Sad and Dark beautiful Piano beat

this is the real ish right here hehe.

I am working on this beat to write a song which will feature our very own Hypothetikal, Sha-T and someone else..(someone who can sing bengali rap)..Kuzz was supposed to do it but he got busy. anyway, if u r a bengali rapper...plz do get back at me w/ ur works. I dont wanna rap on this beat this time.

Check out the beat right here: (Listening only link..NO download link):

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8266526

the structure, tune and everything are on point. the drums need to be a little more tight, it's not really hitting me. also adding a bassline is a must. i like the little military snare thing you got going in the drumline.. up the volume of that a little bit. overall it sounds kinda empty tho..mixing needs to be tighter.

nyc

thanksZX l)@ G@lvl3r..btw i saw ur mssg but cudn't reply then. but my 'fileengine.dll' is somehow corrupted and i can't move/copy that file.

the starting key sunds monotonous...feelings less kinda....lik 'hey i'm gonna die anyhow soo even if its bad and ppl badmouths it i donn care' type....make it mix wit the beat....and the phaaat sund in the chorus parts?? well those r nicee...drum pattern is good...i lik the ending too.... go over it a couple of more times....and get all the instruments to flow wit each other....some goes outta flow hotat hotat

lol thanks for ur commment dude. frankly, i dont even know which beat is this one. so yeah lol. pretty sure it's one of 90% of my beats that i've never finished back then.

latest ones that i'll do will be FINISHED ones for real..i wont post them without finishgin 90% of them and not just 40-70% like most of my beats that i post here or elsewhere.