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''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC

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TheRiddler
mc shanz
ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
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M@D
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1''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Empty ''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:23 am

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

SUP GUYZ ? our crew jst complete whole 1 year it was formed in 4th july 2009 .So we cam back wid a new track abt our crew and our journey .

HERE IS THE DOWNLOAD LINK: http://hulkshare.com/d1ldcp3opixd


1st Verse :M@D
2nd VERSE :MIK
HOOK:M@D


HOPE U GUYZ WILL LIKE THIS TRACK
PLZ LEAVE U R HONEST FEEDBACK

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[P][R][O]
Moderator
Moderator

more swagger required for this song.a gangster swag particularly.verses need good working on delivery and diction.it was uninteresting.
hook was okay.i am happy you ppl are improving but very slowly lol anyway u guys are late bloomers prolly haha :p

http://pro27.4shared.com

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

hmmm...swag n clarity was scarce....flow on verse 1 was good, so was verse 2 but ken jan i ektu kan e lag e gan ta...hooks bhaloi..u guys are getting there really fast, don dissapoint us lol Razz

mc shanz

mc shanz
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

yeah i would also like to agree with PRO's feed a gangsta swag can giv it a gr8 flavour..but good track bro (Y) keep it up...

http://www.4shared.com/dir/29059115/8a903d3c/D_Hood_Squad_-_DHS.

TheRiddler

TheRiddler
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

improvin.... keep goin guys... pro is rite abt the swag thing... n put sum emotion into it ... keep it up!.



Last edited by TheRiddler on Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:32 pm; edited 1 time in total

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

thanx guyz . we will try our best to improve more.....

Mr.Bling

Mr.Bling
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

emotion nd more swagg is needed,other dan dat,diggin da 1st verse,nd u gotta improve ur lyrics

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

thanx bling ..

Rh Rakzo BurnXai

Rh Rakzo BurnXai
King Of Rhymes
King Of Rhymes

gud wrk bt u shud put mo energy in it... & u guys need 2 wrk on ur Hooks .. ovr all ..keep it up

http://Banglishcataclysm.4shared.com/

10''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: ''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Thu Jul 08, 2010 3:53 pm

Castic M!k

Castic M!k
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

ok thanx for u r feedback bro ... we will work on it .

11''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: ''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:27 pm

Wafi

Wafi
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

got nothing to say eccept what have already been said...keep on practicing and you'll get what you want...keep it up man...

12''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: ''CYTROCASTIC_BEGINS'' BY CYTROCASTIC Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:32 pm

Castic M!k

Castic M!k
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

thanx bro .

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