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'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC

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Castic M!k
ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
SaD1k
Norwester Sharod
Mr.Bling
nylos_mentalmc
Wafi
WolFizzLA
mc shanz
M@D
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1'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:12 am

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

wadz up ppl ? we are back with a new track

HOOK:M@D,MIK
1st verse :M@D
2nd verse : MIK


DOWNLOAD LINK : http://hulkshare.com/9k8umslf20xp

LEAVE UR HONEST FEEDBACK !!!!



Last edited by M@D on Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:39 pm; edited 1 time in total

mc shanz

mc shanz
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

Nice track guys...You guys are rilly improvin....Choose more good beats n post up the lyric.....

http://www.4shared.com/dir/29059115/8a903d3c/D_Hood_Squad_-_DHS.

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

thanx bro and ya i will

WolFizzLA

WolFizzLA
King Of Rhymes
King Of Rhymes

post up the lyrics plz... i couldn't understand much except fo' the hooks... (lick it very slow o lick it very slow o)... keep practising... spit with more clarity...

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

ok bro .

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

HERE IS THE LYRICS

INTRO - M@D

HOOK-
LICK IT VERY SLOW OOW -LICK IT VERY SLOW OOW

1st Verse
MAD-

Drop it down low when i hit the floor
Wid da hit em in the flow i blow the glow/
i ma hittem wid a sound costing 100 pound
Like a bitten in the ass from a crazy hound/
as a chiken in the as from a high roling bass
Given with the slash in the crazy mixed crash/
hittem with da race in a 3d sonic trash
ultrasonic movemint feels like mind freeking crash/
crazy mind freeks dont understand da pain
lik em like a bird then show whats the gain/
in the end they'l feel the true hell a drama
cause the moves on them to end this TRAUMA (Acting)/
The world moves around a fast moven train
to understand the meaning u gotta hav sum brain/
in this midnight game there is some pain
BUT without fast lyrics u dont get FAME!!/


{HOOK}
LICK IT VERY SLOW OOW -LICK IT VERY SLOW OOW

2nd Verse
MIk-

all the bitches gettin jelous by hearin ma dope tracks
i will hit em wid ma rhymes to make their brain cracks/
bitches makin fake accounts to show themself as a real fags
itz all abt the rap skillz that does their brain lacks/
ak minitue stage upra kharai dak tor jan jai hala puira
mic hat thaika poira jai toi halai akta buira/
ki mona korsos toi mainshara pochai toi jaibi uidha ?
kaw kicho kawar aga toi dibi hala dibi moitta/
i climed a lot now i got the last step to climb
ur only at the bottom bitch bt i left the whole ladder behind/


{HOOK}

7'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:09 am

Wafi

Wafi
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

lyrics are all right but not strucking...flow and stuffs all right..you guys are improving but need a lot more to improve...mixing and mastering were mediocre...I didn't understand a thing without lyrics...best of luck for your future projects and keep at it...

8'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:11 am

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

ok thanx bro

9'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:29 am

nylos_mentalmc

nylos_mentalmc
DeshiRhymes Battle Champion
DeshiRhymes Battle Champion

lyrics need improvement... fast lyrics need to make sense @ mad... and ur nursery rhyming @ castik..

beat selection was dreadful... honestly i have no idea wat u guys were trynna say in this track =S... honestly it seems lyk ur telling ur haters to give u a blowjob =S

improv needed

10'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 1:54 am

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

nylos_mentalmc wrote:lyrics need improvement... fast lyrics need to make sense @ mad... and ur nursery rhyming @ castik..

beat selection was dreadful... honestly i have no idea wat u guys were trynna say in this track =S... honestly it seems lyk ur telling ur haters to give u a blowjob =S

