

lol...can u tell me exactly wat u feel like its missing? it needs sum sorta heavy bass in the background rite? i didn't even care to find a stock sounding base even. eh i'm feeling more often that my laziness is failing me at life in general lol.

now i'm trying to decide if i'll hv 'swine flu symptoms' and skip a class LOL.

try some booming bass line.. also throw in some synth in there. just mess around with it man.. you'll get it right =)

lol aight. actually the lead/synth sound in the background itself is a synth lol. but yeah i know wat u mean sum 808s wud def help...just to make it more heavy. but it's whatever i dont rlly know if i'll finish it or not.
thanks for the feedback though dude.

yea i meant add MORE synth or low drone strings

i dont get a "shit" u r guys r talkin abt =P .... but hey nice beat... =D

tune the synth up..it sounds to raw..and yea put a bassline and sum strings in the chorus to giv it the real dark effect..peace

cool deal.
the rawness might be due to lack of any mixing/mastering/effects or anything. i just laid down the melodies and put them together no eqing or anything.

crackpot wrote:i dont get a "shit" u r guys r talkin abt =P .... but hey nice beat... =D

lol what? r u on crack or something? lmao. i dont think anyone used any very particular teremms here lol.

but thanks yo. most regular listeners (like if i ask my regular friends..)..they r like "it's hot! i feel it"..so u sound like one of them :p jk.

yo....just to update u guys who cares..i'mdoing a collab on this beat with a REAL SICK beatmaker. i'm not gonna lie that i was fucking surprised when he said he'd liek to collab on this. (he's not Bengali or anything..just a youtube beatmaker)

so watch out for this beat..it's gonna be big hehe.