Even darker beat...hehehe

Wafi wrote:hell yeah another dope beat!!

I like the bass/strings. I think the trumpet sound falls really flat. if
you're gonna put horns on that it should be something reallly
brassy/real/loud and bold as fuck.

I like the progression and
idea. I think the tamborine hit in the percussion is kinda weak. I think
a really snappy/tight snare would be pretty good. I also think you
could use your snare roll magic in this track.

something about
the mix is just kind of muddle to me. I think things like the strings
and the high pitched G funk sounding lead tha tcomes in should lay a bit
more in the back, but definitely as part of hte beat. still, I tihnk
this beat is some tight potential and think you sohuld keep working on
it.

I think in the intro, after the horns come on, the percussion
should hold out then a bigass tight snare roll into it would be real
cool. also I think you could put some great snappy high hat in the
background. the quick high hates would give it a good rolling vibe.
maybe even having a long sub bass kick would give it that subby rolling
sound which goes really well (I'd keep the kick you have right now too
over it).

over all I really like this beat and could fuxx with it
when you fuxx with it more. it has a cool sinister vibe.

sorry
to give you a big write up. overall I like the beat tho and I like what
you wrote with it. the string parts are cool but should lay back
further.

AKProductions wrote:haha thanks man. nah i am not that dope and I never really thought of selling them off for real. but i can start thinking of 'leasing' again..i dont care...selling beats dont get u that much money anywya..in terms of dollars.

Castic M!k wrote:awsum beat man ............................. starting was really awsum

AKProductions wrote:lol idk man. well okay..i mean i can surely make 30 bucks here and there..but i dont wanna brag or anything..i make more than that for every hour i'm working in my research lab...again i know i sound like sum fucking douchebag lol. but yeah that's really a reason..relatively...and even if i want to charge...i really need to step up my game....if i was commenting on my own beats...first thing i'd point out wud be: YOUR MIXING FUCKING SUCKS. lol so yeah. As wafi was saying..i really need to take my game to the next level if I wanna make money and take it seriously..but i just really dont wanna do that.

but my beats r hpoefully going to a stage where my local rappers who i admire..which was something i wanted..hell i never and still dont hv goals with beatmaking..i dont take it seriously and wont. i guess that's it lol.