The Phantom<------------Vs------------>Infmous

rules:

20 bars each (the number of lines)

must be broken into lines
for example:

this will not be taken

"these punk ass nikkaz wont see me retire, cuz i burn'em like CD writers, compare me to a dragon cuz i breath these fires, and i'm so past u i see you in diapers,"

no biting (you can't steal someone's rhymes")

no comebacks (whoever is last, can't diss the first person cuz of wah they said or how he typed it out)

IF ANY RULES ARE BROKEN, THEN YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED

vote's will be taking as brackets

Flow:
Punches:
Wordplay:
Mulites:
Vocabulary:
Overall:

NO DICKRIDING VOTES!

can't vote for yourself

and u have to explain why u chose that person.

i'll put up a poll but, the votes will be counted on the bracket system

first to 5 wins

til then, let the best man win

ps. the poll runs for 10 dayz, afta that it closes automatically, if theres not enuf votes by then il reopen it

COol good lookin out, ill have my shit posted by 2morro.

take ur time bra

20 bars... thaz a lil too much... dont u think?



up 2 both of u i guess... juss sayin dat usual battles range from only 4-8 bars.. lol

umm ya alrite phantom ur call i don really care if u wana make it a lil less or not

u kno what les make it 8 bars, cuz then pple will read it, when its too long sometimes pple dont read the whole thing.
8 bars, what u say Infmous?

i agree wiv phantom lol 8 bars

damn, i never seen infmous battle!!!

aite kool itz only a battle, im not gona take nofn personally, n i hope u do tha same.

letz get it on punch for punch, wen im thru u gon b packed lunch//
yeah i smack punkz, bend ur backbone till u hear.. crunch//

i send u back to tha opera, ur shit wackk//
click clak i bust on u nikka, i leave ur head smashed//

get back, i burn tha rest of u nikka, this wer tha flamez att//
trynna busst bak, u cant hit me homey, im supersonic like a blind bat//

u pathetic, setup a fund to get ur face fixed//
dismantle u damage u, then leave u brain dead//

layed out in shredz, u weak nikka, u aint got tha strength to break bread//
in ma double bed, das wer i did u girl, til that bitch bled//

i spit lead, tha worst u spit is saliva, i christen u lil fredd//
im jason, strapped wit a k, blastin thru elm st, u neva pack heatt//

Finisher

beheadin u like an iraqi insurgent, shootin hoopz wit ur head like ma name was jordan//
comin at me will only hurt ur children, ima monster somfin like a gremlin//

anywayz ya may the best man win

Infmous, nice shit homie
feelin the rhymes, but dawgz u gotta come harder on the punches
anyways, any feedbacks??? lol

lol thankz, ur stuff was good too, now werz tha damm votes

lol i think they didnt count this. Oh well, fuk it...u won this

no way......infe it was very gud of u 2 make ur first match.....but infe...man i dont no wht 2 say.....no1 aint evn votin diz 1.....coz evry1 noz who won it.....

The Phantom wrote:lol i think they didnt count this. Oh well, fuk it...u won this

na bro wtf, im not takin it like that man, only bitches take tha way out, i want this finished properly this threadz not gona close till we get tha rite amount of votes.

ok.....ok.....i vote 4 phantom......happy thr.......jus guyz giv da votes quick & finish diz.....diz is gettin kinda borin...coz no1z votin.......

ay infmous, my bad i didnt mean it like that, "i give it to u cuz ure a bitch", naaa dawgzz dont think like that.
cuz i thought u did reaaalllly goood, and u dont spit much. u did really good, thats y u deserve the win.
and Fazze thanks homie. and Fazze, do u have tracks? let me listen to some, and yea yo this shit is gettin borin, no one is commin to this thread, dunno y.

im workin on a track......but recordin is horse shit as usual....tryin ma best 2 fix it....but jus started learnin mixin.....so will need mor time.....& yea ma voice lacks maturity....gotta fix da pitch.....othr thn tht.....evrythingz gud.......& i gotta talk 2 XPLO abt sth......

no doubt, if ya need help, i got u. i produce music too..im workin on Mixtapes righ now.. so yea if anyone needs help with anything, def holler at me!

The Phantom wrote:ay infmous, my bad i didnt mean it like that, "i give it to u cuz ure a bitch", naaa dawgzz dont think like that.
cuz i thought u did reaaalllly goood, and u dont spit much. u did really good, thats y u deserve the win.
and Fazze thanks homie. and Fazze, do u have tracks? let me listen to some, and yea yo this shit is gettin borin, no one is commin to this thread, dunno y.

oh na my bad man i was a lil drunk

hahahah......seriously...........how can u type whn ur hella drunk...

u'd b amazed at wat i can do while im drunk

hahahahahhaha.........damn i cant stop laughin....
**fazze laughs so hard tht he falls of his computer chair 2 da floor & hitz his hands**
now luk wht u done......

lol.

infmous...you came pretty hard for a first battle...kudos to that....and that one line about phantom not being strong enough to break bread was classic lol....hahaha...

with that being said bro...as sick as this first battle was...i'm sure u'll agree that there's a bit of work to do...namely...to focus more on hittin ur opponent...and u know the whole schpiel...practice makes perfect =)..

arite...the categories...

FLOW - Infmous - not necessarily because ur lines were shorter and easier to follow...or that phantom's seemed a wee bit run-on...(at least, when read)...just it seemed more fluid...
MULTIES - Phantom...this is readily apparent...more complex and more consistent use give phantom the nod here..
WORD PLAY - phantom, he had em...infmous didnt have em as much...and infmous will get improve no doubt
PUNCHLINES - while i sincerely think infmous had the best punchline...i think ill go with phantom because of the more consistent use of them...
OVERALL - Phantom

good battle gents...and infmous...keep honin the craft....and soon enough you will be among the cream of the crop