Wafi-Agun (Pt. 2)

just take a listen...

http://www.divshare.com/download/13147844-323

Do I really have to post the lyrics??

I've finally written the words from paper to keyboard...just in case..


Hook x 2

Agun amar bithre jole
mathar bithre pure agun
amar shate kotha bole
Agun amar shate chole
pure amar moner bithre
agun amar ay shuray


Verse 1:

onubhob koro amar obhishapto shobdo
ratrir alor majhe thakee ami ondho
jannat er roktay baje amar konto
amar ekti kotha banay 100 ti chock bondho

hate ekti kolom mane boro ekti ostro
amar lekha kotha holo tomader rokto
aee kolom er kalee holo sposhto
jalalo ekso t kaner majhe koshto

jole jole jole jole jole amar mone ragh
protiti kothay pure bishakto nisshash
amar kolomer kalee banay notun hishab
ay prithibir majhe amar lekha obhishab

thanda jogote jole koshter bhaap
akash patal er majhe bhashe ay naam
mrittu bohon kore amar shesh nisshash
ar aee kotha bohon kore mrittur bichaar


Hook x 2

Agun amar bithre jole
mathar bithre pure agun
amar shate kotha bole
Agun amar shate chole
pure amar moner bhitray
agun amar ay shuray


Verse 2:
nirob neel roktay bhora ay lekha
kolomer betha holo amar ragher khela
dekha hobe porokale tomader shate
kintu ay jogota cholona amar pashe

roktakto hate bajaee jolonto bajna
amar ekti kotha bajay dojokar chitkaar
ondho shunnotar majhe naee kono bisshash
sikol badha gola theke jolonto kobita

amar roktakto kothar nae kono shimana
besto shohoray shob dike amar thikana
amar konto bhashe batasher shate
tomader majhe tale tale ratrir shate

tomra thako shomajer sikole bondhi
amee ta dekhe mone mone hashee
shomajer dure othitir majhe amee thake
akasher dike jolonto kotha chure maree


Hook x 2

Agun amar bithre jole
mathar bithre pure agun
amar shate kotha bole
Agun amar shate chole
pure amar moner bhitray
agun amar ay shuray

Lmao i downloaded your track and guess wat ? The track that is downloaded is "Statixx--Like-This"...

I guess you should upload it on 4shared or Mediafire..

mc shanz wrote:Lmao i downloaded your track and guess wat ? The track that is downloaded is "Statixx--Like-This"...

I guess you should upload it on 4shared or Mediafire..

wow sorry wrong link...now it's fixed...just put the right one...
sorry you can check it out now!

like it...................

wtf wtf wtf..
dont diss me ...
bt bro totally wong choice of beat and flow and deliveery to match with your content... your talkin hard shit on a cheesy bouncy reggaeish beat.duzn sell..i mean i cud hear u nd think of dose cheesy non-res-bangaliz singing soomething like

meye tumi jano tumi hott...
ami tani pot, bottle theke mari shots...

duzn goooo duznn gooo

and wtf? jole jole jole jole amaar mon er agun?? okay..ur suppozd to be maad/driven when u say that...not like its something so funn and entertaining... i soundz lyk ur doin da one-foot-side-step hop dance singing dat partt....

lyrics is prolly good..bt lyk i sed..nothing else is...choicess gotta get worked on

uhm...I din' diss you actually...why people think I diss them?


oh and by the way...I thought this one was a good one...I made Mode Silver hear it and he said this was a dope track so I thought it was good...

well guess it wasn't that good... ...

so anybody else heard it?

octa: where the hell did he diss u? lol
wafi: don't get me wrong..this is my honest feed and prolly really pointless post...but basically, the beat of the song jst totally distracted me..where did u get this beat man? i don't hate on beats....but this beat was just..idk..very irritating to my ear? small things in song makes me very happy..and vice versa..this beat just distracted me.

lyrics: have you heard songs by Rajotto? Hear their lyrics...those lyrics just stand out big time coz those lyrics are just pure art. You have good concepts and I know you are trying, but idk if you are looking into stepping up your vocabulary and bengali word play/structure..i think that should be your focus if you wanna step up your game..again that's prolly jst me.

flow..very generic flow..idk it sounds weird to me..try to see if u can add more variations to the flow..switch stuff up..but that's prolly that beat which got me all distracted. you are improving fast though..that's totally apparent..this song isn't just hitting it for me.

AKProductions wrote:octa: where the hell did he diss u? lol
wafi: don't get me wrong..this is my honest feed and prolly really pointless post...but basically, the beat of the song jst totally distracted me..where did u get this beat man? i don't hate on beats....but this beat was just..idk..very irritating to my ear? small things in song makes me very happy..and vice versa..this beat just distracted me.

lyrics: have you heard songs by Rajotto? Hear their lyrics...those lyrics just stand out big time coz those lyrics are just pure art. You have good concepts and I know you are trying, but idk if you are looking into stepping up your vocabulary and bengali word play/structure..i think that should be your focus if you wanna step up your game..again that's prolly jst me.

flow..very generic flow..idk it sounds weird to me..try to see if u can add more variations to the flow..switch stuff up..but that's prolly that beat which got me all distracted. you are improving fast though..that's totally apparent..this song isn't just hitting it for me.

shittt...I thought it was good...allright...allright I'll try harder...

Skull.b wrote:like it...................

thanks man

DAYUMM!!!!! dude...thats one of the swaggest bangla lyrix i heard and flow wuz awesome too....keep steamin ahead...ur on the perfect path.....LOVED IT MAYN....

lol noo!
dont diss me = dont get madd at me after readingg my postt
and yes a.kayy..the beat was da cheesy regaetton-half-english-wannabe-bangla-rapperish!!

wafi: for bengali spittin'..my favorite right now are..Black Zang, Jeexo, Kuzz. compare urself with them and see how u can improve.

AKProductions wrote:wafi: for bengali spittin'..my favorite right now are..Black Zang, Jeexo, Kuzz. compare urself with them and see how u can improve.

Ak man no offense but I don't like none of em'...I mean spitting in raw bangla like korsi morsi porsi...sounds weeeeird to me...plus bangla ain't fit for doin' rap...
other then that I won't do bangla songs for a long ass time...probably I won't do any song for a long ass time..gotta stepp up my game...most probably I'll concetrate on english for a while...
bout the pronunciation thing:

check out some of this old songs of mine:

http://www.4shared.com/audio/dMfRxSpa/Hope.html

http://www.4shared.com/audio/IHLYQmFf/So_sexy.html


I think when I use that steady flow with my normal and thick voice pronunciation sounds wayyyy better then "heavy artillery"...let me know what you think man...

Octa wrote:wafi: lol noo!
dont diss me = dont get madd at me after readingg my postt
and yes a.kayy..the beat was da cheesy regaetton-half-english-wannabe-bangla-rapperish!!

aite got it bro...and yeah to be frank I WAS pretty high when I recorded it...next time I'll choose the beat more wisely...

Demonic wrote:DAYUMM!!!!! dude...thats one of the swaggest bangla lyrix i heard and flow wuz awesome too....keep steamin ahead...ur on the perfect path.....LOVED IT MAYN....

thanks man... ...do I really deserve it hmh...aite next time I'll try harder...

ooooooooooooohhhhh fra senti qst qua ke fa musika religiosa : cha un flo da paniko kazzz https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gooGU7xZu1Q