improv needed


lol ok nylos we will

11'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:35 am

Mr.Bling

Mr.Bling
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

guys,u went wayy outta da topic of dis track,wen i saw da name i thought it was gnna be a nice slow seductive track,ut when i heard da beat,its a rockitpro gangsta shit,guyz,chosse better beats,or else u cud make a gangsta track wiv dis beat,or cud diss some1(like zx),bad choosing of bet.lyrics weren't dat gud,da hooks"lick it very slow",i cudn't get wat to lick vry slow,r u tellin a hoe to lick ur dick very slow?or sumfinelse,guyz,u dis appointed me dis time,when i saw da name,i thought its gnna be sumfin good.nd yeah,u guys got prb in recording,may be da enviroment u record aint good,or u guys dnt knw how to hold da mic,nd as u r usin normal mics,u guys gotta do sum proper mixing to increase da clarity,nd mik,seriously,ur lyrics didnt even make no sense,1 time u r tellin bout brain cracks nd shits,den ur tellin dat guy a buira,i mean wat fuck shud dat mean??make gud lyrics,nd stay within da topic.nd i kinda liked mad's fast flow,but da words were unclear,nd mik,u sound dat u wanna make ur voice sound fatter,so i can catch da fake voice,dis hampers ur flow,man don do dis fake voice,juss go wiv ur normal voice,or u can juss scream.newayz dis track wasn't gud,personally i think its wack,ur previous tracks were bttr.....

12'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:41 am

Norwester Sharod

Norwester Sharod
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

nylos_mentalmc wrote:lyrics need improvement... fast lyrics need to make sense @ mad... and ur nursery rhyming @ castik..

beat selection was dreadful... honestly i have no idea wat u guys were trynna say in this track =S... honestly it seems lyk ur telling ur haters to give u a blowjob =S

improv needed


lol!

13'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:23 pm

SaD1k

SaD1k
Micnificent!
Micnificent!

Hmmmmm afta seein da lyrics i felt lyk itz good...Afta seein da chorus i felt lyk wat da fuck, Chorus ato seductiv r rap fast????Afta hearin da trak woooooooo u need major improvements in all o da followin sections....i think verse aga lekhsos ar chorus pore...aga chorus lekhle verse-er shathe akta sync hoy in which u lacked...N Hit it up da idea wass gud.....keep it up bro....and da beat it was god but in section of Ganxta shiittt no club....
Peace Out

14'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:25 am

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

hmm the hook went out the topic thanx every 1 for ur honest feedz

15'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:17 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

..



Last edited by ZX l)@ G@lvl3r on Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:54 pm; edited 1 time in total

16'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:17 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

lyrical improvement needed...it WAS adequet, but m@d's fast rap lacked meaning....but it wasn't bad realy Smile

n guys, MATCH THE HOOK WID DA VERSE !! Neutral ur lyrics have nothing to do with licking "it"...-_-...

previous tracks were better, but this beat was kinda hard to go on anywayz Smile

17'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:22 pm

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

hmm .. thanx zx for ur honest feed .

18'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:50 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

Mr.Bling aka fag man Smile wrote:guys,u went wayy outta da topic of dis track,wen i saw da name i thought it was gnna be a nice slow seductive track,ut when i heard da beat,its a rockitpro gangsta shit,guyz,chosse better beats,or else u cud make a gangsta track wiv dis beat,or cud diss some1(like zx),bad choosing of bet.lyrics weren't dat gud,da hooks"lick it very slow",i cudn't get wat to lick vry slow,r u tellin a hoe to lick ur dick very slow?or sumfinelse,guyz,u dis appointed me dis time,when i saw da name,i thought its gnna be sumfin good.nd yeah,u guys got prb in recording,may be da enviroment u record aint good,or u guys dnt knw how to hold da mic,nd as u r usin normal mics,u guys gotta do sum proper mixing to increase da clarity,nd mik,seriously,ur lyrics didnt even make no sense,1 time u r tellin bout brain cracks nd shits,den ur tellin dat guy a buira,i mean wat fuck shud dat mean??make gud lyrics,nd stay within da topic.nd i kinda liked mad's fast flow,but da words were unclear,nd mik,u sound dat u wanna make ur voice sound fatter,so i can catch da fake voice,dis hampers ur flow,man don do dis fake voice,juss go wiv ur normal voice,or u can juss scream.newayz dis track wasn't gud,personally i think its wack,ur previous tracks were bttr.....

dude, u continue to be the annoying pest u were, but still refuse
to come face to face, lmfao Razz
shut the fuck up, n avoid beef if u keep avoiding a
face to face confrontation - im hoping u even fucking UNDERSTAND english
like this though Smile
tc n tx

