I GOTTA DREAM----<[[DEMONIC]]>

U kno one of those tyms dat realization comes crashing down to as u r driving along at night dat ur lyf hasnt improved much frm the last tym u stopped to luk....this TRACK is a result of one such moment....each word of the track is frm the real me.....no pretension....

I tried to improve on my mistakes from last tym....how far i've improved is fo u to decide

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LYRICS:
Intro:

life teaches u a lotta lessons
u either sit up and listen or get f*ed up by it

Hook:

Chk dat beat chk dat flo
Eat ma dust as i go
Along the highway
and doin it my way
As i keep it fresh
on the mike on the beat
in the club on the street
i b the reppin the desh

Verse 1:

As i be cruisin the city
in my beat up old car
i stop to think how far
i've come frm dat day
wen i lived in dat house
and had bills to pay.....
now i live in a betta house
but got more bills to pay
things only seemed to change
but they stayed the same way

No no no Dont brigga get me wrong
i aint one o dem
who keep akin fo mo
but i want dat dough
and i want the peace
yeah i want the peace
that comes along wit it
As i m makin this song
I m dreamin of the tym
i wud be able
wit the food on the table
to provide ma family
all the luxury
cars and cribs and jewellry
Brutha all i wan is 2 lead a rich mans lyf
who say money dont count
don kno bout the strife
bout the pain
and abt the strain
and abt the whole insane blame game
the lack of it causes
starts the arguments.
and how it rips apart familes
and how we all,yeh we all,
gotta liv with it

Hook:

Chk dat beat chk dat flo
Eat ma dust as i go
Along the highway
and doin it my way
As i keep it fresh
on the mike on the beat
in the club on the street
i b the reppin the desh


Verse2:
I gots no crown
i gots no cashes
i belong to the ordinary
one of the masses
As i stand on the pavement
to cross the road
A red mazda roars by
on his side a broad
No brigga dont gett me wrong
i dont want no ho
but i want dat lyf
no worries no stife
So much money in the bank
dat the bankers cant count
money sex cars
and nobody to account....
Now brigga lemme tell u
I got a dream.....
to get a piece of the cream
to belong to societies upper stream...
to make big bucks and get a car....
and a lyf marvellous spectacular.....
and u kno ma thoughts they are
achievable.
pura chestah korchi amr shopno puron korte
nemechi ami ei jibon juddhe
nemechi ami ei juddho joy korte
kintu koyek shomoi kothin ei pothe
cholte cholte
hoye jai klanto
money hoy keu jodi janto
bolte jodi partam kauke
ekla ami lorchi keu nei je pashe
ekla ami lorchi gota duniyar shathe


Hook:

Chk dat beat chk dat flo
Eat ma dust as i go
Along the highway
and doin it my way
As i keep it fresh
on the mike on the beat
in the club on the street
i b the reppin the desh

Why did you double post it????

oops.......sorry.....mistake........

btw how wz the song bruv.....

no comments on the song...come on ppl....gimme sum advice or tell me whether u lyked it or not............

Hook, verse(s) don't stand out. Very repetitive. Don't know what else to say.

daym!!

Dude tat was kinda disheartening... Nice try though... I did not likethe vocal effects and flo wasnt gud



but hey keep trying you can do it

y wz it "disheartening"?

i;ll try 2 improve further...........