Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!]

ur lyrix r always so beautiful....ur flow needs a lil more wrk tho..yer almost der jst a lil more wrk.....bt tha hooks were pretty tyt...

ok... ur improvin again MashAllah... i like this... i like the lines on da 1st verse "kono chinta chara amar bithre jolte thake
okritoggo bhabhe amar chetona chire tane" coz theres kind of little singing-tune to it...
bt don try it too much ..it's kind of a risk...

Hooks are simply beautiful!!!... good idea with the wide panning u did on the hooks makes it sound HARD HITTIN!...

among problems i'd say... there are some problems with the adlibs overlappin in one or 2 places... in the 2nd verse....
and what equipment are u using? condenser with a preamp? coz the whole track sounds kinda muffled up which it shudnt if ur using a concenser and a pre-amp or any good soundcard... u kno abt hi-mid-lows obviously.... well it sounds like the hi and lo were brought down which gives the track that muffled up ...ummm...unclear feelin.... it shoud be sharp and crisp u kno....

and thank God u didnt use autotune on this1... forget autotune man... u shud go for this kinda energetic hookz...
overall gr8 improvement MashAllah....bt dont stop now coz u got a long way to go and u got the potential to make it to the end...keep up!

bella li!!! spacca il pezzo pero secondo me potevi migliorare delle cose nel senso ke il testo ritornello e apposto ma forse nelL'eQuiliz hai tenuto leggermente piu alto i medi.. xo complimenti

thanks guys for the feed backs...it's funny how a track made in half an hour became a good track...thanks guys for the support...and in this one I should improve the mixing but since I did this one in a hurry I didn't have the time though....mc ns you're right I didn't spent much time on the mixing...maybe I'll try to fix shit up...when I have the time...

And yeah bout the mid and shit...I tried to give it a vintage flavour but since I did it in a hurry i messed up everything bout the quality..the next one's gonna be crystal clear...thanks ridler you're absolutely right bout the mixing...I used a behringer 101 preamp and a proel condensor mic with the fast track audio interface...initially the quality was pretty tight I was amazed my self but when I started to do the mastering I messed up everything...and I didn't have much time...however I decided as Ridler said to forget outotune....

I like this track....Lyric is rilly impressive...........good wrk man u r improved (Y)

wad up with this last track thing ?

mc shanz wrote:wad up with this last track thing ?

what you mean???you were refferrring to the fast track??/if so it's an external audio intaerface which porpuse is to convert analog signal to digital for good home recording of course is not pro stuff but it's really good for any rapper...


any way thanks for the feeds...

Wafi wrote:

mc shanz wrote:wad up with this last track thing ?

what you mean???you were refferrring to the fast track??/if so it's an external audio intaerface which porpuse is to convert analog signal to digital for good home recording of course is not pro stuff but it's really good for any rapper...


any way thanks for the feeds...

lol nah man i mean u wrote that here is my last track so i asked y last ? u'll not drop any tracks nemore ? :S

mc shanz wrote:

Wafi wrote:

mc shanz wrote:wad up with this last track thing ?

what you mean???you were refferrring to the fast track??/if so it's an external audio intaerface which porpuse is to convert analog signal to digital for good home recording of course is not pro stuff but it's really good for any rapper...


any way thanks for the feeds...

lol nah man i mean u wrote that here is my last track so i asked y last ? u'll not drop any tracks nemore ? :S

lol...With last track I meant last track that I made...

ok guys...I remastered it...now it should sound crystal clear...sharp without that muddy effect..now it's totally fixed... http://www.4shared.com/audio/QcA9Qzgw/Agun.html
download and enjoy...and remember to leave some feeds!!!