Broken lust (acoustic)

ma first acoustic track... verrry simple..
ma bf played... n we both made it randomly..

http://www.4shared.com/file/221398574/1e962c5a/Broken_lust__xefer_.html

sayin dis for da 100th tym...u shud stik 2 dis kinda stuff rather than hip hop. goin ryt 2 ma iphone. IT WZ AWESUM!!!

TheRiddler wrote:sayin dis for da 100th tym...u shud stik 2 dis kinda stuff rather than hip hop. goin ryt 2 ma iphone. IT WZ AWESUM!!!

yaa agree wid u Riddler

it waz awesum...........................

i remember u showed it to me before. so i already said u abt the whole mixing issue hehe.
other than those. good stuff. u guys cud've tried to get a drummer and jam together nicely. or maybe even a keyboardist who cud make sum background 'orchestral chorus or fxs' and such.

@riddler- hey thnx alot man.. n i gave a speech few days back..
i think u ve missed it..here it is hehe ((N I WANNA SAY SOMTHIN) lol... i truely respect ur comments... but see it aint necessary
to only sing for a singer..i believe.. where um already good I GUESS.. i shudnt be dat bothered bout dat... i shud try other stuffz where um not good enuf.... am i wrong?? i ll be a good singer as well as a good rapper inshallah...
datz wat i want.. i appreciate ur advices it helps me alot... so plzz feel free to write bout ma faults so i can rectify em... thnx)

Castic M!k- thnx

ak- yea.. hehhehe.. thnx

naw now dat i think abt it..ur ryt actually... experimentin is gud... i myself used 2 b in2 rock n a lot of oder genres b4 i movd 2 hip hop... n id criticize this trak bt itz jz perfect MashAllah...so i take bak the only sing comment.. u experiment and u find wad ur gud at... daz da way to go

i appreciate.. riddler lotta ppl said to join gothic genre..
they say ma voice suits there.. n i decided to do all kinda music... gothic, hiphop, rock, etc etc lol but not death metal!!! um scared of dat...lol

my point is..it's great that u wanna do all types of genres..but hope u can keep up with improving all these differnt genres at thesame time and still sound like pro in all of them. u hv a good vocal no doubt..but I wudn't say u r perffect yet u know (i know u aint saying that either) and hope u can keep up with working on ur rhymes, creating a flow of ur own (to an extent), getting into the correct emotions and then be a very constant singer with perfect pitch-hitting abilitiy and flexibility to vary your emotions in the same song if required.

ok idk if i make any sense whatsoever lol. if i dont. ignore it.

some times simple tings turn out to b great n dis is one o dm,love ur vocal n da acoustic was assum!! gotta say i gotta a lotta respect for you, assum track

loved da playing

nice trak..luvd ur singing..

TraK-STA & theD.A.. thnx guyz