19'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:20 pm

Mr.Bling

Mr.Bling
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:
Mr.Bling aka fag man Smile wrote:guys,u went wayy outta da topic of dis track,wen i saw da name i thought it was gnna be a nice slow seductive track,ut when i heard da beat,its a rockitpro gangsta shit,guyz,chosse better beats,or else u cud make a gangsta track wiv dis beat,or cud diss some1(like zx),bad choosing of bet.lyrics weren't dat gud,da hooks"lick it very slow",i cudn't get wat to lick vry slow,r u tellin a hoe to lick ur dick very slow?or sumfinelse,guyz,u dis appointed me dis time,when i saw da name,i thought its gnna be sumfin good.nd yeah,u guys got prb in recording,may be da enviroment u record aint good,or u guys dnt knw how to hold da mic,nd as u r usin normal mics,u guys gotta do sum proper mixing to increase da clarity,nd mik,seriously,ur lyrics didnt even make no sense,1 time u r tellin bout brain cracks nd shits,den ur tellin dat guy a buira,i mean wat fuck shud dat mean??make gud lyrics,nd stay within da topic.nd i kinda liked mad's fast flow,but da words were unclear,nd mik,u sound dat u wanna make ur voice sound fatter,so i can catch da fake voice,dis hampers ur flow,man don do dis fake voice,juss go wiv ur normal voice,or u can juss scream.newayz dis track wasn't gud,personally i think its wack,ur previous tracks were bttr.....

dude, u continue to be the annoying pest u were, but still refuse
to come face to face, lmfao Razz
shut the fuck up, n avoid beef if u keep avoiding a
face to face confrontation - im hoping u even fucking UNDERSTAND english
like this though Smile
tc n tx

fuk u loser,nobodys talkin to u,stay outta ma way,u juss sucked in an album,donch u feel shame??nd yeah,for dissin,u nd jaward r da best xamples.

20'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:07 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r
Divine Poster
Divine Poster

Mr.Bling wrote:
ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:
Mr.Bling aka fag man Smile wrote:guys,u went wayy outta da topic of dis track,wen i saw da name i thought it was gnna be a nice slow seductive track,ut when i heard da beat,its a rockitpro gangsta shit,guyz,chosse better beats,or else u cud make a gangsta track wiv dis beat,or cud diss some1(like zx),bad choosing of bet.lyrics weren't dat gud,da hooks"lick it very slow",i cudn't get wat to lick vry slow,r u tellin a hoe to lick ur dick very slow?or sumfinelse,guyz,u dis appointed me dis time,when i saw da name,i thought its gnna be sumfin good.nd yeah,u guys got prb in recording,may be da enviroment u record aint good,or u guys dnt knw how to hold da mic,nd as u r usin normal mics,u guys gotta do sum proper mixing to increase da clarity,nd mik,seriously,ur lyrics didnt even make no sense,1 time u r tellin bout brain cracks nd shits,den ur tellin dat guy a buira,i mean wat fuck shud dat mean??make gud lyrics,nd stay within da topic.nd i kinda liked mad's fast flow,but da words were unclear,nd mik,u sound dat u wanna make ur voice sound fatter,so i can catch da fake voice,dis hampers ur flow,man don do dis fake voice,juss go wiv ur normal voice,or u can juss scream.newayz dis track wasn't gud,personally i think its wack,ur previous tracks were bttr.....

dude, u continue to be the annoying pest u were, but still refuse
to come face to face, lmfao Razz
shut the fuck up, n avoid beef if u keep avoiding a
face to face confrontation - im hoping u even fucking UNDERSTAND english
like this though Smile
tc n tx

fuk u loser,nobodys talkin to u,stay outta ma way,u juss sucked in an album,donch u feel shame??nd yeah,for dissin,u nd jaward r da best xamples.

feaking faggot if u looking for beef AND u continue to speak like an idiot bout others, then u R talking u luzer -_-
all u do is talk tough over the net but stay away from a confrontation in person
dude, if u can stop the beef n get ur sorry ass saved, otherwise get fucked up luzer :@

21'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:28 am

Castic M!k

Castic M!k
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

eyy guyz stop fighting !!!!

