Broken Star - RGB Feat. Imran Khan and Tupac

this be a 'an HOUR track', i was all messed up and awl,wrote the lyrics and spitted in 30 mins.
my story is real




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Your feedbacks are really appreciated

i think the mixin is a bit..... but nice track

MC NS wrote:i think the mixin is a bit..... but nice track

hei thanks man

any more feedbacks ?

rgb: i cudn't work on that beat at all. my dad is crazy..he knows nothing but education..anyway i'm not blaming him.

wait..so ur part starts at 2:13 rite?

my suggestions:
a) increase dB of ur vocals.
b) mixing needs to improve.
c) emotions were prolly there but i cudn't feel it since i cudn't quite hear it well..i guess it got to deal w/ ur pronunciation.
d) flow gotta improve.
i expect a lot from u man. keep it up though.

shit is reol. feelin this homeboii. props.

AKProductions wrote:rgb: i cudn't work on that beat at all. my dad is crazy..he knows nothing but education..anyway i'm not blaming him.

wait..so ur part starts at 2:13 rite?

my suggestions:
a) increase dB of ur vocals.
b) mixing needs to improve.
c) emotions were prolly there but i cudn't feel it since i cudn't quite hear it well..i guess it got to deal w/ ur pronunciation.
d) flow gotta improve.
i expect a lot from u man. keep it up though.

@ no. 1 aye man its a quick track so i didnt care that much
@ no.2 same answer
@ no.3 yea i knw i just rushed ova the mic man, and btw lyrics toh track er shathe dawa
@ no. 4 i will work on that man for sure

@ rest :
yea man um working on it,i hope to pay you gud

lil ping wrote:shit is reol. feelin this homeboii. props.

thanks crew

well increeasing dB takes literally 5 seconds as u know and mixing would not take more than 5 minutes..but if u say it was THAT quick of atrack..i'll take ur words for it haha.

AKProductions wrote:well increeasing dB takes literally 5 seconds as u know and mixing would not take more than 5 minutes..but if u say it was THAT quick of atrack..i'll take ur words for it haha.

it kinda was that quick
i finished it b4 going for my AS quizs

felt it!!!! tha setting ws nice n all though ur verse shudda been clearer....tha story ius sumthng u knw wat i mean

Slaught Daddy wrote:felt it!!!! tha setting ws nice n all though ur verse shudda been clearer....tha story ius sumthng u knw wat i mean

aye man i knw ,koilam nah its a quick track
yea the story is a story