22'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:55 am

Mr.Bling

Mr.Bling
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:
Mr.Bling wrote:
ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:
Mr.Bling aka fag man Smile wrote:guys,u went wayy outta da topic of dis track,wen i saw da name i thought it was gnna be a nice slow seductive track,ut when i heard da beat,its a rockitpro gangsta shit,guyz,chosse better beats,or else u cud make a gangsta track wiv dis beat,or cud diss some1(like zx),bad choosing of bet.lyrics weren't dat gud,da hooks"lick it very slow",i cudn't get wat to lick vry slow,r u tellin a hoe to lick ur dick very slow?or sumfinelse,guyz,u dis appointed me dis time,when i saw da name,i thought its gnna be sumfin good.nd yeah,u guys got prb in recording,may be da enviroment u record aint good,or u guys dnt knw how to hold da mic,nd as u r usin normal mics,u guys gotta do sum proper mixing to increase da clarity,nd mik,seriously,ur lyrics didnt even make no sense,1 time u r tellin bout brain cracks nd shits,den ur tellin dat guy a buira,i mean wat fuck shud dat mean??make gud lyrics,nd stay within da topic.nd i kinda liked mad's fast flow,but da words were unclear,nd mik,u sound dat u wanna make ur voice sound fatter,so i can catch da fake voice,dis hampers ur flow,man don do dis fake voice,juss go wiv ur normal voice,or u can juss scream.newayz dis track wasn't gud,personally i think its wack,ur previous tracks were bttr.....

dude, u continue to be the annoying pest u were, but still refuse
to come face to face, lmfao Razz
shut the fuck up, n avoid beef if u keep avoiding a
face to face confrontation - im hoping u even fucking UNDERSTAND english
like this though Smile
tc n tx

fuk u loser,nobodys talkin to u,stay outta ma way,u juss sucked in an album,donch u feel shame??nd yeah,for dissin,u nd jaward r da best xamples.

feaking faggot if u looking for beef AND u continue to speak like an idiot bout others, then u R talking u luzer -_-
all u do is talk tough over the net but stay away from a confrontation in person
dude, if u can stop the beef n get ur sorry ass saved, otherwise get fucked up luzer :@

lets see wat u do faggot face,abr harar ichha ase/how can a person be so much fnd of loosin,so all da ppl here,hum shud i consider a loser den?me or da gamer kid?hu keeps fighting to a kid 2 yrs younger den him,nd also lost a battle to him..... '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Icon_rolleyes '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Icon_rolleyes '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Icon_rolleyes

lameold Faggot face,u seriuosly need to get a life....
u juss got a shot to rap in an album by licking oder's ass...
ekta album chodaiya ato parrt??natkirpola chup chaap boiya thaak,ar tor album er track shun,karon tor track tui chhara ar keo shunbe nah...

23'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:04 am

nylos_mentalmc

nylos_mentalmc
DeshiRhymes Battle Champion
DeshiRhymes Battle Champion

FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT

C'MON SIT BEHIND A COMPUTER AND RIP EACH OTHER OFF ON THE INTERNET!!

YEAH.... CUZ ***THATS*** HARDCORE AND GANGSTUH!!! HMPH xD

24'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:49 pm

M@D

M@D
Elevated Rhymer
Elevated Rhymer

nylos_mentalmc wrote:FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT

C'MON SIT BEHIND A COMPUTER AND RIP EACH OTHER OFF ON THE INTERNET!!

YEAH.... CUZ ***THATS*** HARDCORE AND GANGSTUH!!! HMPH xD


lol! lol!

25'' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Empty Re: '' LICK_IT_VERY_SLOW '' - CYTROCASTIC Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:14 pm

Wafi

Wafi
Official Rhymer
Official Rhymer

nylos_mentalmc wrote:FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT

C'MON SIT BEHIND A COMPUTER AND RIP EACH OTHER OFF ON THE INTERNET!!

YEAH.... CUZ ***THATS*** HARDCORE AND GANGSTUH!!! HMPH xD
lol! lol! lol! lol! afro
yeah and when you ask them to come over your place and face you face to face..they don't have the guts to reply...lol...

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